
Menma, When Will You Become the Number One in the Ninja World?
面麻,你嘛时候成为忍界第一啊?
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It's quite interesting. [Adoration] Will the author let Menma from this world and Naruto from the main world meet? Or go directly to the main world... I really want to see the sparks between them.
It's quite interesting. The fanfic that was born out of the limited Tsukuyomi theatrical version will not be too constrained by the original Naruto, nor will it cause various science popularization by the original plot party. It is a fanfic with a very high degree of freedom in the author's setting. Hope it doesn't end badly
Very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I like Sakura's character in this book
It's very interesting, the previous plot is more humorous and relaxed. Currently in the three-year training chapter. Menma himself has great ambitions, but people with great ambitions cannot live only in their own one-third of an acre of land forever. Therefore, in the last three years of cultivation, Menma began to experience the four chapters of birth, old age, illness and death to complete his understanding of life and the transformation of the world. If you just want to see a witty and humorous plot, or if you just want to see a farewell gift, you can wait a moment. But I personally think that although the recent chapters are slightly lacking in humor, the reality of the ninja world where cruelty and tenderness coexist will make Menma realize the complexity of this world, so that he can truly realize that becoming a savior and a son of prophecy will never be like in the hot-blooded comics, with friends coming from all directions. To sum up, it was basically just an interesting book at first, but more recently it has started to give it some depth.
Invincible, really good-looking, although it seems to be just a derivative world limited to the Tsukuyomi world. But in fact, everything remains the same, and many famous scenes are sewn into the reverse world in different arrangements and combinations. For example, in the first episode, Iruka influenced Naruto and became Menma's influence on Konohamaru in this world. During the Kyuubi Rebellion 12 years ago, the Yang Kyuubi was sealed in Naruto's body. But this is in the Chuunin Exam Chapter, the Suture Guardian Ninja Twelve Chapter, where the Yin Nine Tails were released from the ghoul confinement and sealed into Menma's body. The round shape is really nice, and explains why Kushina is not dead in this world. Why does Menma have the Black Kyuubi? And find a reasonable late-stage plug-in. At least in reversal and stitching, this setting logic is established. It is very imaginative and beautiful.
The mirage is like a fairy tale, the collapse of tears in the painting ~ thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump! Cry Riva Wagadakuri Oh touch (this is a parting gift)
The book is generally good. No matter whether the protagonist is Uzumaki Naruto, Namikaze Menma, Uzumaki Menma or Namikaze Naruto, my only requirement is that his wife must be Hinata, otherwise I will feel awkward when I look at it, and I don't care about the rest.
After reading Chapter 49, I felt pretty good about it, but I had an ominous feeling. I went directly from the ninja world to outer space. It gave me a feeling like Boruto. Does this plot really stop the car? It feels like you have been cultivating in the world of immortals for hundreds of years, and found that other cultivators are parasitic cultivators. You have figured out the feeling of orthodox cultivation by yourself.
Very exciting. I gave it 4 stars. I later gave it 5 stars and it still remains the same.
It's okay. The logic of this book is clear and the protagonist is not too brainless. He has some IQ, but not much. The writing style is okay. Many things written are a bit outrageous but they have basis. The holes dug are basically filled. There are not many poisonous points. But forgive me for being such a scumbag. The character doesn't appeal to me, but it's not too outrageous. After all, I've seen more outrageous things than this, but I still can't stand it. I deducted one star. Everything else is okay and I can't find any faults. So in summary, the author's writing is very good. I will catch up to the end.
What should I say? This book is great. Although I have just started reading it, the setting in the book makes me feel very strange. Unlike other Naruto fanfics, this book follows some settings of the road of ninja and adds some of the author's ideas. Being used to anime settings, I see that the differences in this book will have a slight impact, but I will keep reading because I see that the author is trying his best to show us his conception of Naruto, so I will keep following it until the author shows the ninja world in his mind. Come on! Author. (Of course this is just my personal opinion)
Beautiful novels are my favorite type. I don't criticize the characters in them, and everyone is fair. The most important thing is that I am happiest when Obito can marry Rei and become the Hokage. The only character I like in the entire anime is Obito.
