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This book is really great, really. It makes me feel that the author is serious about writing this book. I think it is no worse than those popular HP fans. The various descriptions are also great. I also like the setting. There are climaxes and puzzles. It makes me look forward to the following plot, and adds some ancient and mysterious things, which makes me look forward to it even more. I really feel that it is no worse than those books, but no one has discovered it yet, but this book will definitely become popular, because it is an excellent work in itself. Gold will shine wherever it is

It's very beautiful. I really love Rosie. I've never seen many crazy comments like this. As for CP Draco, it really fits the introduction. There is no mythical Draco character, but it may not suit us as readers very much. I think this book is superb even without CP. For example, the heroine kills her grandma by herself later, which also breaks the prison, isn't it? Falling in love with Draco only brought self-doubt to Rosie, but for a child who has lacked love since childhood, a piece of candy can satisfy her. The characters are all consistent. It is a pity that the ending of Harry Potter is the ending of this book. (Whispering, I feel that if Rosie and Tom were at the same time, they would definitely get along and kill all of Europe)

Hahaha, I feel that Draco's changes are so smooth and not awkward at all. "Tower of Thule", emmm, Tower always likes swordsmen in articles. I love Rosie, I love the author [laughing][laughing], even the unruly writing about Sirius is hard to hate.

I have just read Chapter 18 now. The previous chapters are all very good. The protagonist's chaotic neutrality and madness are both cute. My father's attributes of doting on his wife and daughter are very good, but the appearance of my mother, especially the smell of the Virgin, makes me shy away.

I'm kidding! ! ! Let's just say that based on my experience of reading dozens of HP fics, it's not a loss to invest in it, friends! ! ! The writing is excellent, the characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot is very compact. Although I don't know much about occult things, I feel like the author is either interested or has read the information on purpose. The growth and changes of the protagonist are also written in great detail. It really feels like Xiaolong has grown up and has taken on more responsibility! ! The character of the heroine has also been well written, and the character setting is completely different from most HP original characters. The last time I liked the original character more than the original character was in The Mute Wizard and (I forgot the name of this book, my memory is not good, I only remember the plot: the heroine traveled through time and became a magical creature, and then fell in love with Snape. At the end, Albus said that the heroine is not from my race. He also said that Lily could be resurrected with the heroine's heart or something, and then Snape killed the heroine and really resurrected Lily. After the heroine died, the soul saw it, and then the heroine's soul was attached to Voldemort. I don't remember it later. If anyone who saw my comment knows it, please tell me, I want to go and give it a try, thank you) In short, this is a strong recommendation, friends! ! ! !

I like this style. The heroine Rosie is very suitable to my taste. She has a strange mind and is eloquent, just like a lonely child. Looking forward to the subsequent revelations and foreshadowing of why her grandmother imprisoned her and her brother. And Draco, from the arrogant young master, has gradually grown into a responsible person. He knew Rosie's uneasiness and pain, and was once afraid of her indifference and unreasonableness, but he still stood in front of her from behind who needed protection. Rosie's first friend, her first crush... Her future partner was Draco. Draco's first friend, his first crush... His partner was Rosie. Their story is unfinished and the days ahead are long. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is truly the most wonderful fanfic I have ever read. It is worth every story to push my poor imagination to the ground and rub it in order to look at the world that is so big and imaginative. Yes, you can feel it by reading stories. Your spiritual world must be wonderful, and I was lucky enough to get a glimpse of it through stories. Crazy confession of my big brain, so whimsical!

The wonderful character creation shows the complexity of human nature. It is also a rare book in which the female protagonist is crazy but her behavior is logical. The writing is smooth, but sometimes drags on too much which makes it a bit depressing in some places. The characters in it are full of emotions and desires, and there are no great saints or inherently bad villains. The heroine's transformation from chaos and evil to later learning love and loyalty is very delicately described (but it's really a bit depressing, and it made me feel a little heartbroken). I fully agree with the author's three views, so it is not suitable for readers who like the heroine to be self-centered and kill whoever gets in the way. The portrayal of Draco is very consistent with my impression of the two generations of Malfoy. There is no pure right and wrong, everything is based on profit. I have seen some people being dissatisfied with choosing their family over the heroine and their family, but this is what makes Draco's character very vivid. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also very realistic. There is no idealistic love affair, nor is it just realism. The young master who was born with a silver spoon in his mouth and the witch who is bound by a high tower, the emotions between them are destined to not be pure. Emotions in the world are not without reason. Draco gives the heroine a friendship that she has never experienced before, and the heroine wakes up Draco who is addicted to utopia. This is the cornerstone of their relationship, so their emotional line will not be as confusing as a rootless duckweed.

