I Asked You to Travel Through Time and Become a Savage, but You Actually Founded a Country

With all due respect, this is a good book that was delayed by ratings. The protagonist has no system or golden fingers, and only has knowledge that is thousands of years ahead. But these are enough, and any more would be superfluous. I guess the author also means this. The writing style is natural and smooth, and the plot is compact and reasonable. It is the best work among all the original novels I have read. Thank you to the author for his hard work. I will not force the author to update in a hurry. After all, slow work will lead to careful work, and good tea needs to be tasted slowly. I just hope that the author can continue reading at the current pace, not to be unfinished, not to be eunuch, and not to forget the original intention. I will continue to follow new books in the future. Come on, author＾0＾~

The writing is trendy and not procrastinating. However, the social experience is not written in depth enough and needs to be strengthened. For example, Ma Xiao cannot lie down and always rests standing up. There are still some places I forgot. This is purely a personal suggestion, please don't comment!

The book is good, but my only personal suggestion is that the narratives in the book should not be read in vain, and the tone of the book should be too calm. You can inject some life, which is to let more emotions in while surviving. You can mix in some interactions, you can make the audience laugh just by watching Chaplin's actions, and some pleasant plots and tone can make the plot come alive.

Although there are some minor mistakes in the plot, overall I think this is the most impressive of all the novels I have read. I hope the author can do his best to keep writing [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] I support you, come on! Come on! Come on! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is okay. It's not the kind of mindless writing where seven aunts and eight aunts get together to blast each other. It's worth reading.

The quality of the development path is very good. Of course, there must be shortcomings. After all, no one can write perfectly. Come on, author! I hope you can write to the finale

Well written, keep it up. To my liking.

The novel is good, but now I have encountered a problem. A common problem in this type of novels is that the description of war is unrealistic. It relies entirely on the author's free imagination. This leads to too many flaws, so that the battlefield scenes are distorted. Although the author has written more than 700 chapters, I still recommend that the author consult more historical materials on cold weapon wars, or play the Total War series of games. Remember that when describing the cold weapon war, the lack of some unrealistic micro-manipulation of the protagonist would make it look too dramatic.

The best original article I've seen on Tomato so far🤣🤣

The author uses the theme of time travel to construct his own utopia in the context of ancient times. It is a perfect social form with orderly hierarchy, complete systems, simple folk customs, and living and working in peace and contentment. It is fascinating to read and can also trigger reflection on various social problems in reality. The novel is interspersed with descriptions of the history of human ancestors such as Xuanyuan, Shennong, and Chiyou in ancient times. It includes both original historical descriptions and creations based on the needs of the plot development of the novel. It is convenient for readers to enjoy the happiness brought by the novel while also learning relevant knowledge about that period of history, so that readers can learn knowledge and improve themselves in happiness. I am very much looking forward to the collision between Xuanyuan and Chi You!

Without bragging or bragging, this is the best development novel in Tomato. The main character is very humane and well-founded in all aspects. It's a pity that it's lukewarm. It has the flavor of a lord novel, but it's more real than those.

I have been following it one after another for more than a year. Being able to write such a long book has surpassed many books, but it still maintains a clear logic, interesting plot, unique writing style, and the text is very comfortable to read. It can transcend the category of online novels in my mind and become traditional literature. Evaluation: Phoenix, as long as you are willing to update it, I will watch it, come on.

This novel is better written than other novels of the same type. It has no golden fingers and no space, and it is close to real life and real scenes. This kind of novel is a good novel, come on! Hope it doesn't end badly later.

I finished reading this book in a hurry. I am relatively casual when reading online novels, but I can still feel that there are some logical conflicts in some places, but this does not affect this book to be an excellent work. The overall plot structure is orderly and the plot development is smooth and natural. Although there is no ups and downs in the plot, it is still very story-telling and interesting. And the last plot of the prophet's time travel is quite ingenious. I hope the author can get better and better.

There are too few novels about primitive tribes, and even fewer are good ones. This is the kind of novel that people can read to the end! Just updates... Forget it, three chapters a day, pretty good

There are few novels about wild tribes. The protagonist is a somewhat wise man, and the plot arrangement in the book is relatively reasonable. I hope the author will not soften his heart in the next plot.

Among the same type of themes, it is relatively readable. Is it because the author is a girl? Most of them are about development and there are relatively few combat plots. Now that horses have been domesticated for a long time, there should be scenes of cavalry going out to sweep thousands of armies. Other tribes are still barely out of the Stone Age with bare feet. At least it's not bad, give it a good review! I haven't read it for almost a year, but it's finally finished and I have time to read it slowly.

The writing is very good, it does not change history, it does not make assumptions, it just delays the progress of Xuanyuan, but the processing of the calendar is not reasonable enough. It can already measure the winter solstice and summer solstice, and knowing that there are 365 days in a year, it is enough to distribute the 24 solar terms evenly.

The writing is okay, and it will be good to follow the current writing style and plot. Although the subject matter of this book is common, there are some profound truths in the ordinary narrative, such as "morality", such as the aging of witches... But I hope the author will not give up his work. The data in the book cannot support him for the time being.

It's a very good book. It met all my needs in the early stage of land reclamation and even allowed me to learn some professional knowledge. It's awesome. As the country grew in size, there was a lot of news in the later period and I didn't have much desire to read it. It's like a book. It's a good thing, but if you don't read it or don't read it much, why isn't it full of stars? It's just that the later part is a bit hard to describe, but overall it's a very good book. Come on, author!

From the perspective of a farming novel, it is pretty good. The protagonist is an ordinary Chinese medicine practitioner and the geography is very good. The shortcomings are also obvious. I don't know anything about mechanics, electricity, and physics. However, it also gives people a sense of reality. Although the time travel of the Almighty Soldier King is fun to watch, it lacks this sense of reality. I hope it won't turn into a story about cultivating immortals and farming in the future, and just work hard on construction.

It's so good, why doesn't anyone read it? The author's writing is too long, so no one reads it and rewards it later. I've read hundreds of chapters, and there's nothing poisonous about it! The author must persevere. I specially went to the back to give a little reward. Come on author!

There are not many authors who write about traveling through ancient times, and they are very innovative. It's just that the character names are a bit confusing and have not been corrected, and the regional orientation and distribution of the major tribes are not accurate enough. However, the author still consulted a lot of information, which was very hard work! Keep up the good work, if you can update twice a day, it will be perfect.

It's a very good time-traveling, slow-burning, basically able to meet the requirements and justify itself, with very few loopholes, and it's very attentive. I've been listening to it for three days in a row, it's great👍👍👍

It's a very good article. It's linked to the original article in history. I've read about 400 chapters. It's a great read. However, I've seen that the recent updates have been quite slow. I'm really worried about the lack of food soon [laughing]. I'll try my best to update it.

This is written very well, and the writing style looks very comfortable. Unfortunately, this is Tomato, and maybe the technology climbing is not exciting enough, resulting in a low score. I think the score of this book can definitely be above 9 points.

Not bad, you can read it when you are short of books!

All I can say is that it was in line with my expectations. I personally prefer watching farming and the like. I didn't see much of a problem with the plot. I just felt that the progress was slow. But that's innocuous. I'll wait until I finish watching the rest before commenting.

The writing is okay, very thoughtful. It's just that the characters are a bit confusing.

It shows the evolution process of primitive human society in the form of character stories. The content is very rich and very good.