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Author, you don't want me to lose one star, so just update it obediently [laughing]

The writing style is rare in Tomato and can tell a clear story. Nowadays, people like to read the kind of brainless fun. The low popularity is normal. I support the author to continue writing.

Come on, author. This novel is really good.

After reading 8 chapters, I will make a brief evaluation. I have read Gu Yan's book before. The writing is excellent, the content is in-depth but easy to understand. The names of various realms are also very excellent and coherent. The world view is basically explained clearly except for the buried foreshadowing. The things that are not explained are gradually revealed in the follow-up. Come out, this book by the author can be seen to be written on a whim. The plot develops too fast, many things are mentioned in one stroke, and most of the content is borrowed. So far, there is almost no original content, and the consequences of the plot being written in one stroke have already been reflected. , As tasteless as a running account, it only has a sense of freshness because there are no similar novels in Tomato, and because most of them are borrowed, some subsequent changes in content remain to be seen, such as why the sister broke up with the male protagonist, why the male protagonist retired, etc. Furthermore, when When the plot develops into the same timeline as Gu Yan's book, it is also a question whether to continue writing my own original content or wait for updates. Furthermore, I personally think that the author does not have an outline, which will cause the subsequent plot to be messy, so overall I give four stars for encouragement [exploration]

The book is very good, especially when the male protagonist treats the female protagonist as a brother, but I still hope that the author will give the male protagonist more descriptions of his alone time, so that the beautiful weekend will not be disturbed, and the male protagonist will suffer from physical problems after such a long stay. Can you write more about this aspect in the future?

It's okay, but it feels a bit stiff and not so natural. Come on, author

? Why is this book dead?

From the perspective of a second grader, it is indeed very attractive! Classic magical girl genre. But unfortunately, I am no longer in the second grade of middle school. From an adult's perspective, it's like looking at a child, rather childish, but still manageable.

Author, has the protagonist's identity been revealed for a long time? [What][What][What]

Free books and a bicycle. There are really few books like this in Tomato. Although this book has a lot of loopholes, it can't be read with your brain. There are fights, but it's still interesting if you use your brain to read it [Learned]

It's really good. A small knife makes you happy, but a big knife hurts your body. The author has a pretty good grasp. I am looking forward to the interaction between the protagonist and his sister. The truth, don't reveal it too quickly. It would be best if the sister misunderstands that the hero and Skylark are lovers. (๑❛ᴗ❛๑) The plot of the male protagonist's reminiscences when he was a child was well written and very meaningful. Hair color and clothing will reflect the mood of the girl when she transforms. The male protagonist is dressed in black. I think when his voice changed, his heart must have been filled with despair and determination to fight!

To be honest, I have never read this type of novel, but many different things happened in the middle period, which makes this book give people a different feeling. At the same time, it also has a more realistic cruelty. After the blood and tears, there is a completely different and slim hope. But when everything is over, looking back, it seems that I have once again watched my companions sacrifice in front of my eyes. I am not sure if other people feel the same as me, but I still think this is an extraordinary and ordinary story.

Not bad, not bad. It tastes great. I hope the author can make it longer and not sloppy at the end. The logic of this book is clear, at least there are no big loopholes, and the battle and leisure time are interspersed in it, so the battle will not feel excessive or the leisure time is excessive. The pace is fast. After all, it is a light novel. In addition, the emotional scenes are handled well, but I just don't know why the rating is so low. Come on, author, don't let it suck.

To be precise, this book's flaws outweigh its flaws. The good places are good, and the bad places are also really bad. The protagonist has been repeatedly jumping between Turtle and Yong, and after the transformation, the difference is too big and very contradictory. But it is still a very good book with its own characteristics.

It's okay, but the author made a typo

It feels really good to read. It ended suddenly and left me feeling unfinished. This is one of the few high-quality books in my Tomato bookshelf, and it ended suddenly like this. Although it is a pity, I still look forward to the author's next work [Love] [Love] [Love]

How did I feel when I was blocked the next day after watching it? . .

Why do I feel more and more like an episode of Magical Girl Nanoha the more I watch it [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I hope it won't end after the identity is revealed, and I hope the author keeps writing, it's really good-looking! It's a pity that it ended like this [face covering]

Some details are not delicate enough for me. Is it a matter of writing style or preparation? Is the plot unfolding and setting thrown out quickly to differentiate? All in all, I prefer the feeling that there are many places to explore next door, but after all, I was moved because of you, the author.

The world view should be like Puella Magi Madoka Magica. It's quite interesting. I finished it in one day.

This book is worth reading. Although the article may be a bit shocking, the overall world view and character descriptions are quite satisfactory. The life and death between magical girls and the emotional descriptions of the characters are relatively delicate. The ending may be a bit hasty, but overall it is recommended (don't criticize if you don't like it [smile]

Well written but honest. How should we explain now that the relationship between the protagonist and his sister is exposed?

Judging from my reading of more than 700 books (excluding other websites), authors who write about magical girls generally have something good. I just saw a similar book next door [get it]

Come on, author, the novel is well written! It was my first time to read a magical girl theme, and it was such a magical "girl", and I fell in love with it. Ps: I hope my brother's identity will not be exposed too early (I hope it's my sister who suspects her brother from the details and then exposes it. I like this kind of drama [blowing kiss]

It looks good, please have more. [Shy]

After looking at it for so long, I realized that I didn't give it five stars. Sorry.

It's okay, there are quite a lot of side plots, but the protagonist gets really little information every time he completes a side plot, and he can't push the main plot at all...

It's a very good novel. There is no feeling like other novels where you can't stand it at all after reading it. The battle aspect is also handled very well. There must be sacrifices, right? All in all, it is a very good novel.

Author You don't want to be less than the stars, right? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]