Just After Finishing the Roll of Cannon Fodder Xiu Xian, the Immortal Lord Banged Against the Wall

This is the story of Yan west's sons, Panzheng and Xiao Qinglian. The little daughter-in-law who planted the seeds with her own hands is very beautiful and not long. I personally like this kind of short story. The plot is not procrastinating and there are pitfalls that must be filled in. I recommend it [Sending Hearts]

Sequel, author, I like you so much, it's so beautiful

It's very interesting. The author's writing is quite good. [Like] [Love]

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Who are these crazy people who gave this story such a low rating? It's obviously very good-looking. It's not verbose or nonsense. It's considered a good-looking short story.

It's a good read. This book is a follow-up to Yan Xi's book. Although Feng Junqian and Yan Xi don't appear in this book, they will occasionally appear in the memories of the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist in this book is Yan Xi's son Pan Zheng, and the female protagonist is Pan Zheng's adopted Xiao Qing Lian. But if you want to watch the sweet love process I'm going to be disappointed~ The whole book is mainly about Xiao Qinglian's upgrading to fight monsters and save the world. Pan Zheng doesn't appear much. The heroine's senior brothers and sisters have more important roles than Pan Zheng [laughing]. He mainly silently guards Xiao Qinglian from behind, and only has more scenes in the later period [laughing]

The story includes family, love, friendship, and righteousness, all of which are well reflected in the series of stories about the heroine's affection and righteousness. It's a pity that Youyin didn't provide any follow-up instructions, and another example was that the adoptive parents showed up in another accident. If you add a few extras to the story, it will bring the story to a more perfect end...

I really like the author's writing style, it's humorous, interesting, and very imaginative! The content of the story and the wonderful introduction are all my favorite novels. I hope the author will work harder and write better works! Come on💪

The writing and plot are both good and engaging. It's not a novice. It's very enjoyable to watch and I don't feel aggrieved. I watched it for a long time. Don't be fooled. Come on [please update] It's not easy to find a good book. I hope many people will read and comment on this book soon (I'm worried because there are so few people and it won't be updated qaq

It's coming, it's coming, the new book is finally here. The story of Panzheng and Xiao Qinglian, I look forward to the following plot.

It's very interesting. It's a follow-up to another book. I read it as a side story and found it very interesting.

The second book is finished! I just finished reading the last book about the hero's parents, which is very interesting. This one is a short story and is also very interesting. But personally, I think the one about my parents is better and more interesting. In fact, both books are very interesting. I found a treasure author. Both books I read are very interesting. Keep up the good work! ! !

Very good work, quite perfect. But as a hypocritical defender, I really don't like the ending. However, it was already a promiscuous trend in my childhood. It is normal for young people and should be catered to young people. Being stubborn, I still insist on giving four stars⭐⭐⭐⭐

Wow wow wow, Boss Mo Mo's new book, I read it all in one go. The plot is still as attractive as ever. It's good to watch. It's good to watch. I'm looking forward to the following episodes [Love]

It's really good to watch, but there are too many regrets. It didn't include the scene of the male and female protagonist getting married, nor did it describe the heroine's subsequent meeting with those friends who also went through the tribulation (Little Fox, Ling Heng, Zi, etc.), And what I'm most looking forward to is that the male and female protagonist will meet Yan Xi and the others after they ascend to the divine world. Moreover, the synopsis of this book is somewhat similar to Yan Xi's. The heroine thought she had passed through the book, and then found out that she was originally from this world and had to reincarnate back to the fairy world. In the world, the male protagonist also knows everything and silently accompanies the female protagonist in reincarnation, and the characters of the male and female protagonists in this book are the same as those in Yan Xi's book, but the story in this book is not so detailed, maybe because it is the companion volume of that book. All the parts that should be written have been written in the previous book. There is no big boss in this book to hinder the heroine's ascension, and the male protagonist in this book is stronger, so the story ends so quickly [almost crying] [almost crying] Really! Of! Very! Good! Look! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

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I finished reading it in one go. I feel so happy every word. Everything about the fate of the original female host fell into Nan Shu's bowl. It's so beautiful. The relationship with my sister is rare and sincere in the world of immortality. Both parties never hide their own things and think about each other. It's very warm.

It's a good read and I finished it in one sitting. Why doesn't the author make some extras? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Admiration][Admiration][Like][Like][Like]

Worthy of its name and five stars. Because the entire article revolves around the theme and is narrated link by link, it is perfect. The male and female protagonists have also gone through thousands of years of experience, and finally let nature take its course and are together, very sweet and doting without being abusive. Especially the fate of the heroine's sister was forced to be corrected by the heroine. The only regret is that it did not introduce how the male protagonist in the original book cast a spell on the heroine's sister to make her a love brain. However, the ending is quite perfect. Not only did the heroine get rid of the shackles of the male protagonist in the original book, she also successfully found the person of her dreams.

The writing style is great. It is so short that it can be written from beginning to end. There is no shortage of exciting parts. The ending is also perfect, right? Personally, I think it's very exciting. Those who like to cultivate fairy tales can give it a try!

I didn't expect it to be a very interesting story, and I almost missed it because of the title, which was really not that good. The heroine has a clear distinction between love and hatred, and has a strong personality. She is not as weak as the Holy Mother, and will not be merciful to evil people. The male protagonist is powerful and affectionate. This couple is good-looking.

I picked it up from another book about cultivating immortals by the author. Although both books are about cultivating immortals, their contents are completely different. The plot of this book is compact and the characters are simple but distinct. The content is a relatively popular story of cultivating immortality, so the plot is easy to guess. But overall it's pretty good to watch, and there's nothing mindless about the plot. I feel like there is still a lot of room to write about the stories of many characters. I hope the author will make a sequel.

I picked it up from another book and it's very good. The author's writing style is also very good

Why is the score so low? It shouldn't be... The writing is very good and very to my liking, the heroine is also very hard-working and pretty (of course not as good as our Qin Shu), the hero is gentle and doting, and she doesn't have many scenes but comes out to help at critical moments! For me, the only shortcoming is that it is too short. I feel like cultivating immortals, practicing fighting monsters, upgrading, and falling in love at the same time, I can write 1,000,000 words or about 500 chapters no matter what! No matter what, this article deserves more than 9 points, so please leave more comments and give 5 points to increase the points.

The female protagonist is very agile and independent, and has not been influenced by the original male protagonist. Even if the current male protagonist's color attracts her, she has not worried about growing up.

The author's fairy tale is quite interesting, the story is fascinating and addictive, and the ending is a bit hasty but not satisfactory. There are missing words or redundant words in this common sentence, which makes the semantic expression stumbling. I didn't want to read it with my brain, but it felt a bit brain-burning [Exploration]

A very nice short story, the heroine is kind and lovely, and she doesn't have an overflowing Virgin heart. The male protagonist is strong but not authoritarian. He has always provided firm and gentle care to help his beloved grow from a weak child into a strong and brave person. The supporting characters also have their own shining points. The author has a clear outlook on things, his writing is fluent without any pitfalls, and he doesn't use any modern language nonsense. It's great! I look forward to more good works from the author!

It's not as detailed as Yan west's book, and it's still a little short, but it's much better than others. I still like it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

My favorite type, the last car drove well

It's so beautiful, why isn't there a subtitle? Come on big