Being Pampered by Master Chu and Turning into a Coquettish Monster

It's very interesting [shy], but I cried [almost cried] during the middle part. I felt that the male protagonist was too self-centered and didn't consider the female protagonist's feelings [angry], and didn't know how to communicate. If the female protagonist didn't like the male protagonist very much from the beginning, and if she didn't like him but gradually fell in love with the male protagonist, just from the middle part, they wouldn't have reconciled so quickly [smiles]. I feel that most of the female protagonists in this book are wronged. After all, the heroine's life was not good when she was a child, and the male protagonist still needs to make great improvements! ! ! ! [Smile] Also, the ending is too hasty! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Wronged]

How can I put it, I didn't feel much after reading half of the book, but when I read more than half of it, it was very touching. My eyes were swollen from crying when we talked about the unclear relationship between two people and the child. Come on Tangzhi!

The young author read everyone's book reviews, and many people said that the ending was very abrupt. But the main plot of the story has been written. If I continue to write it, will it be too long and boring? Hee hee, this is also my first time, I will improve next time [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Okay, the two of us are so sweet, but it's very short

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super lollipop

Beautiful! Very well written

Very attractive and good-looking [send heart]

It's really sweet, okay?

Not bad, not too cruel, quite sweet

It's good-looking, it goes both ways, it's sweet, but it ends too quickly. Specifically, it's good, and it's worth reading.

It's so pretty, I've already brushed it up three times.