Reborn Before the Apocalypse: Starting with Free Shopping

Author, why did you make such a basic mistake? You can talk about space powers casually, but you are still worried that others won't know about it, and don't you know the cruelty of the apocalypse? There are also human hearts, and children know not to trust others casually. I won't talk about the rest. Now that you are updating, change the previous ones if you can, otherwise your book will fail again. Come on!

Don't read Madonna novels

This is the weakest book I've ever written about supernatural powers. The male character's level 9 supernatural powers can only hold things, but have no other spatial abilities. There is no physical enhancement or anything like that. After reading about 20 chapters, I really can't stand it. What do you think? Difficulty level 999? Stop writing and write in another book! 🤦🤦🤦

The writing is so messed up that I can't understand it at all. How many kilograms of strawberries did you buy on the first day? The second day was 150,000. The third day asked people to go to the cave. Didn't you mention the plane? Is there a flight to the airport at your home? Why don't you waste time buying this and that?

He can't walk around when he sees a woman, he's shy when he gets close casually, he says it's the end of the world, and he casually agrees to this and that is really rubbish. There were three women in front of him, but he couldn't get any of them.

No, you spent a long time writing a superpower that has no attack power at all. What's the use of it?

The writing technique is good, and the plot is okay, but the protagonist is a bit useless, with only one space and one control, he can't kill alien beasts alone.

Upgrading superpowers is a bit of a joke, leading a team to survive is just a noob, and the writing fluctuates and sometimes cuts off...

The protagonist is still a virgin without any attack power

Too much Holy Mother...