It's very novel, and I really like some of the magic in it that is different from the Hogwarts system. The only drawback is that Draco relies on Draco to save the heroine. I was really looking forward to her own successful counterattack...

The writing is super good, and it is the one that makes me feel the most unique among all the HP fanfics. After reading the entire novel, I can see how Baby Rosie is getting rid of her parents and the relationship with the male protagonist Draco step by step. It is also very good [heartfelt]. But I really don't understand the heroine's mother. She let a house elf take the heroine's place. I really feel sorry for the heroine😭

Dear author: This novel is more like a combination of a witch, a witch, and a Taoist priest (I mean the heroine's abilities) and there is actually a plot about a priest. I have to say, although this fusion feels a bit confusing, it is awesome [sending my heart] The heroine is indeed scary in the early stage, but the current combination is really amazing. Draco gradually got used to Rosie's behavior, and discouraged and joined in. Narcissa attempts to transform Rosie into an elegant... Um... Lady? Er, noble lady. In the casino? That paradise lost place, I was really stunned!!! It is a tense and lazy scene, confident but not too proud, excellent appearance, and an oppressive aura. Ahhhhh [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Under the banyan tree, Rosie directly transformed into a gentle girl, which should and cannot be, um... A contrast. Warm and sweet picture [blowing kiss] Dear author, please sprinkle sugar like crazy! This kind of companionship and joint efforts is really amazing [admiration] I hope you will work hard to update!!!! Your dear reader, little cutie [shy][blowing kiss] (Originally I wanted to write more letters, but it ended up being a complaint [face covering] [asking for more news] [please ask for more news])

It adds a lot of new world views, which are very charming and show Draco's growth. It's rare that there is no fandom surrounding the trio. Halfway through this book, I knew that I couldn't judge any of the characters in it, it was like they were really living in a magical world.

It's really beautiful. Please, Rosie is really growing up and developing into something better. At first, I was just sad and weeping for her unfortunate childhood and her unknown/hateful/relieved/family. I was even angry and determined. But as the story developed, I experienced the feelings of different people, and even felt relieved after the encounter. The heroine's temper was not weird, but instead I find it cute, and I will meet Draco who will be with him for a lifetime. I will experience the bondage of life and death and the involvement of love again and again in the article. I think that things that are not good at first will only become more brilliant after going through the wind and rain. I will always support Rosie and Draco. I believe that they can bring me different HP and different feelings. I would like to pay tribute to the author and Rowling [sending my heart]

The heroine is well designed, the writing is very delicate, and it is a relatively novel way of writing. Rosie's life experience is such that it will make you feel distressed whenever you see it. The emotional line is quite good in the early stage, but you should do your best later on. It depends on yourself, and you should be firm in controlling the heroine. I feel that the later emotional line somehow forgives Draco, and it seems that he is not like the original Rosie. It may also be because I accepted the original character of the heroine, but I am not used to her growth (probably), and it is like, uh, the princess has bowed her head (a very embarrassing way of saying it) (Personal opinion, don't troll, don't bully, reject online violence, parents are still alive, not an orphan, just represent an individual, know how to be a good person, have a mother, don't criticize, tell the truth, don't troll, my young heart can't stand it, if it offends you, I will first say sorry) Overall it's pretty good.

Among the many HP fanfics, this is a novel with a very novel theme. Compared with other fan fiction in the past, it has its own independent story and independent script. Instead of a plot that always revolves around the storyline of the protagonist trio. The author's writing style is profound and the charm of this novel is fully reflected in words. This is completely Rosie's own story, and Draco's image exceeds our stereotype of him, living out his own self and full of charm. I like this novel very much and thank the author for letting us see a different world. ❤️🖤

It's super beautiful. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and has a deep reserve of literary knowledge. Although I can't understand some of the stories (because the names of these foreigners are too long and I'm a little confused), I can say that this is a very complete and independent work. The other HP fanfics I have read are all within the framework of movies and novels, and the characters are also very stereotyped public impressions. This is the only one. Madam created the character of Draco in a very three-dimensional way. I can see his growth and there are still shadows of the original work. Moreover, Rosie is also a very mature heroine! Who knows! Not a brainless little girl like Mary Sue! He's a character with a very complete personality. I've been watching HP fandoms for several years, and it was the first time I watched it. It was really fun. The pleasure in the past was the pleasure of the bereaved characters in the drama dying well in the fan fiction. The pleasure of this book for me is the pleasure of reading an interesting work with mature and perfect characters. Moreover, my wife's writing is beautiful, the emotional part and the description of the atmosphere are both beautiful. So why did Rotten Persimmon give it this point? !

