One Punch Man: My Wife Is a Small Tornado

Pure passerby, super good-looking!

It's very rare. It's neither a story about eunuchs nor a harem story. There's nothing unclear about it. The content of the text is also very good, the details are handled well, and the combat power doesn't collapse! The protagonist Qiao Sen is between 1.9 And 2 meters tall, and the heroine Hell Tornado is 1.5 To 1.6 Meters tall. Isn't this inappropriate for Fiji? [Cover face]

Yes, what you want is this feeling of invincibility, not the sense of urgency to upgrade that started three years later. This book is very appetizing

There are not many shortcomings, but they are serious problems. There are too few updates to TM! This is a serious shortcoming, okay? The author needs to improve! I want to read explosive updates, one hundred thousand words a day! [Cool] Haha!

The pinnacle level of One Punch Man fan fiction. At the same time, the author loves the second dimension. The various settings are very logical and fresh. The most important thing is that it feels refreshing. The characterization of each character is very full. In short, it deserves five stars.

The writing is very good, but the biggest regret is that I didn't capture pets. Douluo's Rabbit, One Piece Chopper, Dragon Ball's Shenron, Kobayashi's Kangna, and Naruto's Kyuubi. The author of these can open a petting zoo properly [laughing]

Yes, it respects the setting of the original work, and the protagonist's style of painting is also in line with the world view, and it looks very smooth.

It's a cool article. The plot is exciting. The writing is enough to support the plot and imagine the scenes. Some parts are very exciting to watch. The character of the protagonist feels very good and the development does not feel stiff. It can lead the brain. It's refreshing and refreshing. It makes people extremely high [laughter] I think it deserves my five-star recommendation. No, it's still too short [laughing evilly], and it's not long enough to watch [laughing evilly]. It turns into a variety show at the end, but it's pretty good.

It's a really good One Punch Man fanfic It's very good and worth watching, but I don't know why the ratings are so low? I'm sure I'll get angry. If I get angry, kick me.

The content of this book is still very good, and the character creation is also very interesting. It has erased many of the original meanings... But the emotional line is a bit inexplicable. Maybe the author is not able to control the emotional description of men and women well. As a fanfic of the second creation of One Punch Man, except for the slightly delayed plot and abrupt transitions, it can be regarded as a high-quality book. You can take a look at it with confidence. I didn't give full marks because my requirements for "satisfaction" are a bit high, and currently only a few can meet the standard - the standard is that it can make me play the second time without feeling dull, and the third time without feeling bored. Ha ha ha ha! I wish the author will write better and better! Try to satisfy your fans and readers! [Blowing kiss]

It's not bad. I just don't like the setting of traveling through thousands of worlds and want to skip it every time I see it. But overall it's still good. The brushwork is delicate and relaxed. Some of the details are handled very well. I highly recommend it! ! !

It's okay. It's a good comprehensive manga. If you like punching, you can read it. However, the emotional scene with Tatsumaki is slightly flawed. Without too much description, Tatsumaki is shy and likes her for no reason. She even has a bit of Mu Qiang's thinking that she likes the protagonist because he is stronger than her. It's not sweet enough, so I give it 4 stars. Everything else is pretty good.

Overall, it's pretty good, but I think Naruto's combat power is too high. Compared with the combat power of destroying cities with one punch, it's really exaggerated. Just imagine that a dragon-level monster can destroy dozens or hundreds of kilometers casually, but Naruto's destructive power is completely incomparable. The world value is different, just like Dragon Ball and one punch.

Come on, the author, the book is really good. At least in the novels I read on Tomato, many of the protagonists' personalities are inexplicably wrong, and the plot is also inexplicable. They are slapped in the face for the sake of being slapped in the face. The character of the protagonist in this book is nonsensical, and the relationship with the characters in One Punch World is also well written. Although the increase in combat power is often exponential, One Punch World is not outrageous. The plot is light and humorous, which is my favorite type [Like]

Come on, I think the content is quite exciting.

Like it, surprisingly beautiful. At least it's much better than some writing methods that forcibly change the plot (let's just say it quietly, it's some~). The content is also interesting and not painful to watch. Needless to say, the writing is excellent. I have to say it is a good book.

