The Chosen One

It's very good. The subject matter is quite new. I don't usually like to read new books. I read it in one go this time. Come on, I hope it won't be unfinished. [I'm full]

It's okay, the plot needs to be polished a bit, just to let the male protagonist have more of his own ideas, wouldn't it be better to be more ruthless?

This kind of subject matter is very good

The main character was not beaten hard enough, not hard enough.

Being able to persist in writing until now shows that the author is very careful in his creation, and the power setting is also very interesting and novel. Especially the magician's power makes my eyes shine. However, I have some suggestions. The realm of strength and combat power are too vague, and there are too many literary dramas. I hope there will be improvements in the later period and it will get better and better.

I thought it was super good-looking. I didn't expect that even this year, I could read a novel from beginning to end on Tomato. The main reason is that the author's writing style is very normal, and I want to know how it will develop in the future. It has a beginning and an end, and there is nothing too bad about it. The most important thing is that the ending is quite good. It's not a harem novel or a stud novel, the descriptions in the article are quite realistic. It's been a long time since I've been able to read a novel to the end. Come on, author!

I hope you all will support me!

It's good to read, unlike many Tomato's bad articles.

At least it has a happy ending

Very well written! Come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]