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It's good-looking, although it's a bit weak in some places, but the plot is still very compact. I feel that it has been written very well. So can you add an update to my five-star review? [Sinister smile]

There are invincibles, cool stories, and nothing boring. Compared with a novel of two to three thousand chapters, the character creation is still okay, but after all, the short length does not create many sympathetic plots, and the author does not write much about the fighting process (maybe because the author wants the ending, but actually I think it is okay, after all, the sense of substitution is not strong, and writing too much will only be counterproductive). The addition of new elements in the later stages of the plot (space battleships, galactic civilization, etc.) Makes the novel richer, and the ending is also a lot of brain-burning (low-dimensional civilization cannot understand high-dimensional civilization)

It's a cool novel, but it's not the kind of mindless cool novel written by Long Aotian. The characters are well portrayed. There is currently no clear distinction between good and bad, and there is clear information about death, which makes this novel very interesting and interesting. I have seen the ending, and the shortcoming is that there are too many stitches. I am more accustomed to reading novels with a little more brains. The protagonist is a very cold person in the initial setting, but we all know that people will change, so the protagonist will also change like his sister in the future. As for the detailed explanation of science, the author has written it very well, at least for ordinary people to understand. I still like the protagonist Qiang. Others are playing chess on the chessboard and trying their best to drive others off the chessboard. But the protagonist is different. As a bystander, he has the ability to overturn the table at any time. There are many pitfalls in this book, and it mainly focuses on the echo between the beginning and the end.

It's a pretty good ending, and the holes that need to be filled are filled in. It's not a bad ending, so you can watch it. The emotions between the male and female protagonists are natural and warm, there is no discomfort, and the relationship is very sweet. As for the shortcomings, it does drag a bit in the front, but it will get better after the establishment of Sky City, and it will be a constant fight in the back. And the worldview span of the whole book is not very big, so I won't spoil it here. There are not many divisions in terms of strength. There are only level one to level five contaminants, strategic level, and the following Star Destroyer Cannons, Magicians, Insect Emperors, Human and God Mechas, and Gods. There is no intuitive concept, but they just feel that they are getting stronger and stronger. In fact, the male protagonist did not have the ability to lift the table in the early stage. It is normal for some people to feel frustrated and unable to stand it.

One of the books in Tomato that can be read without thinking. The setting is a bit patchwork and borrowed from many TV series. The plot is pretty good, although some of the logic doesn't make sense, but it's generally watchable. The character development is pretty good, and the main focus is outstanding. Summary: A nonsensical love story with a smooth plot. I haven't watched the ending in a few days. Is it so sloppy?

I feel that this book is really readable. The characters are also my favorite type. It also draws on many interesting elements. It can be said that the composition is relatively complex. There is no full rating because it is inevitable to be stunned when seeing familiar characters. This last star is because I hope the author can greatly improve the cultural connotation and add more original elements. If the author has a special liking for these familiar characters and plots, it is acceptable to use this as a pleasure in writing. After all, interest is also a major source of motivation for writing. (I have also read about 100 chapters, but my understanding is not deep enough, so I can only feel a little about myself)

Suggestions before watching: I didn't want to give it five stars at first, but after thinking about it, this one is indeed one of the better ones in Tomato. Let's talk about the advantages first. The early plot is relaxed and interesting, and it also integrates many famous scenes (or settings) of anime, making it a joy to cook. The shortcoming is, the giant sword! If you watch it carefully, there will be a knife at the end (which is unbearable for me at least), and people will turn black when watching it. Then when the 500th chapter is approaching, it is a classic romance routine, and the male protagonist does not have strong personal combat power, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. Maybe this is the reason why I like fantasy (most fantasy is about their own strength) Reading suggestions: In the early stage, it is an invincible and exciting story. In the middle stage, you need to use your brains to think about it. In the later stage, a lot of people died. People who are more emotional need to have good knife resistance. There are more sugars in the front and more knives in the back. Although the ending of the last hundred chapters can be known in advance, I still burst into tears because of the knives. Don't fall into the trap if you don't want to see the knives! O(╥╥)o

The subject matter is quite interesting, and the content is also good. I have read more than 200 chapters so far. I think there are still some flaws. For example, the protagonist is 1,000 years ahead of technology, so the technology here is not worth mentioning. Why not just hack into the entire network, so that most of the world's news can be mastered? There are also some bald characters that I don't like very much. If you see a good-looking girl, you will call me "wife", even if you have level 5 strength, it feels very bad. The above are all my personal opinions, but I still like this book. I hope the author will work harder.

This book is quite good, with a novel subject matter, a combination of magic and technology, and a good integration without a sense of fragmentation. And it was also better to fill in the gaps in the later stage without leaving any big holes or loopholes. At the same time, the characterization is also good, with distinct personalities, unique and unique, and the emotional lines are also well written, neither awkward nor monotonous. It's just that the plot is too tight, the plot development and conflicts are too intensive, there are relatively few buffer parts, and the whole fight is easy to cause fatigue, but there is nothing mentally weak. The IQs of both the protagonist and villain are online, so it is quite interesting to watch.

