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It's good to read, but the author is too short... I'm talking about a novel [laughing evilly]

New book, first reward yourself with five stars [give heart]

It looks good but is too short. I really want to put the author in a dark room and make him write 20 chapters a day, so the author should be more conscious.

I actually don't know what to say, so I summarized the following six points...

The Riddler will not end well [smile]

I think this book is really good. I like some parts very much [laughs evilly] Please describe it more. I love reading it. Ahem. 1. Advantages: (1) In terms of character emotions, the lyricism is still very good, but you still need to pay attention to details. For example, in the 40-plus pictures of the little girl, when the memory of the little girl was tampered with, it felt better to change the flowers brought by the dog into half-smoked ones. Rong Jin, for example, the little girl bought flowers before, but now she can't remember them. This is very appropriate (it doesn't matter whether this thing should be changed or not, the main advantage is) (2) To be honest, I hope not to have a harem, not to have a harem, not to have a harem. I have said important things three times. Although I haven't finished reading it completely, I still don't want to have a harem. 2. Disadvantages: The apprentice's understanding of the master is a bit biased. After all, it is okay to go to the city lord to fight with the city lord. It can be regarded as a return, but the apprentice is still in a very high state. This is a bit inconsistent. Also, the sense of existence of this system is too low. I even forgot about the system as I was looking at it. It wasn't until I looked back at the introduction at the end of the comment that I remembered that there is also a system [face covering] In fact, when the apprentice increases his realm, he can set some rewards to increase the system's sense of existence. All in all, it's very nice and I like all the details [shy]

The author himself is here to beg the single female protagonist. The beautiful scene of the male and female protagonists getting along like this is so beautiful. I really don't want to be disturbed by another person. I hope to protect my young heart. Thank you🙏

Come on, come on, come on! Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! Very nice [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

It looks good, the descriptions are delicate, the writing is thoughtful, and the characters are well-characterized. I hope it will be updated soon! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Great book! Come on! Must be popular! Hopefully it will be a single female protagonist.

It's very comfortable to watch. I hope it will be a single female protagonist and her role will not be too small. For example, she will be basically forgotten in the later stages. I hope it can help the male protagonist.

A very good book, with a few chapters. As long as the author keeps writing, this book can be consumed with confidence. The characters are described delicately, which is great! ! ? [Love][Adoration][Admiration]

Don't post it, you kid. The low score is just because not many people rated the plot that everyone is immersed in. It's just that there are too few comments. Don't post it. It's not easy to find this good-looking article about cultivating immortals.

Well done Jockey Mizu!

Is the author a single female protagonist [crying][crying][crying]

It's really nice and pretty. It's just too short

Okay, just a little short

Give you five stars

Strong ancient style and good writing style

It's pretty good, why is it so low? Could it be that the relationship develops too quickly?

I've read Chapter 31 so far, and it feels like I haven't read it yet... [Face covering] Although the author's writing is good and he writes a lot about interactions with his apprentices, the plot may be too bland and a bit watery, which makes me feel like I haven't watched it. Overall, it's a comfortable read. This book's rating of 7.4 Is too low, maybe because not many people read it.

Ahem, the content is good [laughing evilly], but the updates are a bit slow. I'll give you 5 stars first.

It's good-looking, very beautiful (referring to the book), and the future is promising

It's very good. I've seen many stories where masters and disciples rely on giving gifts to build goodwill between them. Now I finally see a master and disciples who have a relationship that is like childhood sweethearts [laughter]

Well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

It's very nice, and there are pictures

I feel like that silly girl looks like Li Dazhen

It's hard to say too much, everyone has their own preferences for vegetables and radishes.

Yes, it's the author, are you too little? [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face]

Personally I think it's pretty good, give me a five-star support for the author [like]