Harry Potter: the Lord of Pain

The strongest thing about this book is that it expresses everyone's feelings. How to put it? It's like there is no author. Every character is alive. The struggle between each person is vividly expressed. I think Voldemort's feelings for mother and son are the most satisfying, including the Black family. There are few novels nowadays that can describe family love so well. Dumbledore just gives you a feeling of emptiness. It is this emptiness that enriches this person. It's a great way to express the idea that the world is not black and white. Although I don't know if the author is extraordinary, but the writing style is as interesting as changing the world view. But because the main characters are too vivid, some of the supporting characters are empty. Of course, this is inevitable. After all, if all the characters are described in a large way, the pace will be very slow, which is not good. It should be regarded as a trade-off.

It's really rare to see this type of protagonist. It has an extremely dark feeling. Haha, it's very special. When I read the later part, I didn't feel it was as good as in the early stage. It's a bit messy and the difference between the character and the original text is a bit too big. Basically, the good turns to bad and the bad turns to good. Of course, I think this is also understandable. I just look at it from another perspective. Overall, I like this kind of protagonist. I have never seen such a protagonist in Tomato. Or I just write and play for one or two chapters without updating. I am really touched that the author can finish him. It's good to have a beginning and an end. Thank you! Looking forward to your next new book!

I think it can be called a masterpiece of the Harry Potter fan series. It has a complete world view and full of characters. When the world starts to run, the author is just a presenter and can no longer determine everything in this world. Everything develops naturally, which is quite good. However, I still have questions about where the protagonist's obsession with his family comes from.

It's beautiful, I can feel the powerlessness through the screen

How to say it? This is a very complicated story, but if you read it carefully from beginning to end, you will feel that you can understand it, as if it really happened in a certain world. The threads given to them by fate are like a tangled mess. When one is pulled apart, the other will become entangled again. How do you know that you are not actually following the destiny given to you by a thread? Although this story is short, it brought me a different feeling. This is a brand new world of Harry Potter.

The style is quite unique, but I like the feeling of saying 3 out of 4. In addition, this is a dark novel, with a lot of secondary settings and subversive characters. But I think the author wrote it very well. Note, if you like watching completely rational protagonists, it's best not to come here.

Very well written, keep up the good work.

The narrative method of this book is unique. There will be some flashbacks interspersed in the text. The protagonist is a hero with a tragic color. It can be said to be a bit similar to personal heroism, but it is not a hero in the sense of the masses. The protagonist is a relatively self-interested and selfish person. This article does not have the majority of the CCP The novel has a perfect appearance, family background, etc. It can be said that the protagonist described in the article is average in appearance and his qualifications can only be said to be ordinary. I have only seen the first half so far. What I see is a small person struggling in the huge torrent of the times, just like a butterfly in the storm. No matter how you flap your wings? You can't change the fixed ending, but you can improve it in small details, such as saving someone or something, changing a small thing, but you can't change a big characteristic of the era, such as the Wizarding War, or the emergence of Voldemort. The protagonist strives to make progress, but persists in his heart to gain a chance for the future. It is really a very real and touching emotion. What I see from this are the personal tragedies of most Slytherins, just like Regulus, just like Severus. Most people may not know what he has done or what he has experienced until they die, but in order to persist in what they love and think in their hearts, they can endure all kinds of pain without saying a word. From them, I seem to see countless ordinary people facing the difficulties of life, facing the unpredictable road ahead, struggling in the hardships and thorns, while wiping away all the pain on the body, wiping away the tears, getting ready to go, they are small people trapped in the big era. This is just my personal opinion The flashback at the beginning may make many people not used to it, mainly because flashbacks are relatively rare nowadays, but it's a pretty good book! But I can't seem to see my book review [what]

The writing is really good and the worldview structure is also very grand. There is nothing wrong with writing six to seven hundred thousand. More than 1 million is possible. Especially the author's understanding of gods. Pure power. The last word is don't wash your hands. Pure pain creates pure pain gods. I think this is the best. Or the author could write that the second one is power. The two forces check and balance each other. Only then can you stay sane. And the second force must be suitable for the painful conflict. And also just stay sane. Cannot fully recover. I don't think it would be interesting to fully recover. The highlight of this protagonist is pain. A protagonist whose pain is his strength. This is the biggest charm of this protagonist. I think Harry can leave it alone. After all, he is the only one to conquer death in the original novel. You can buy a Death foreshadowing later on. The final battle between gods could also be more interesting. ——Ok, I've seen the end. It's nice that the ending is not too abrupt. It's not a bad ending either. Of course it's just my opinion. After all, I was already very tired. After reading this book. They all felt very tired. Forget about Polus. And the author who wrote the book. To be able to follow Polus through his miserable life. Already very tired. This is how it ends. It's already wonderful. When I first read this book, the ending that formed it was even better than the ending it has now. But when I actually finished reading this book, I realized that the ending was so happy. It is false after all. But such an ending would be a humiliation to Polus's life. There is no such thing as loss. I didn't feel tired either. I don't even feel any regret. This is how I felt when I saw the ending for the first time. But that's how it's supposed to end, isn't it? The ending was supposed to be the end. Rather than full of new life.