It's so beautiful. It has a lot of funny elements. I praised this book [like] [like] [like] [like] [angry] and there is a sense of friendship in it. It can be said that it is a ceiling-level book with a single female protagonist. Come on! Come on! Come on＾0＾~

Although the combat power is not very reasonable, judging from Shuangwen's entry point, it is relatively OK. The logic is not very rigorous, but it is reasonable throughout the whole story, because the novel does not introduce the specific principles of combat power, and most of it depends on the reader's own imagination. If it is unreasonable, they can just make up their minds, so it doesn't hurt to be a little lax. Generally speaking, the novel has always been written with a focus on the theme, without deviating from the main line. The emotional line is also passable, and there are no brainless plots. The writing style and transitional plot are not to mention very good, but at least they are comfortable to watch. There is no sense of abruptness or verbosity, so I give it five stars.

I really like this book... The background story is very grand, and the details about various plots and characters are also handled very well. The relationship between Mu Yue and Mu Yixue is really sweetly written; the CP between Xu Qin and Luo Cheng is also very good... Wait, wait, wait, see for yourselves. But the fly in the ointment is that this book is relatively average in its emotional writing except for the protagonist, and it is harsh in many places. There are also things about technology that are written in a relatively simple way, with just a name mentioned, but this book is not a science fiction novel, so that's understandable. Also, I feel like my combat power is a bit low, but it doesn't matter, it's not a big problem. To sum up, this book is the best one I have read on Tomato. I really recommend reading it.

Pretty good It's pretty good, not too brainless, the girl is ecstatic

I stayed up all night to finish reading it later, and I felt a little confused and didn't know how to evaluate it. There are some shortcomings, but it is still very exciting, and the holes dug have been filled. The characterization is also very interesting. As far as Mu Yue is concerned, he who traveled from the earth to the Blue Star doesn't care what the world is like. If he's unhappy, he can just blow up. With such a mentality, he and Yixue depend on each other, support each other and grow up. The image they create gives me an inexplicable "humor" (my weird laugh point) The plot is also arranged reasonably, from traveling to Blue Star, enrolling in school, gradually discovering the world, starting a war, and ending. Overall, it has a very comfortable pace, and the plot slowly describes everyone's image. It's not the kind of mindless novel, and the setting is self-consistent enough. It's a relatively excellent work. One small drawback is that some parts of the content are told very quickly. Although the setting time passes very quickly, there is still a feeling that it will end soon. I feel so sleepy that I can't organize my thoughts well. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better, his writing power will be directly integrated into the creation stone, and his inspiration library will skyrocket. Come on [Like][Like]

It seems that the idea is very clear, it is a normal story, there are few cars, I don't know whether it is a shortcoming or an advantage, the ending of Wang and Luo is not clear, I think this is a shortcoming, the bald head did not find Nannan, and there is a bit of a knife, this is a shortcoming, but it is different from other works. Generally speaking, The shortcomings are not important at all, you can ignore them and just read it. It is a very normal and normal cheating story. It does not have the stubborn feeling of the protagonist hiding his strength in other novels. I recommend it with 12 points out of 10. The author's other two novels are also very good, especially the one that is currently being serialized. It is a top campus novel.

Genshin Impact Level 60, Star Railroad Level 70, Honkai Impact Level 88, Zero Zone Zero Level 40, National Server Ma Chao, One Silver Goblin, Rat Man, 300 pounds, bathe once every ten years, no more than 5 steps outside the house, I like it Playing Kizaru, 1.4 Meters tall, loves to take on the role, no job, 10 million in debt, greasy, yellow hair, beer belly, four eyes, 12-year-old housekeeper, loves to play the fifth personality, has read thousands of movies, his idol is Brother Gang, and he actively watches it.

It's worth watching, the back part is great, the plot is very imaginative, and the pitfalls are almost filled in. Although there are some minor flaws in the details, such as the author mistakenly remembering that the perfect gene potion is thunder, and later writing it as "hot", but it doesn't matter. In the general direction, there is no problem, it is very interesting. Looking forward to new books

It's still good, and all the holes that have been revised have been filled in. The appearance of the galactic civilization is a bit abrupt, but it disappears quickly. The plot is quite good. There are quite a lot of knives, but they are all small knives. For a veteran like me, they won't affect me at all [smile][smile] There is still a hole that has not been filled, that is, didn't Blue Star say that they would establish a demon kingdom? They mentioned it and then disappeared.

The author's writing is still very good. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very personal. The emotional line of the whole book is a highlight, and the supporting characters are also very well-characterized. Everyone is very colorful. The only drawback is that I personally feel that the author wrote a bit too hastily at the end. Readers who focus on emotions may like this neat ending, but for readers like me who are obviously reading novels but are still picky, the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. People's will, like The Coming of Black Clothes, is just mentioned in one stroke, like the ancestor of the blood clan, I personally feel that he comes and goes inexplicably, but I don't know how to write novels, it's just my own feeling, maybe a truly good work must be detailed and comprehensive. Overall, this book is very good, I was originally going to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, this is an online novel, and it is just for readers to kill time. The author's writing is already very good, and it deserves five stars.

