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I find the subject matter of this book very interesting. In my opinion, the plot of the story is that two brothers separated, forming a branch line. The difference between the two branches also leads to some readers becoming more and more confused as they read. The introduction of this book describes two male protagonists. I am not sure whether the two male protagonists are brothers. After all, the two branches are different, and the characters encountered in the branches also get along with each other in different ways. But if you want to bump into a few more people, I don't think it's necessary. After all, it's two male protagonists. Furthermore, it's Chapter 86. In fact, there were some parts of it that I couldn't stand anymore. Skipping some of the content in the middle may result in missing something, but I saw that it didn't appear in the end. Although I saw the author said that it will be written later, I can't imagine that Chapter 86 didn't include the meeting between the brothers. How long does it take to get to the academy? Furthermore, I think that based on the subject matter of the book, it is entirely possible to write about two brothers going from an orphanage to a college. I think it is completely OK. In addition, even if there are two male protagonists, it is better to tell the audience about the male protagonists and not let the audience guess. Since there are two male protagonists, there is nothing to mess with. Does anyone here think that the author has not decided who he will be with? If it has been determined who is CP with whom, then the corresponding plot should be added. Otherwise, it cannot be improved emotionally. The above is my opinion. Of course, I also hope that the author can write better and better. I also really hope to see the two brothers meet, very much!

The reason for the four-star rating is that reading novels is mainly to numb yourself because of unsatisfactory life or certain reasons in reality, just like drinking alcohol to numb your brain from thinking about those things. Although what I say may not be so accurate, isn't reading novels just to escape those things in reality? I don't have any other meaning. The main thing is that this novel should be sweeter. This novel is a little sad. In other words, it is too real. It is so real that some people cannot accept it. For me, it is barely acceptable. Therefore, I will continue to read it, but I am not sure how long I can read it because it is too real.

Is this book without cp or with two male protagonists? I just saw the author's reply and someone else said it is without cp, but another comment said that the male protagonists are Tom and Sanders. The book introduction also said that there are two male protagonists (I just want to ask, no harm, I am just a little confused. I have read Chapter 42)

It's quite interesting, but when will the protagonist meet Tom again?

It suits my taste, so give it 5 stars first. Come on, author, just don't stop updating. I support you! !

It's very beautiful (⊙o⊙), why doesn't anyone watch it?_?

The writing style is very good, but I don't understand it [crying]

It's very nice. If the name is slightly changed to be more meaningful or the cover is changed to be more attractive, more people will see it!

I think it looks good and doesn't have that ambiguous atmosphere. . . .

My love for Riddle when he was a boy😭🌹The two male protagonists really fell in love with me😆 It's just that the main plot of Hogwarts is too far behind. I've been writing about orphan kidnapping cases and criminal gangs in the Muggle world. I haven't enrolled in school yet after hearing this for a long time.

Don't stop updating! It's super exciting, and when did Tom meet our protagonist?

Just two words, beautiful

The protagonist on my xp [blowing kiss]

Looking forward to meeting the two brothers!

The intro is a bit long (don't spray it if you don't like it)

Like it, like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) Come on, more and more people will see it [Blowing Kiss]

It's really good. I have never seen such an article before. This is the first time I have seen it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more.

Such a beautiful book, I won't allow anyone to read it

I just thought that such a good article should be a channel article, but it turns out it is not. What a pity for Tomato. So well written.

It's great, but is the only other male protagonist Tom? Hope to add Al,

It's good, but it's not updated anymore. It's sad. Why ah ah ah ah. The main plot hasn't started yet. The front is dark. It's so depressing.

There are so many names, it makes me feel dizzy. It's nice to look at, but there are so few people there.

Nice! Super poke me!

It's very interesting. I feel like my brain is going to break. Then I can ask Al what the plot will be like next.

The writing is very good! ! ! The plot is also rounded out