Emm gave the author five stars before going to bed, I almost forgot

This is the first time I saw a fanfic written before the plot of the original work. My impression of the original Dumbledore has always been the image of Wei Guangzheng. The author's writing made me understand Dumbledore from another perspective. Wizards, like humans, have power and selfishness. Like this book very much

I stayed up for a few nights to read it. Unlike others, my favorite part is the story of the protagonist growing up step by step as a child using flashback techniques. The ending is quite good in my opinion. This ending is good for you, good for him, and good for everyone. It is not particularly tragic and will not break my heart. I like it very much and look forward to your next work!

It's so beautiful. Just don't whitewash the protagonist. Only if the protagonist is black can this work be updated to the end more perfectly.

This book is really good. Except for a few typos, the rest is quite good. There is also a reason, not this reason, but this should. I really want to complain about this. However, I still don't like Rita. Maybe it's because of the original work. Maybe I'm still biased against her. Seriously, I'm looking forward to your new book Ended on 23.7.14

To be honest, it's really good to read, but my mind can't wrap my head around the fact that the author writes so fast that my mind can't catch up [face covering] [face covering] But I really like this kind of writing where the protagonist is dark to the core, so... Recommended! Highly recommended!

Very nice, recommended! ! ! But I really can't accept the appearance of the protagonist. The several battles are written in detail, which I feel (personally) is better than the original work. Moreover, this kind of crazy criticism of the protagonist is very rare! I really like this kind of book. The ending is a bit sloppy, but overall it's very good. (It's my first time doing a book review, so I'm sorry for the bad writing.) Anyway, this book has already become a god in my heart! Highly recommended! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This is really the best HP fanfic I have ever seen. Although the protagonist is dark, in the end there are many regrets in the original work and the final ending is very good. And I am surprised that the heroine is her. The emotional scenes are also very well written. In the end, the main character is lacking, which makes a novel good. This aspect is also very well written [please read carefully]

Update! The behavior and personality of the original characters written by the author are not OOC. They are well portrayed and understood well. It's rare for the characters in Tomato to be so well written.

I thought it was very novel at first, but as the plot slowly progressed, I began to think more and more that it was a memoir, especially the turning point in the middle (when Hermione suddenly appeared), which really made people unable to help but feel involved.

This is a very innovative book that allowed me to see a new HP from a new perspective. It is very attractive at the beginning, but through the foreshadowing of the subsequent plot, we can see the pain of the protagonist. Studying black magic does not mean that the protagonist is bad. He even put the handle of his knife in Dumbledore's hand, but he still didn't agree. Therefore, more people died in the world, and his attitude was so humble. I can only say that this plot seems to be designed purely to torture the protagonist. He traveled to the right family at the right time. When Voldemort designed it, his grandfather's IQ was just below the line. There were such shrewd people in front of him and behind him. How could he choose to let others cast a curse for him when he had control over the power? Even a curse he didn't understand. Dumbledore was the same, knowing that it was beyond his control, yet he still allowed himself to be free, and refused requests, even requests that were beneficial to everyone. Ah, the protagonist is really abused. But the daily plot is still good and interesting. However, the ending chapters are really difficult to evaluate.

This book is wonderful. Especially the first ten years of war is touching. Although the latter part is a bit confusing, which is why the score is so low, I have to say that his previous description has surpassed most books in being able to resonate with people.

I haven't finished reading it, but this book deserves a five-star rating. The protagonist's character is very simple. He protects his family and is willing to fall into darkness for this purpose. I can't say right or wrong. I can only say that my stance is different.

At least it seems pretty good so far. Originally I didn't want a female protagonist, but then I found out that it would be nice to have a female protagonist, really! Although I have only watched half of it, it is highly recommended. Although I don't know why his rating is so low, I really can't figure it out~ [rolls eyes]

What should I do if I suddenly like reading Death Eater articles?

What can I say? Empathy, the highest standard of a novel

My favorite, God bless the author with good health and no disasters. I can write this book slowly, but just don't get into trouble_(:з∠)_Otherwise I will definitely die of a heart attack. I like it, cheers for the author

Although the score is not high, the plot [face covering] may be reality. As ordinary people, we can't help but move forward in our choices. We may yearn for beauty, we may try our best, or it may be extremely twists and turns. Accepting and facing every factor that affects our choices allows us to clarify ourselves in the vast road. Cowardice and avoidance will usher in the darkest confusion. Silence leads to thinking, action leads to action. Confidence and happiness are really good.

Very nice! Come on💪! The protagonist's image is very full

First of all, the writing style of this novel is really good. Secondly, the logic, the development of the story and the game between characters--I can't wrap my head around it. Finally, the content written by the author is very novel compared with other fanfics I have read. I really want to read a pure black novel about the protagonist of Harry Potter, so I specially found this one. In summary, it's okay, my brain can't keep up with the development of the plot [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The characters are very deep and the plot is very good. It's a rare book [I understand]