Reborn in Two Lives, Still Dominated by the Darkened Girl

The writing is good and the story is wonderful. The author keeps it up [Love]

Come, the author reads to me my solemn oath: From today on, Never updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. Me I won't play games, I won't be polite, I will be strict with myself, I will cherish my time like gold, Perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving to achieve brilliance, Take pleasure in coding and refine it into steel a hundred times. I am worthy of readers and young people. Spring is worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent writer. I can code diligently. I am The keyboard in the dark, the guard in the Great Wall of Internet, I volunteer Dedicating my life to coding every day, the author reads my solemn oath to me: From today on, Never updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. Me I won't play games, I won't be polite, I will be strict with myself, I will cherish my time like gold, Perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving to achieve brilliance, Take pleasure in coding and refine it into steel a hundred times. I am worthy of readers and young people. Spring is worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent writer. I can code diligently. I am The keyboard in the dark, the guard in the Great Wall of Internet, I volunteer Dedicate your life to your code every day and every night Of course. Here, every night Of course.

The book has been changed beyond recognition. The tomatoes are cooked and then slaughtered. They are healthy, green and safe to eat.

I spent the afternoon reading it in bits and pieces, and here's my brief and objective review. This book will be popular, and the score will never be lower than 8.3 When the chapter reaches 100. It is understandable that the points deduction may be because some games have too many plots. After all, we all love to play games, right? The writing style is very smooth and fresh, and the occasional astringency is also closely related to the theme (bushi). I really like the literary summary at the end of each chapter! Meow's second dimension has awakened (he finally closed his eyes) To put it simply, it is an excellent yandere novel about daily campus love. I bet on my writing experience that I will never regret reading this book. Come on, author, let's be a die-hard fan) Already updated) (Call the author to give a like) Above.

Driving is not ordinary driving, it is driving in Wang Wei's poem

I've seen a few pictures and I think they're ok. I'd like to ask a question, is it a single or a harem? Is the car fast? 👀👀👀🌚

Hello author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has been refusing to eat or talk, nor is he angry at all, with no expression on his face. However, I found that he only laughed and seemed angry when he was reading Tomato novels. Later, I opened his mobile phone when he went to the toilet and found that he has been reading your book recently, and I also found a critical illness notice under his pillow. His time is running out, and I can't do anything for him. The only thing we can do is to pray that the author will update dozens of chapters a day, isn't it too much? I hope you can spend his last days with him and not let him die regretfully, please.

Come on, author, I want to see Little Dark Room.

How can I put it, the book is okay, but some of the writing is too confusing. For example, when some of the words were spoken, I didn't know which ones were said by the protagonist. At first, I thought it was the protagonist who looked at them and said, but suddenly the sentence "Bai Youxia replied" (/_＼)

There aren't too many poisonous points at the moment, and there's no sense of being brainless. Overall, it's good.

Willow branches on the street, Life is still like a monk. People's plans are unpredictable, I wish Rongjiang Yujie. Don't think about me, Always occupy the Dong position in the mountain. Immortals floating on the far water, Have a banquet and remember Yaochi. My heart is full of rain and rain.

It's quite possible. It ranks among the top three or even the first among the yandere articles I've read. I still hope that the protagonist can seize the initiative (after all, the protagonist has no force at all, and abolishing the system will have no effect). No matter what happens, he will not be unable to resist when facing Shen or something. In this aspect, I quite like Luo Jinxi's plot.

Please update the author soon. Without your writing, I can't eat well during the day and sleep well at night. When I look at the stars, I seem to see your shadow. Oh, so majestic. Oh, so tall. Burn yourself. Brother.

I like this writing style very much. Have you read "I Loaded the Love Game" and "My Yellow Hair App"? Let me talk about the things I don't like about it. Although it is to advance the plot (it only represents my personal opinion) ① When going to rescue Shen Ruoling, Luo Jinxi followed him secretly, but was taken as a hostage. Just after the incident was over, right after the male protagonist fell asleep. You have to have some timing when driving [rolls eyes] ② Jiang Yao and Jiang Wanyue plotted against him and Shen Ruoling. If they were also female protagonists, they would not like them very much. If not, or if they were female protagonists and were later discovered by the male protagonist and then chased their husbands, I would not have said anything. ③Also, the female protagonists have acquired various abilities. After all, it is a male channel, and it feels like they are out of control. For example: Luo Yunjin was in the office, hypnotizing the male protagonist after he fell asleep, and was discovered by other female protagonists.

I want to watch Mo Qianqian's scene [Eating Melon] Where is the main palace? Hurry up! [Eat melon]

This author is really capable, and he really dares to put his words in the comment area. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author cheers, I am a long-time fan. I will send you a gift and love you [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Very good-looking, I want to take off the glasses with him, and then

The content is very exciting [laughing evilly] The author should be patient and don't get reported. Everything else is okay, but the update speed is hard to describe. Unless a chapter was suddenly updated, I would have forgotten to read this novel [Punch Out]

It's okay, it has a prosperous style, and Shuhuang is just right for reading [Chigua]

The name of this book should be "As a succubus, I just want to live, what's wrong with me?" Bitter. Jpg

It's a kind of late-stage explosion, and the early stage was okay. Based on the books I've read similar to this one, I feel it's still a little bit worse, but overall it's pretty good!

I read this book and wanted to say something, but I couldn't think of what to say. I always felt that there were thousands of words to describe, but due to my poor writing skills, I ended up reducing it to two words, awesome [Like]

It's well written and arranged well, but the plot may be a bit confusing. I hope it can be improved.

The writing is good, and there is still room for improvement. The book itself is only worth four stars in terms of character creation, plot advancement, and plot rationality. However, the author has astringent content, and my own preference for this kind of subject matter, so I will add another star.

Good? But this update speed, Yue Heena [smile][smile][smile]

This is Yunxixi's standard suffering master panel, but the gender is female [face covering]

This book is quite good, keep writing it

Originally the five-star rating was good, but it turned out that the guy named Luo was just a little bit poisonous, cao! No, I can't stand it (it's best to change it)

[Laughing evilly] There is a hint of excitement in the dullness, and the racing scene at the end was quite enjoyable to watch.