This book is a well-written old two-dimensional life novel [Like] In fact, in the process of formal reading, the reading threshold is relatively high. If you have not read or read the corresponding works, similar chapters or similar empty ears will be confused [please read carefully] [smile] But if the amount of reading reaches that level, you will feel very comfortable [like] The most important thing is that the protagonist of this book is not like some protagonists of cool novels who have no brains and are messing around. It can be said that the writing is quite thoughtful and refreshing, and does not feel abrupt. There are small dungeons of unlimited flow interspersed in the middle, and the behavior of the dream master in it is highly praised [like] (especially the Star Expeditionary Force). The author's interactivity is also quite good among the books, such as various complaining copywriting and so on [laughing] makes people read like Tein blowing Sting [laughing] The biggest shortcoming may be that the ending seems very rushed to me. I obviously feel that there is still a lot of things to write... But in the closing remarks, the author truly explains the reasons, so forgive him [please read carefully]. Overall, it is worth reading for readers with a wide range of "knowledge" [like]

The content is very substantial, and the plot connects smoothly, but it ends a little too quickly and is too short to watch. It is worth mentioning that this book is about a single female protagonist, which is also good. I recommend reading it.

Come back! [Crying] My author, my most proud belief! [Cry][like] One Punch Man fans need you [almost crying] [love]

Fans are unlimited, and the author is a jojo chef. Although I don't watch jojo at all, I still enjoy watching it. The author is very good at making jokes and writes well in daily life, but the writing style is a bit weak.

Hi, hi I have already finished reading this book and finally gave it a five-star rating [laughing] The pace is not overpowering and there is no procrastination. There is a single female protagonist who is invincible throughout the whole process. (To be honest, the author can actually write multiple female protagonists. If he concludes decisively that it is a single female protagonist, it will easily lead to many readers in the middle. Give it up, after all, the single-female protagonist is a germaphobe for readers) This is not to say that it is awesome, but the author also has some relatively detailed descriptions of other girls, which may cause some readers to think that the male protagonist is not dedicated enough, but for readers of harem novels, this is not a problem at all. It may be suspected of being a spoiler~ The single female protagonist Tatsumaki, the maid Mosquito, the early assistant, and the late assistant (except for Tatsumaki, the other female characters have little space and belong to the scene NPC. If necessary, trigger "Towards the Stars...") As a whole, it is a comprehensive comic that travels all over the place. It is very good that JOJO pulls out those knives without regrets. In fact, in the later stage, Beng San's "Blowing Kiss" combat power will not be too bad. After all, it is a work last year. It is obviously a bit difficult to ask the author to write exciting content based on the plot that was released in 25 years. I still hope that the author will get better and better and write better articles [Send heartfelt]

Kyoko in the early stage is a bit toxic and may dissuade many people, but the later content is still very exciting. Personally, I feel that it is invincible with daily writing. If you want to read blood and battles, forget it. It is a good book but I feel that it is difficult to make breakthroughs. You can read it.

The style of this book, how should I put it, is very similar to Sha Diao Luo in All Heavens and Worlds, but the protagonist is not Sha Diao enough. But there are dozens of chapters so far, and I feel that the writing is very good. The main reason is that I can't get enough of Luo, and he ended suddenly. What I think is very impressive about Luo is that the fighting scenes and equipment are very detailed. I think the author can take a look.

It can be regarded as a masterpiece in fan fiction. He has a deep understanding of each plot world and has all kinds of baggage at his fingertips. At least so far, he has not found any major poisonous points. He is a senior two-dimensional character with a profound cultural background. The follow-up plot is worth looking forward to.

~March 13, 2024, tasting completed at 00:10, it is a masterpiece and tastes good

This jojo plus One Punch Man plus all kinds of miscellaneous things... But it is my favorite [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky laugh] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's finished, but it's okay. It's better to stop here than to repeat the bad work later and get scolded. But I can write some extras, such as the infinite journey of Jo and the tornado, the tragedy of big brother who drives the spaceship, or the ordinary life of little Jo whose parents are invincible. I hope there will be more extras.

Okay, I really like the writing. It's very imaginative. I never thought of this kind of gameplay.

This one-punch fanfic is okay, a bit threshold. Although the book will introduce some parallel universes that travel through other anime backgrounds, it may not be easy to understand for those who have not seen it [Thoughts]

A very good one-punch fanfic. The author was worried that the main plot would follow too quickly and there would be nothing left to read later, so he deliberately created many branches. He really made me cry to death.