The Advent of the Divine River: I Forge the Civilization of Immortals

Although your writing is not very good, although there are still many shortcomings, although I really want to fucking criticize you, but, okay, I like this subject matter, come on later, don't be a eunuch, the writing style, ideas, plot, etc., Think carefully before writing, don't be mean, write well

The new subject matter is quite good, I can read it well

A bit short. Come on!

The ideas are great, and so is the writing. Even better, there aren't so many conspiracy theories. I'm tired of reading conspiracy theories, so it's nice to have a book like this that doesn't contain conspiracy theories.

Write three books and you are really 6! But personally, it's not okay. Can there be more?

Good, good, good, good, good

Not bad, my brain is big enough

It can look good

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

The imaginative writing is good, as long as it doesn't fall apart in the later stages. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing dragging away from the plot. The key is that it's well written.