I Will Live Forever in the Emperor's Cold Palace

An Immortal has too many bullshit, is nosy, and does not have the mentality of an Immortal.

The most annoying thing is that no matter which realm the protagonist reaches, he is inferior to a dog. It does not reflect the power of this realm at all. Sure enough, it makes sense for some books to be able to become gods. This kind of low-priced book just reads the bad reviews and gets blacklisted.

Let's talk about the realm first. At the beginning, it was said that the level gradually increased from the first to the ninth level, but later it became the third level to the first level. The eunuch father-in-law, you are married and have a wife, and the pig's feet are immortal. The author writes about marrying a wife. The most important thing is that the pig's feet are still a eunuch? Really, author, do you want to take a look at what you have written?

Not to mention zero writing skills, any elementary school student's composition can be written more smoothly than yours.

The eunuch still married a wife, and I was drunk too. Do you have that thing?

It's really outrageous, even if there are a lot of typos. When I read some chapters, the preface did not match the postscript, and the last sentence said that I had already reached the late stage of the fourth level. The next sentence goes on to say that he will soon break through to the late stage of the fourth level. Have you had a breakthrough? And the realm you set yourself is from the first level to the second level to the third level. It went up layer by layer, and finally I read to the end. Did you say that the first grade is the best? ? What about me?

There are too many typos, and I deviate from the topic as I write. I often die when I write about the sixth or seventh grade. As a result, the protagonist starts to become sluggish when he is only at the fourth grade. As an ordinary eunuch in the cold palace, being so sharp is no different from dying.

I don't even know which fucking level I'm doing here. The more I learn, the more confused I become. First, I started writing about the first level, and then when I went to break through items, I wrote that the first level is the strongest. What is this mess?

There are too many typos and it's so hard to read.

I have read Chapter 5. There are many typos, the reading is not coherent, the punctuation is incorrect, and the regular double quotation marks are not symmetrical. The author should be careful. 😁😁😁

There are a lot of typos and the words don't go up and down [laughing and crying]

The content is actually good, but the classification of grades is reversed and there are many typos, which already affects reading.

Water, too water.

My head hurts from looking at it, it's so confusing

The content is good, but there are too many typos

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 12, where I accepted the prince as my disciple. He got involved in a harem fight again. What else should be written in the introduction? I thought I would be invincible in the world.

There are so many typos. The most important thing is, can you be careful? You are jumping around.

This typo is not common! It affects reading too much. A good book is ruined by typos!

It's extremely bad. It's full of typos and the sentences are not smooth. I can't even read it. I don't know which book the author copied and pasted it from. He doesn't even change it. The least you can do is change it.

It's too lax. You don't even understand how you want readers to read it. How can readers understand it?

It's very hard to watch

There are too many typos, and a lot of people are reading it.

Garbageooood

Da Qin? Big money? Governing the country? Only?

So rubbish rubbish

Didn't you just keep your promise? Not once did I survive.

The sentences don't make sense anywhere, and I can't read them!

There are too many typos, punctuation, and unclear sentences. It's really uncomfortable to read.

Truth! I endured reading ten chapters! I really can't stand it anymore!

It's obviously garbled text. How can it be so messy when typed by real hands? ?