Very nice, looking forward to updates I originally thought it was just an ordinary fanfic, but I didn't expect that my wife added so many fantasy and ancient elements to it. Draco is also slowly growing up, [adoration][adoration]

It took me two days to read this book in one sitting The whole person has been sublimated! What the author wrote is so cool! (I think cool is the best way to describe this book!) I really like the growth of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. They are both imperfect people, but they are working hard to change themselves for the better. (I really watched Draco grow into a man who can stand on his own step by step) The author really writes with great care. It can be seen that he has consulted a lot of information. The logic of the whole book is very reasonable and makes people want to read on. The heroine is really a very cute girl. Some people may think she is a little crazy, but there is no one who is not crazy haha I really like the theology and logic in this book. This book is more like an independent novel than a fan, bringing us another beautiful and magical world. (The worldview of this book really touched my heart) PS. I really like Ace! ! ! I want to raise one! ! ! The extra chapter is also very interesting, I hope the author can finish it!

Full marks, the characterization is quite full. Personally, I can understand Rosie's parents, but I don't agree with their actions. Additionally, Draco's journey to save Rosie felt like the prince in Rapunzel saving the princess. Personally, I feel that the two of them are going in both directions. Maybe Rosie doesn't believe that Draco would choose to give up his family. But Draco managed to balance the two and successfully saved Rosie (although this was thanks to Luna). Rosie also tried hard not to let what she had to bear (even though she was forced to bear it) be discovered by Draco, for fear that he would leave her. The emotional descriptions are delicate and true. The process of two people getting together is really about getting to know each other and then getting along with each other. I'm glad that they successfully passed the adjustment and became a better version of themselves, and also gained a beautiful relationship. The description of the magical world in the article is very interesting. I can clearly recognize that the author read a large amount of relevant information when writing this book, and absorbed it into an independent world in his own mind. The magical world is bizarre and bizarre, and the author's construction of the world is just right. All in all, full marks. Don't be afraid of your pride!

Well! I admit that the writing is good, so I gave it four stars. If I had read this book in middle school, I would have read it to the end (I read 2/3). The heroine's native family is very bad (I am too old to watch this, and my blood vessels tend to ache when I watch tragedies). Xiaolong, this pampered child who can be said to be spoiled by some people (in the early stages of the original work), uses his own way to pull the heroine out of the quagmire of her native family. The plot is unexpected and completely different from other HP novels. It has a very novel plot and setting. The plot clues are a bit deep. If you don't understand it, remember to read the commentary.

This is definitely the most shocking fanfic I have ever read. I am impressed by the protagonist's personality and powerful wisdom, and pay tribute to his tenacity, bravery, and unyielding love until death. I really admire the author's writing style. I must have studied a lot about Greek mythology and ancient Egyptian legends, and he has written such powerful black magic and various rituals. I really like it. Looking forward to the big new book! I really hope that the hero Regulus can live well [sending heartfelt messages] Note: Love is patient and kind. Infinity is placed in the palm of your hand, a moment is eternity. The way to salvation does not lie in others. The way to salvation lies within. I really love these sentences [sending my heart]

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The story is not cliché at all. It does not use the more clever HP main line to shape the characters and tell the story. Instead, it combines the myths of ancient Greece and Egypt to create a more grand and gorgeous magical world belonging to this book. It can be said that it uses HP character settings, such as Harry, Hermione, Neville, and the hero of this article, Draco, to develop a story of its own. There are many stories about Rosie and Draco's adventures in other countries. The main plot and detailed presentation are very exciting. You can read it in one go without stopping. It also includes some inexplicable cold humor to give readers some breathing space. The writing is really profound. Let's talk about the shortcomings. In my opinion, the growth of the heroine is not enough. One of her characteristics is that she is strong and tenacious, so her main task is to try to unlock her own shackles. Another characteristic is that she is sharp and aggressive, so her other purpose is to get love. So what about the ending after so much effort? The male protagonist Draco completed the final rescue of her and gained Draco's love. Tsk. So when it comes to Draco, his character arc is really complete, and his transformation is also very amazing. From being able to only stand behind Rosie, being implicated by her, being attracted by her, being broken by her limitations, being led by her to see a wider world, understand more real human nature, gain inner growth and enrichment, make decisions closer to the heart, and also gain more complete growth and more charming expression. Really, this Draco is so charming. Well, what I can't stand the most is that the heroine failed to be smart in her busy work. Draco's manipulation to walk through her past and complete her redemption (both body and soul) is very powerless. In addition, several original characters, including the heroine's parents, each have their own limitations. I really can't tell whether it is a matter of the author's preference or ability. The original characters (including the heroine) are all so poorly created, but Draco is truly unique and charming. Alas, it's both beautiful and uncomfortable. To put it bluntly, the heroine has a strong sense of subjectivity around other people, but in the relationship between the two, she creates a perception that she is a subordinate in power, that is, he can have many choices, but she only has him. Therefore, this kind of inequality in possessions will cause a power imbalance in perception. Even if we actually know from a God's perspective that she can choose other paths and have other companions, but in terms of plot content, you just know that Draco is the only one and she can only choose him. She does not want other paths, which is uncomfortable.

