Online Game Nether Shooter

I don't read many game novels, but I like this one very much. The logic is rigorous, the setting of the background and the direction of the plot are very good. There is a realistic plot, but I hope it won't be too much. Personally, I feel that since it is a game type and it is an immersive open world, it is better to focus on the game. Come on, I hope it can be maintained. I can be regarded as a veteran who accompanies the opening of books [laughs] After a while, I just caught up with Zhou Ben to open the chapter. Let me talk about my feelings: the beginning of the novice village is a bit long. It can be said to be a way to express the protagonist's personality, or it can be said to be a kind of accumulation of the protagonist's strength in the early stage. After all, from the setting point of view, the protagonist is a game newbie. The only thing he can rely on is his extraordinary shooting skills and perseverance. To stand out, you must have a lot of experience. It may be a bit ink for readers who have read too much fast food writing, but it is still within the acceptable range. After arriving in the main city, it slowly developed in the direction of Invincible. It is understandable that the protagonist's main strength and attack are high, but how to reflect the significance of the attribute of agility, and almost all equipment will increase the power and sensitivity. The difference lies in intelligence. In other words, the current equipment settings are only divided into physical and magic, which results in the protagonist's output attribute of the equipment wearing T is still the same. Not bad. When being beaten by a group, as long as he is not charged, he can fly a kite with ease, let alone 1v1. The most unacceptable thing to me is that Zhou Ben can go beyond level 4 to fight alone. To be honest, this is out of the normal balance that I know a game should have. I hope the author will think more about the strength of the protagonist and the balance of attributes and equipment.

Not bad, but the plot is not new enough. For example, when I saw the orphanage, I guessed that there might be a plot about the orphanage dragging cheerleaders. When I saw you renting, I guessed that it must be a female roommate. From this, I thought that the female roommate was shocked. Please wait for the plot of the series... The writing is still good. I hope the author can describe the game world more, because this is the place most likely to surprise readers.

I originally wanted to give it four stars. It describes some of the protagonist's psychological activities and behavior, and I really hate the girl Siyu. However, the other stories you wrote about the dream go back to more than ten years ago, and it feels like a traditional online game. After all, it is not a rebirth, or something that can appear in reality, so I will give it five stars. I will read the following comment. I have written all the online games. If you really write like this, author, no one will read it. Moreover, I have just seen that the protagonist Yin Yang Jian has been unlocked and has not left the novice village. It is the first time for the protagonist to play the game. Many situations are unclear. I understand. I also understand the protagonist's young and impatient temper. Therefore, the protagonist showed impatience when doing this series of tasks. I understand the impatience, but I hope the author can write a growth-oriented protagonist. After all, online games are played with many adults in the society. There is no mature character, complete experience, strong strength, joy, anger, sorrow, betrayal, and friendship. The protagonist finally relies on the protagonist's aura to become a "strong man" in the novel. No one will read such a novel, even if there are only one or two of the above, as long as the protagonist keeps changing and growing, we will continue to support you, come on!

It's a very good web article, with a smooth storyline. The writing should be simple and not sloppy. I still hope that there will be only one female protagonist. The role of the female protagonist is to enrich the character of the male protagonist. I believe this is a good step.

It's a traditional online game that I haven't seen in a long time. It looks quite comfortable. I gave up after seeing this. A person who was so persistent before changed jobs and gave up his hidden career easily. I can't accept it.

I only feel sincere when commenting after reading them all. I don't know why I rated it so low. I personally feel that the author's thinking is clear, the task growth is not abrupt, the integration is not strange, and there is no need for time travel to transition the plot, but various plots and character settings are used to complete it, and it is fascinating bit by bit. It feels like the growth process of a small character like a mortal cultivating immortality. I hope to continue to maintain this style without too much plot fluctuations and transitions little by little. At the end, it is recommended not to integrate a world-wide harem. Only natural harmony can echo the previous and later.

The plot has ups and downs, I like the grassroots transformation, it's wonderful

It's okay, and she's the only one who doesn't feel disgusted to have two girls living in her own home. She doesn't have so many ambiguous and real friends, and the protagonist has been completing tasks in the early stage and has less conflict with most players. I can't say that the firepower attracted by the female character is not there. I can only say that it is very little. Of course, the protagonist There are also top-level skills and SSS professions in the future, but reality involves too much. Once the reality is updated, a trip out can attract a lot of hatred. And by coincidence, the two female characters are still the main point of conflict at this time. I hope they don't return to reality in the future and play the game well. . . . . .

Very good, not the starting SSS talent or profession. If you like to watch the opening SSS, you can just go. I'm used to reading those kinds of articles on the Internet and here to write negative reviews!

The profession is a rare bow and arrow, and the plot is relatively reasonable. Of course it has flaws, but it is much better than the "Poison Master" next door.

Five stars, the proportion of gold coins is reasonable, the level is reasonable, the equipment is reasonable, and the details are in place. This book is slow and very interesting. As long as the author keeps it up, brothers can add bookshelves. It is a really good online game. Only in 88 photos did the real profession appear, hahahaha, brothers

Is the sword wrong? It should be this arrow, right? I thought he was a swordsman but turned out to be a shooter [face covering]

Except for the inheritance of pig's feet, it seems to be good so far. The author should not write about others getting the 3s inheritance. Even if he is an Olympic champion, I don't believe he can get it. It's not like I haven't watched the Olympics. After reading the ending, it was so bad that I didn't want to watch it.

Overall, it suits my personal taste and is wonderful!

It's so beautiful, I want to read it all in one sitting

To be honest, this is the most interesting game novel I have ever read... Many people say it is bad at the end... But I don't think it... I just think it is not over yet. It is similar to the "previous part" and "second part" of many TV series... But the first part ends at this point. I think it is very appropriate... Wait for the "last part"... Big cheers for the author [laughing]

The author's traditional online game writing is really good. I like it very much. It's very comfortable to read. Moreover, I feel that the rhythm of the plot development of the article is also well grasped. I can learn from you, come on! [Top post][top post][top post]

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In this platform where exaggerated data flow is popular, it can be said that various arrangements are very reasonable! The look and feel is very smooth, and it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable at any point. At the same time, it also attracts me to read on. I didn't realize that I finished reading it after I pushed it for a while!

The writing is great, but the details of the properties could be improved.

A slow-paced traditional online game with no major shortcomings except for the lack of content.

The overall ending is very tense, the connection is very close, the pace is fast, and there is nothing sloppy, except for some chapters that take a long swim with attributes. The final battle was quite exciting, and the ending felt like an end and the beginning of another book.

"I'm amazed at how your pen has built such a wonderful world of novels! The charm of words blooms in your writing, making people intoxicated and unable to extricate themselves. Every word of yours is a carefully carved gem, gathered into an amazing literary treasure." 📚✨

A decent online game novel. The article is not bloated, the plot is not procrastinating, and there is no unfinished ending. It can be regarded as the best. It sucks! ! ! It looks good from the front, but it looks the same from the back. It's invincible.

To be honest, I have only watched a little bit, but the first part is pretty good. The plot and characters are also okay. I intuitively feel that it will be very good. I will give it a five-star rating first, and I can make changes at any time later. It's best to listen to the book, don't open the comment section while reading the book, believe me, there are a lot of zz in it

Traditional online games are basically gone. Great writing. There are just a lot of typos, hope they can be corrected

The camp changed into a documentary channel on the way out of the pig's feet. Destroy the virus and defend the path of justice.

The writing is good, but I only saw the novice village, but I pressed the protagonist a little too hard. . . There are still ideas that need to be slowly changed and upgraded quickly. Only with strength can you get better things, and better things will bring you more money! ! !

The setting is very similar to an ancient novel, Rebirth of the Warriors. Unfortunately, that book was published too early. The Internet was not developed at that time, and it was difficult to make much money. It was discontinued in the end. However, the book is really interesting. It can be said to be one of the first books to be circulated in online games, even earlier than Sword Art Online.

Very satisfied, very good, very beautiful