Anime Crossover: Shocking the Myriad Worlds with a Frenzied Mission

The writing is a bit messy. One moment, Saitama's world has just finished defeating Boros, and another moment, it has not been defeated. Also, it is best to let the anime people distinguish the different worlds, otherwise it will feel a bit outrageous. After all, the painting styles are different.

Come on, come on, I like it very much, come on

It's quite bad. There are indeed too many magical changes to various characters, the timeline is also confusing, and each world has not realized that the world is different. Saitama's performance can at least be in the top six. Morax actually expects to be on the list? Six thousand years have made his heart feel like a rock. Besides, the era of divine rule is about to be abandoned by Zhongli. Secondly, if you add in the Chinese comics, I think you can only do a hundred chapters at most. The combat power of the Chinese comics is nothing compared to the setting. Damn it, everyone is the creator.

It's very messy, the timeline is very messy. Luffy in the 100 million era was on board the Sunny Miles and Franky appeared. The characters' personalities don't match. Another question is whether we can write about the world at the beginning of the inventory. Otherwise, people in each world will think it is from their own world, otherwise they will think it is fake. This makes the character look stupid.

The writing is a little messy

The writing is still a bit messy. For example, in the part about Saitama, Genos mentioned the battle between Saitama and the alien. That timeline was clearly the timeline of the fight with that person. But when Saitama was played, Genos didn't know it.

There are too many mistakes, which does not mean that the writing is different from the original work. After all, it is normal for these to be written with private information. However, the author himself doesn't remember the inconsistencies in what he wrote. The most important thing is that the settings were changed within 6 or 7 chapters at most? It would be understandable if I wrote it so long ago that I forgot to make any mistakes, but this? Is that too much?

Author, you wrote that everyone in the pirate world is blind, but no one saw Sabo's ability to burn fruits 🤦 🤦

Please trouble the author to read the anime and the original manga, there are a lot of mistakes.

It would be so-so. It would be nice if more fighting scenes could be written. It would be better if the characters talk, brainstorming, and there are less inner dramas. For example, in the first video, 90% of the ten chapters are character dialogues, brainstorming, and inner dramas. It is too watery.