Aside from being criticized for being very similar to a certain anime. The plot, foreshadowing, and twists of the entire work are very good. Although many plots are classic, they are still very lethal to me. With such a huge worldview and so many settings, the author is still able to do it in an orderly manner, leaving almost no unfilled holes. In addition, this work contains a large number of plots that pay tribute to anime works and a certain two-character game, which also enriches the viewing experience. But the only drawback is that the author's writing style may still be a little green, and there is a lot of room for improvement. This work is very slow to develop emotionally. It is a pity that many supporting characters did not make it to the end, and the rest did not have a detailed description of their endings. In the last one or two hundred chapters, I feel that the plot progresses significantly faster, which is contrary to the leisurely daily life before. Unfortunately, the emotional line of the male and female protagonists only begins to officially develop here. This is a great work

I personally think this book is really beautiful. The only minor flaw is the combat design. The first one is about wood and grass. At first, Luo Cheng's element was wood, but later it turned into grass after the young master of the Mo family appeared. The second is the combat power of the metal element. There should be a high-level combat power of the metal element. Then the setting of the metal element should also be biased towards auxiliary skills, such as confinement skills and defense skills. The other one is suppression skills. The first two are easy to say. Suppression is similar to condensing a huge metal obelisk and smashing it down. Personally, I don't think this book is very big, but it is very exciting. The plot does not drag on, it is very exciting to read, and it does not have a bad ending. I personally think it is worthy of five stars. The above two points are only small flaws and shortcomings, which do not affect the viewing experience.

I first knew from the introduction that this was a brother-sister novel. It's quite interesting to read this novel with a lucky heart. Unlike some other siblings who are really boring. At the same time, the author also stitched in a lot of anime stuff. For example, there are some anime such as a certain scientific railgun, a certain scientific Accelerator, and the main characters of the male and female protagonists, such as the inferior student at a magic technology high school. The plot and characterization are both good. It's pretty good in the early stages, but a little weak in the later stages. I highly recommend reading it, and the plot of the whole novel is super sweet.

It's a beautiful book that I love to read. It's a rare book that I can persist in reading, and I keep reading whenever I have time. Whether it's the main plot or the emotional line, it all suits my taste. The main plot is decisive in killing, the male protagonist's IQ is online, and his combat power has not collapsed. The emotional line develops step by step, is reasonable, step by step, and is extremely sweet (my favorite is the single heroine [blowing kiss]). It's hard to find a book that satisfies me both in terms of combat and emotion. The final ending is not too rushed, resolving the previous foreshadowing and also laying the groundwork for a new book that may be published later. The plot is also very fascinating, especially the setting of the protagonist a thousand years ago and a thousand years later. I really love it [blowing kiss] and support the author (I have added the author's three books to my bookshelf)

It's very good-looking, the whole text is peaceful, invisible, not expressive, not awkward to watch, the overall situation is under control, comfortable to watch, very good, it makes people think when they are calm. (See how long it takes to read by the way)

Many people who only give low stars after watching it for more than ten minutes and an hour are indeed biased. Although it is not a masterpiece after reading it in full, it is indeed interesting. The plot is interesting and the fun is enough. There are knives and candies. Except for the last part where the world view unfolds a bit too fast, it is quite good.

I finally finished reading it. It's so good. I personally like this kind of "semi-invincible" novel, and it's not that I don't give a reason to travel back in time. In addition to the protagonist, some secondary characters are also well portrayed. For example, the two straight lines of "The Demon King and the Brave Man" and "The Bald Head and the Witch" are quite interesting to watch. That's right, can you write a story about Mu Yue's son? [What] I'm waiting to read the new book. You Mu Yue just blew my mind. Don't bring something so appetizing. By the way, I whispered: By the way, the meteor that Su Qingyu and Lin Chen traveled through was not Mu Yue's doing, right [eating melon]

The subject matter is novel and the content is quite rich. The plot is both sharp and sweet. It is not uncomfortable to read. The characters are also well created. It's just that the final combat power felt a bit broken. Everything else is within the acceptable range. It's a good read.

It's so good-looking. The emotional line is the main focus. The balance of combat power is the most perfect I've ever seen. Appropriate knives and the deaths of a large number of supporting characters all enhance the entire atmosphere. The protagonist is neither a bad guy nor a heartless person. Every step makes sense. Recommended to read unconditionally, some parts are a bit watery, the character's death is a bit too bland, otherwise the rating would be 9.5

The character creation and plot construction are quite good. The clues and foreshadowing are throughout the whole text. It feels quite innovative and the content is deep. The main reason is that each character's perspective is quite comprehensive. If you want to have fun, this is a good book worth reading.

It's over. Overall, this book is good. It has a wonderful plot and sweet emotional lines. The foreshadowing laid out in the previous article is also well filled in, and it also foreshadows the next book, which makes people look forward to it. Although the book is a good book, I personally think there is room for improvement. For example, Nan Nan and Chen Jingyan's emotional line, I personally think is a bit abrupt; and the part where Chen Jingyan drops the knife feels very sudden and without any foreshadowing. In short, I hope the author can continue to bring us high-quality works, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง