Would You Believe It? I'm a Guy Who Can Transform Into a Little Witch

The author has worked hard, and it is possible to conceive of such a type of book with his wide imagination, which deserves praise. However, there are some troublesome things that need to be paid attention to under the premise of opening up the imagination. After reading the latest chapter of the plot in the book, I always felt that the transitions were a bit awkward. Deliberately being nonsensical and funny will somewhat reduce the readability of the book. You still need to pay attention to the description of normal human nature and other things, otherwise the storyline will always feel hollow. A little suggestion, the author doesn't need to take it seriously, just keep working hard.

A good idea. Make money in the early stage and marry in the later stage. This is the correct way to open a transformation novel.

I don't know if it's a marriage change article. If it is, I'll quit immediately. Alas, it's okay to be single. I really can't bear the change of marriage [laughs and cries]

I feel that after the protagonist's transformation time reaches 24 hours, she can be banned from her male body or switch to it at will. Pretty good.

After reading a little bit, I noticed something was wrong, so I ran to look at the back. It turned out to be a marriage change😏

It's pretty good. The author should be an old 2D person. I glanced at the book review and table of contents, and found that this book is about changing the marriage, and there is no distinction between primary and secondary. Let's integrate the poisonous points. Mind if I read it by mistake. The biggest problem is that the primary and secondary are not separated (it has nothing to do with the main plot) (in addition, I can't accept the change of marriage). 349 Breaks with the system (for the sake of Warcraft, and World of Warcraft is still killed). We must also break up and rely on the system to gain strength and bite back.) 540 Gay friends propose, 729 marry gay friends.

I don't think there is any big poisonous point. I won't comment too much on the elves. If the protagonist marries the man from the elves, it will definitely be a huge poisonous point. I hope the author is accurate about whether to marry or not to marry

1: There is no absolute right or wrong between the good and the bad. 2: It's not brainless. The political leadership, world background, and purpose of the war are all well written. 3: Although the protagonist is a saint, she only uses her own power to do things and does not ask others to be a saint. The protagonist still wanted to save me together with the monster at the end, I really cried to death [face covering] 4: He is a little bit humble, The Lily/love scenes are less and not too far-fetched, a bit slow-burning. It is not too direct like other articles and is more realistic. This is different from ordinary lily/love stories, more like real people. 5: Most of it is about fighting and getting stronger, but it's not about fighting to get stronger. Although the protagonist's combat power is somewhat invincible, there are still many who can overwhelm the protagonist. Will not be fooled 6: Author 666 The disadvantage is that the description of the character's appearance is a bit lacking.

So who is this so-called mother? According to this, a person can be hidden and disappeared from his life in time, but it will not erase the traces of his past existence. What is the relationship between this so-called mother and Zhang Wuling? They also don't remember it. Even through Yang Ping's identity as the Lord of the Soul World and the state of his soul, it should be impossible for him to sweat? Is this so-called mother the creator of all things in the world? Or something terrible? Or did it violate some worldly rules? So that Serial Number and all the witches will kill Yang Ping at all costs? Or is Yang Ping's power enough to scare this so-called mother? Overall, it looks great and deserves five stars! A bit of a knife! ! !

The writing is very good, the logic is clear so far, and it is deep and connotative. The plot advances slowly, but it is also written in detail, and it will not be difficult to understand because it is too fast. Finally, the protagonist is not the Virgin. It is clearly stated in the article and the protagonist himself said it several times. The author dug countless holes in the front and filled them all in the back without missing a single one. The key point is that he filled them in a well-founded way. So now I have reason to suspect that the author has finished writing, and is just hanging on to us with this bit of hair. The author, old thief, tell me honestly, do you still have a lot hidden?