There are a lot of magical new things, the writing is also very good, and the heroine is interesting, but I can't read it because I just want to follow the Harry Potter plot! But there is no denying that this is a good book

I feel that the author's writing style is nothing to say, and the writing is quite good. Although this is a fan novel, the author has his own ideas and integrates various themes very well. The heroine is a wizard, but the article also contains some demons, Bibles, and the like. The imagination is quite big. I feel like the early writing was very good. But in the later stage, the boss was so strong, but it was over in just two chapters. Including Voldemort. I felt a little rushed to finish it, but the overall story is still very complete, so I praised it.

Super awesome! Different from other HP fanfics I have read, the author not only sets the background in Rowling's magical world, but also intersperses it with other Western backgrounds such as ancient Greek mythology and the more avant-garde "Faust". I really like this!

It's super beautiful. It not only relies on the original work, but also opens up another complete story line and is embedded in the original work. This is a second creation. The author is great.

Absolutely It can't be considered top-notch among HP fans because various plots are omitted; but in my mind, it is considered top-notch because it almost opens up a new world. Xiao Qian is a lunatic, and her relationship with Xiao Long is also very sweet. It is not the sweetness that is out of place, but the sweetness that comes naturally and saves each other. The author is not limited to the stereotype that the protagonist needs to save the world. Instead, he omits the role of the savior Harry and lets him save his world. Xiaolong and Xiaoqian can do things in the second battlefield without stealing the scene. Moreover, in the last paragraph, Xiaolong is basically saving the protagonist Xiaoqian, which can be regarded as subverting the stereotype that the protagonist has to bear more responsibilities. After all, Xiao Qian was too miserable and too good to be saved. Regarding opening up another world, it is an insertion of mysticism, and the integration is perfect. Although it may seem difficult to understand, everyone can understand it, so it is not called mysticism. The author must have collected a lot of information, and the things involving Egypt are also very professional, great

Kuku finished showing off! ! ! Good looking! A very rare subject, it is the adventure novels that I loved to read when I was a child + the occult science that I am now curious about. How come there is a wife who is so good at conceiving plots! Love Mrs. Leah's operatic part, the words and sentences are really operatic, and the plots of the twelve evil spirits and the devil are also closely linked. I also like the character of the heroine. She is not just too strong. She has a mixture of ignorant evil and good in her heart, but she is also sincere enough. I can't praise you enough. My wife has written a hundred books and I'm showing off a hundred! ! !

Beautiful, love watching. But it's relatively small. Just look at it for a while and it's 20%. For long-term happiness, I'll save it and just look at it from time to time. The following are some of my opinions on this book, which may not necessarily be correct. I hope it can be helpful to book lovers. As mentioned before, I have only watched 20% of the story so far. In this plot, I saw the heroine recover a little from her paranoia. Her growth lies in her letting go of her attachment to other people's opinions. Others do hold such opinions, but they are not necessarily correct. As for the emotional line, they are currently friends, but like many works involving European and American culture, although they are just friends, there are many ambiguous behaviors between friends that I have seen in domestic reality that should not be regarded as friends. At present, I like the changes of the two in this kind of friendship. Regarding subsequent relationships, I personally like ambiguous plots, but this article is to my liking and I will continue reading. This article outputs a lot of the author's thoughts, about the mechanism of capital operation, paranoid love, and the plot of the twin sisters. I like it very much. The author's writing style will not be like that of a green novice, making the article too boring. Regarding the interpretation of the heroine's thoughts, the heroine begins to get rid of the ideas brought by her parents that are not objective and correct. There are also descriptions of children showing off and inconsistent behavior (laughs) , the description of other supporting characters will not be as wrong as some fanfics. You cannot change the original protagonist or other characters into the villain in your novel just because your protagonist is a villain. You can describe the protagonist's shortcomings without being biased, but you cannot change the protagonist's character and behavior. This is extremely OOC and very disgusting. The above is my reflection after reading some not-so-good fanfics. It was also my disgust, which made me mention issues unrelated to the article after I found a fanfic that currently does not have such behavior. However, there are many such behaviors, which can also reassure book friends who also have such troubles. This is why I did not delete the above irrelevant words. I really haven't read too much of this article. If I have some new ideas and opinions in the future, I will review it again.