Become a Big Boss in the World of Immortality

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, and the proficiency in cultivating immortal writings that I like to see is "able to read". For novices to advance, old themes, old routines, a framework plot that can be seen at a glance, the development is slightly slow. (Actually, you can still read this kind of classic subject as long as you don't write it randomly. At least you can deal with it and get it right.)

The writing is okay, and the protagonist is given a few attack spells.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

If you have nothing to do, please update more~ When eating, your right hand is busy, and your left hand can update. It's also good to go to the toilet more often at work, and secretly code 1 or 20,000 words! As for things like falling in love, dating, or paying nightly allowances, don't do them that are not important and waste time and energy. This is not a plea or a discussion with you. I hope you won't be ungrateful. Thank you. [Shy]

It's quite interesting. The protagonists, masters and apprentices have very distinct personalities. Maybe the characterizations are a bit simple. I feel that a score of 7 is a bit dismissive of this book. Personally, I feel that the score is about 8.5, After all, there is no obvious poisonous point.

Okay, okay, keep going.

Beautiful, very beautiful

It's okay, why is the rating so low?

The plot is compact and does not drag out. Good book

I think it's pretty good-looking!

The plot content is cleverly conceived, and the upgrade design is reasonable and fascinating. It is worth recommending.

I have been worried about the protagonist's slow progress in cultivation, but this should be the normal state. The author's writing is fluent, the plot is exciting, the logic is reasonable, and there is nothing perverted. Although the ending is a bit too hasty, it is worth five stars.

I hope you don't start a harem, otherwise I will come back and give you one star [rolls eyes]

Very nice. Advancement is a bit slow. Why is the score so low? Give me a five-star encouragement.

Very interesting, I am a bookworm of ten years.

Super exciting, interesting and beautiful

Looks good, but a little lacking

Lots of books to read. . .

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The story is very interesting, but a bit short

Some people are dead, but they are still alive, some people are alive, but they are already dead, and some people cut it unconsciously.

It's good-looking, but it's too short and ends too quickly.

The ending felt a bit rushed, but overall it was pretty good.

It's beautifully written, but I was caught off guard by the ending [laughing][laughing]

Very good Gou. Have brains, work hard, and be low-key

Very good! I can't help but want to read it all in one sitting,

It's a pretty good novel, worth reading👀 It's just that the updates are too slow, I can't stand it. It's a pity, it's a pity that it ended hastily in the end. It's a pity.

The plot is twists and turns, the characters are vividly drawn, and the protagonist is very down-to-earth. The ending is rushed, but humorous, and it's okay. Thank you, the author!

The writing is novel, interesting, clear and to the point.

Super exciting, super exciting.