Very interesting, please update more. Author, and what does Ino look like in Road of Ninja? I can't stand it, I really can't stand it. The front is still a very interesting and funny daily article. It was still good before the trip. When I was traveling, it suddenly gave me this kind of plot. If I read it, it's not the same. If I don't read it, it's not the same. It's a pity if I don't read it. It's disgusting if I read it. I'll forget about it and leave it with a bad review [crying]
I think it's very interesting and exciting, and I have my own thoughts [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Great support to the author! [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] However, I want to know if there is a female protagonist, and if so, who will she be? Curious
I wrote the story in Infinite Tsukuyomi, which is a little more fresh than other fics. However, the original work of Infinite Tsukuyomi is not comprehensive, so the author has some backgrounds that are not fully explained. I am optimistic about this book, but I don't know what it will be like to activate Infinite Tsukuyomi in the world of Infinite Tsukuyomi [Thoughts]
2024.3.19 (End) It's a pity that Sakura was confiscated, but overall it's still good. It's just a little rushed towards the end. Overall, it's good. It would be better with more details.
This plot is so interesting [laughing] But I don't want it to be a harem story, I hope it's three women competing for face, and one girl wins, and then the girl is attacked [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
It's a very creative book. When reading this book, don't get too involved in the original plot. This is the parallel world of Infinite Tsukuyomi. Another thing is that it feels a bit nonsensical [laughs evilly]
The brave and brave old Qin fought against the national calamity together, and the brave and brave old Qin restored our rivers and mountains. There will be no truce until the blood is shed dry! There is the Great Qin in the west, which is rising like the sun. The country has been hated for hundreds of years, and the vicissitudes of life are hard to put down! The world is in turmoil, how can we find peace and tranquility! Qin has sharp men, who can compete with him?
The writing is very interesting, and it is indeed worth watching. The plot where the protagonist is not the Virgin is also very interesting. You can travel to other planes or characters from other planes can fill in the holes very well. I highly recommend it. [Top post][Please update]
Very good, not like Long Aotian, and the logic is very clear, but Sakura feels a little disadvantaged because she can't express her feelings at all. If I didn't say it, I wouldn't know that she is one of the harem, and the protagonist is Menma, not Naruto It feels like the details of the letter to Sakura are obviously different from the letters to Ino and Hinata. I really think Sakura's expression of feelings is too obscure. I especially like the part about the Box of Bliss. The characters are well drawn.
The protagonist is neither Naruto nor Menma, just a Uzumaki tribesman with average talent.
It's similar to Tsukuyomi World, but it's actually a parallel world created by the author. The characters' personalities are quite interesting.
I'm heading north, and I see that I still don't know who the heroine is! But it's very interesting to watch. Most of the people's characters and things are reversed. Shoun Hokage brought it in and reversed it so that it can be watched smoothly [smile]
A rare masterpiece, from the road of ninja theatrical version, it showed me a different world of Naruto. No one can forgive the pain. It has flesh and blood. Danzo in it is fierce to the outside and gentle to the inside. I have to say that if Danzo can do this in the main world, then it really means that the ninja world will not be chaotic. Konoha has the final say and strongly recommends it.
Oops, author, please don't finish the book. I'm reading this book on a monthly basis. First of all, I think its world view is very good and beautiful. Also, the author's adaptation is great. I hope the author won't finish the book.
It is very worth reading. I hope the author will continue to write [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
A good book, I hope the quality will continue to be like this. Also, today's update is from the evil author. [Angry][angry]
I haven't read it yet, I just read the introduction. Namikaze Menma has unlimited Tsukuyomi every day, and Uzumaki Menma has limited Tsukuyomi, but both Menma have Kyuubi.
It's quite nice, but I don't know why the rating is so low and there are so few people. Okay... Later on, there was a mess that was similar to a mindless plot killing, and then a mindless resurrection [laughing] But they are just relatively similar, I can only say that they are pseudo-resurrection, even in the first two pictures, he was still dead, and then I suddenly told you: Hey! Actually I'm not dead! I can only say that you, the author, know how to pull. I almost stopped the knife (actually it was already "cut", but I withdrew and rewrote [Dog Head]). For this, I can only deduct one star and reward the author with [Dog Head].