She Drove the Heroine White Lotus Crazy When She Entered Xiuxianwen

Not bad, but I don't know what will happen next

It was okay at first, but after the two fell in love and their names changed, I felt that the style of the painting was different, and I didn't have the desire to continue reading it. But it's still a good review, the author has worked hard [like][like][like]

It's nice to watch, but the ending is too sudden [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Let me tell you, the author, is this ending too hasty?

WHO can tell me ??? The ending is a bit sloppy, isn't it? I haven't seen enough yet! It's still a bit unfinished, but overall it's still very interesting to watch, but I feel like a lot of my doubts have not been resolved. I hope the author will make some more extras! Otherwise it would be a pity

I don't know why this book's rating is so low, but this is the only book I can read after reading so many books. The ending is a bit rushed. The rest of the plot is good

Oh, all I can say is that it's too little, too little [shy], from beginning to end, it's just love [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss], the original male lead and the original female lead had too many scenes [scrolls lips], just two little grasshoppers jumping around in front of my eyes all the time [scrolls lips], and there are still a few pitfalls that have not been buried, such as the relationship between the male protagonist and the demons, the male protagonist's parents, the female protagonist's parents, and what else I want to see Extras, such as Shen Yu and Jin Shasha, and some of the daily life between the male protagonist and the female protagonist after returning from the demon clan. It would be better to have a few more children, hehehehe [shy], and how Yun Ting and Uncle Xuanqing got together, ahhhhh [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh], okay, everyone, come and watch [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

The ending is like fast forwarding, it's pretty good

It was super good-looking, but the ending was so rushed that I felt like I didn't get enough of it. It was interrupted all of a sudden

@ @ @ What is the realm of cultivation like? Earlier it was said that the senior brother broke through the Yuanying stage by refining the void and returning it to the void (it seems), then the heroine's uncle said that he was a god, and now the heroine said that after the Yuanying stage, he left the body. So what is the realm like?

Such a beautiful book only has a rating of 7 or 4. Oh my god. I recommend everyone to read it. The article is fluent and free of verbal abuse, and the heroine's character is okay, but why does Mr. Rong get close to the heroine? This hole has not been filled, and what is the relationship between the Demon Lord and the male protagonist has not been revealed! The ending is rushed, but the rest is very good. Looking forward to the author's new work📖

I think the relationship between the Demon Lord and the male protagonist is unusual. It's very possible that the Demon Lord is the male protagonist's father. It's possible. And I think the ending is too hasty. I hope there will be a side story [laughs][laughs][laughs]

I love it so much, I really like watching the interaction between Yun Ning and Ye Qingyuan [laughing], ahhh! But I also really want to know the true identity of the demon king (forgive me for not being able to figure it out [face covering]). Everything else is super good [laughs]

It was very interesting, but the ending was too hasty. The description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists needs to be improved. There are other characters that were well created, but the story between them ended before it could develop. It was a bit unsatisfactory. I hope there will be a follow-up and look forward to the follow-up.

Dear author, don't you think the ending is hasty? I want to see the follow-up [shy][shy][shy]

Although the ending is a bit perfunctory, it's overall good

The soul of the heroine Yun Ning traveled to the world of immortality in the book. With the system, she had to continuously challenge the male and female protagonists in the original book to commit suicide in order to increase her vitality. Fortunately, she finally met Ye Qingyuan in the book. As long as she has physical contact with Ye Qingyuan, her health can be increased. After the two got married, the heroine succeeded! The original heroine of this book is too bad and doesn't deserve to be the heroine of this world at all! Having a dream that can predict the future was wasted on a bad person like her!

It's quite interesting, but there are some holes left unfinished. You Qi wants to know who the Demon Lord is and what his relationship is with the male protagonist!

It looks good. The heroine has a straightforward and rebellious personality. The ending is a little rushed.

It's good to read, and it's one of the books I've read about cultivating immortality that I rarely jump to. There is basically no nonsense, and there are relatively many descriptions of battle scenes, but it can be said to be a refreshing and sadistic novel. The novel is not long, and it did not give me the feeling that it was too long and tired and I didn't want to persist anymore. Recommend~

Overall it was okay, the ending was too fast!

Not bad. I look forward to continuing to slap the original male and female protagonists in the face later.

Good luck to the author, it's very interesting.

The opening and closing scenes at the beginning of the plot are very enjoyable. The heroine is not pretentious and does whatever she wants. As long as she is not embarrassed, others will be embarrassed.

The overall plot and the strength of the male and female protagonists are both good. At least no one had any misunderstandings. At least the Immortal Cultivation Sect was very upright and stood on the side of the heroine. The original heroine also died soon after. In the end, the villain was an evil person from the Immortal Cultivation Sect. In the end, an old incident was involved and was solved by the heroine and other Immortal Cultivators.

The ending point is a bit too hasty! Overall it looks good! Good review!

Not bad, but the ending is a bit rushed The ending is really speechless😓😓😓

The ending is a bit hasty! Hope you continue to work hard! An Ning, Yuanyuan, goodbye! ~(￣▽￣~)~ 2023.7.21

It's still good, but the ending is a bit abrupt. Book friends passing by can come in and take a look.

Except for the rushed ending, everything else was pretty good 😂