Wild Xiao Flute

It's okay, but the number of words is short [laughs crookedly]

Let me take a guess, the author is a pure newcomer to 24k 😏 In fact, the plot is very exciting, but many details need to be improved. For example, the dialogue always talks about this and that... Which is a bit boring. You can insert some action, demeanor and psychological description. The same goes for the characters. The protagonist's background can leave more suspense to let the readers imagine, and use some details of the protagonist's actions and demeanor, or the attitude expression of the supporting character to express extraordinary... The above are just my humble opinions. Writing is not easy, let's work together to make progress!

The author is good at portraying characters, carefully carving out each character, making them lifelike, vivid, rigorous in layout, and rigorous in logical reasoning. Especially the portrayal of Kuang Xiao, the first divine catcher, is very attentive, which shows his skill. Bai Chuyi is thoughtful, good at discovering details, sophisticated, steady, and resourceful. He is worthy of being the first divine catcher. Five stars for encouragement first, looking forward to continued excitement!

Pretty good, come on

It's rare to read the entire book. This book really attracted me. Ups and downs of the storyline. The characterizations are very distinct. Excellent language skills and very well organized.

Martial arts fantasy, battle of wits and skills, good to watch.

It's a very good book, with exciting content and clear logic. It's worth reading! 👍

The writing is very good and the plot is exciting. I can't help but want to read it! The psychological description of the characters is spot on, I support it!

Crazy happy, crazy happy

The writing is smooth and the structure is compact. It is a rare martial arts suspense novel.