Rebirth: Return to Elementary School with FIFA23

Hee hee hee, I received my first comment today, and it turned out to be five stars. I'm so happy, I'll be narcissistic too!

Regardless of whether he joins the Chinese team or not, I will continue to watch whether he chooses not to be drafted. I also hope that the Chinese team can step out of the darkness and move towards the dawn.

I hope the author will update it faster, the chapters will be longer, and the quality will be as high as possible. I am definitely not urging you to update! !

The author's writing is very good, and it feels like he is slowly growing up. The only shortcoming may be that the protagonist's current strength is a bit too invincible. It would be better to be slightly weaker. However, the author has begun to balance this problem later, and I believe it will get better and better.

It's been 23 years, and the system document is still so smart The protagonist and the system are just two talkers. The system is as smart as the individual. Half of the chapter is about two people having sex.

Come on, author, because your early development is in elementary school, many people don't like to read it, so few people read this book. Failures and successes are all written just right, especially from the lowest level to Ligue 1. It can reflect the growth process of the protagonist. It's not bad, right?

Originally I didn't like reading slow-paced books, but this book was really exciting [face covering]. I can only say that the writing is really good, and the feeling of slowly getting stronger and drawing cards is as exciting as playing a game. The process of the game is also very graphically written, and the players are also written very rigorously.

It's so beautiful that I can't give it a five-star review. I heard that after the author's liver bursts, a new liver will grow and become more energetic, so if the author doesn't burst his liver at this time, when will his liver burst!

The writing is very interesting, and the plot is unconventional, delicate, lively and interesting. I especially want to see the protagonist and his friends compete in the World Cup in the future and fulfill their wish that cannot be realized in reality. [Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like]

As a football fan, I think this book is the best after Space Wings and Blue Reed.

It's really interesting. I also played FIFA 23 when I was kicking ut, and the card drawing was really annoying. I hope there will be more authors.

Not bad, not bad. Ronaldinho will always be a god.

It's very beautiful, but the only flaw is that the author is too lazy and the update is too slow [almost crying]

This book is a fast-paced and compact book. It is very attractive and highly recommended. The author should just not give up.

The work is very good, keep up the good work

It's well written, I hope I won't be a eunuch if I continue writing it. Also, can it be made faster? It's not enough to watch.

It's very well written, I'll keep it for now

The author should better improve his writing skills! 'Come on!

It's a bit slow to heat up, but overall it's pretty good. Come on! God rewards those who work hard

It's very interesting, it's a good book, but you have to calm down and read it carefully, unlike other purely mindless and enjoyable articles [Thinking]

It looks good, but I just want to say that this person is a primary school student? [Cover face]

Nice! Come on, author

One chapter a day is not enough. Can you read two chapters a day? Of course, three chapters is not too much.

This is no better than the adult football system

I hope the author will update it soon, it's just so beautiful [Admiration]

It's really good. I felt very emotional when I read it. It's the first time I've read it since I was in primary school.

It's very exciting and beautiful. I hope the author will work hard to update it. Come on! ! !

Come on! Come on! This is my first time commenting to the author, please keep writing!

Yes, I just hope that the progress in adolescence will be faster and the progress in China will be faster.

Okay, that's great! !