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The book is a good book, and the author updates it twice a day, and each update is very lasting [laughing] Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's very well written. Although I don't know much about the anime and characters in it, I still think it's very interesting [laughing] I hope the author won't be affected by the bad reviews. He has to write a million words anyway. I've been reading for several months and I'm not interested in reading several books. This is the only one I wanted to finish. At least I felt good after reading these 51 chapters, so don't give up! ! ! Fight Sang! You are my perfect bond! If you don't write a million words, how can you be worthy of the readers who give you five-star reviews, so Doudou-san... You... Must stick to it! Gaia! ! ! ! ! !

Yes, this is the longest chat group novel I have ever read, but Madoka Shikama's combat power is low, and the All-King is a super-single entity. It stands to reason that Madoka Shikama is a super-multiple and can kill All-Kings instantly. @ The dragon's roar

It's really great. It's really much better than those fantasy and invincible cool articles covered in dragon ball skin. I really like the author's articles on this subject. Come on [love] [love]

The standard of power in each world is different for everyone, but I think the author has done it relatively "fairly". It is impossible for everyone to recognize the things they like in other people's writings, but the author is already great. As a new author, the organization of the article is quite clear, the writing style is not bad, the perspective change is not too confusing, and the character creation is also good, but it still lacks some "exciting" content. Come on.

This book focuses on chat groups. Although the subject matter is a comprehensive comic, it is still based on Dragon Ball fans. Even the anime characters added are mostly familiar. However, the presence of the protagonist in the later period is low. Personally, I feel that this is because the selected anime characters are all those who can achieve dominance in the later period even without relying on the chat group. They have their own personalities, so the role of the protagonist is not highlighted. The different anime characters in the chat group are currently limited to online chat. The dialogue is relatively logical and takes into account each person's speaking style, so it is more comfortable and not too abrupt. Moreover, the author has added some people from the same world to promote offline interaction, and has considered the content of offline gatherings in the future, which is worth looking forward to. As for the control of combat power, one can always see that Dragon Ball's combat power is off the charts, and it should outlast characters from other worlds. First of all, there has been an official linkage between Dragon Ball and One Piece. Goku didn't punch Luffy for seconds. Secondly, the fighting is much worse but the fighting time is long. This is the tradition of Dragon Ball. If you don't believe it, you can watch the old version of Dragon Ball to see how long the useless fighting took place. Secondly, the tradition of one punch to seconds is the trend brought by One Punch Man. Dragon Ball characters control their own power very well. In short, the author can still control the combat power. Of course, there are also problems with this work, such as the anime, which I have not seen and cannot understand the plot. To put it simply, if you write in detail, you will not be willing to watch the anime. If you don't write in detail, those who have not seen it will not understand. [Huge face] Moreover, it is difficult to adapt an excellent work and it is all about the details. At least for someone like me who has watched the anime, I can find some minor flaws. Of course, it is not the kind of combat effectiveness, but it does not affect it. Overall, it is okay. Finally, there is a problem. The author is relatively old. He has added some niche comics, but there is not even one comic that is more knife-edge. Has the author not read comics that are more knife-edge?

This book is considered a very good one among the comic novels! The author's control of the characters' personalities, interpretation of power systems in different worldviews, and description of battle scenes are all very impressive. The only thing that feels a bit uncomfortable for me so far is that the protagonist's fighting style is a bit inconsistent. After all, it is the power of the Dragon Ball system, and it does not have the light-weight feeling of the original work at all. For example, playing a character with much lower power than yourself. To compete, it can be Wukong's talent-loving style, where he does not use all his strength, but only uses a 50-50 attack, and the last move is seconds away, and then points out the problem improvement plan; to establish power, it can be like the angel Weiss, who lightly clicks the scepter, snaps his fingers, or something like a teleportation and a sword. Or refer to the feeling of the Tathagata Palm that Ah Xing used against the side face of the Fire Cloud Evil God in kung fu; if you are fighting a character with similar strength to yourself, then have a momentum showdown before starting the fight, then go up and fight, and retreat after losing a move, say something like Haha, you succeeded in attracting my attention, and then you go up and do it again with anger; if you are fighting someone who is stronger than yourself, then you will be suppressed by all kinds of momentum before the fight, and you will be scared and want to run away, but during the fight, you will get krypton red bars in your hand, and then blow up the bottom card or something. Of course, the above are just personal suggestions, just take a look.

It's very good. The author uses detailed descriptions of the environment to highlight the character's psychological activities in certain states, moments, and fights, which made me feel as if I was actually there (the protagonist Xi Banye). The author's description of the character's personality is almost appropriate, but why did the author want to add game characters? Op😅

This is my favorite chat group novel that I have read so far? The chat group is basically just a communication platform. It does not provide a bunch of messy plug-ins, and it also gives everyone a chance to achieve miracles. Everyone must work hard themselves and not be arrogant in changing other people's lives. It seems very comfortable.

In an environment like Tomato, this book can be considered a 5-star book. In total, this is the first book I have read on Tomato. There is also the issue of many people feeling that the combat power is poor. This depends on the author. The comparison of combat power is different in each worldview. Anyway, I have not read any multi-world manga that no one criticized for not being good at combat power, but let's look at the overall picture. As for combat power, it doesn't look like it's going to collapse, so long as it doesn't move. Actually, looking at the characterization of the manga, I don't think the characters are well portrayed. I haven't read Naruto so I can't comment on it, but I think the characters are pretty good. After all, I'm tired of the lengthy manga about One Piece and Naruto, so I almost skipped reading it. I've basically finished reading this one. From what I have read so far on Tomato, there are three books: this one, System Granted Me Immortality, and Jinyang Little Girlfriend, which I think are pretty good. After looking at other games, I feel that games like Yu-Gi-Oh are similar to Fantasy Westward Journey, although I have never played Fantasy Westward Journey. I can't stand Tomato's overall Tuhao Shenhao novels, and I can't stand ancient novels either. The same goes for Tianmu Liu.

This book is very good-looking and fits my taste. There are no problems with the plot and the number of words is sufficient. The only problem is that the combat power of Dragon Ball has been seriously weakened. In fact, I feel that Dragon Ball is a group of low-level but very powerful guys. I can't say who is stronger between Madoka and the God of Destruction. What are the others like? Evil God D, those messy things, the higher the life level, the higher the life level, but one of them counts, his combat power in Dragon Ball is guaranteed not to exceed a thousand, let alone become a character who is more powerful than the God of Destruction.

There are flaws, but not many. A bit toxic, but cool. The merits far outweigh the faults, and the difficult characters are all evened out, which is very comfortable. It's just that the ending is a bit rushed, and the whole novel feels a bit rushed in the middle and later parts.

I finally finished reading it. The pace is quite tight and the story is complete.

By the way, this is a novel I read a long time ago, but it was not finished at the time. Now I suddenly found it and found it was still the same. It was short and weak and no one else. Come on, the author [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

I like the overall structure of this book very much. It uses the chat group as the platform, the Dragon Ball world as the background, and intersperses other worlds for embellishment. It is a rare and interesting book. I hope the author will continue to work hard and complete the book [Thoughts]

After reading it, the plot is pretty good, at least not too toxic. Generally speaking, when the main character changes from male to female, I would have some psychological barriers and be a little uncomfortable with it, but this one has no impact. Maybe it's because the protagonist has basically no emotional line. It's a really good comprehensive comic chat group novel with Dragon Ball as the main theme. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better works. Finished reading this book at 00:38 am on March 18, 2024

It's quite to my liking, and there's nothing toxic about it (at least I'm fine with it), but the group members are a bit small, and there isn't much communication, and nothing interesting happens, and the protagonist doesn't interact much with the group members. Furthermore, there is too little content. I hope the author will update it quickly and add more every day. [Eat melon]

The book is very good, but you have to read Naruto, Inuyasha, Goblin, Witch's Journey, and other anime to understand the plot!

[Learned] [Learned] [Learned] Although the writing is not very good, I like this type of writing. During the Cyborg chapter, the combat power was from tens to hundreds of billions, and by the time of the Buu chapter, it was measured in trillions. During the GT period, it was all Beijing, Gailai (not counting the comics line Chao Wu and the like), Long Chao was average in Beijing, Gai, Zi, Shi Zi, Bai Zi, Qian Zi, Rang, Shi Rang, Bai Rang, Qian Rang, Gou, Shi Gou, Bai Gou, Qian Gou, Jian, Shi Jian, Bai Jian, Qian Jian, Zheng, Shi Zheng, Bai Zheng, Qian Zheng, Zai,，，， After watching the ending, it was really disappointing.

It's very good and beautiful. I hope the updates will be faster in the future.

The best Dragon Ball fan novel!

A very good chat group novel. The plot of each group member is completely written. However, there are too few group members. It would be better if more were written! Big cheers for the author!

The first and middle stages were very good. There were a few protagonist scenes in the later stages, but overall it was very enjoyable.

It's very beautiful, there are very few heroines like this, the writing is atmospheric, and there are many favorite drama worlds (⑉°з°)-♡

I have read Dragon Ball 5 times in total, Naruto 5 times, Demon Fox once, Bleach once, and Spider-Man novels 2 times, so it doesn't seem too difficult. Unshakable, two chapters a day. By the way, when did the protagonist reveal his identity to Vegeta?

You can find a good book and read it in one night.

So far, I think it's pretty good to watch, with a high recommendation index, no silent plot, five-star praise, please support it.

It's pretty good in a chat group novel. At least I won't be able to read it, and the characters are all my favorites.

The book is very good-looking, with plot and logic. Chat group is a difficult novel to write because everyone has different views on the plot of anime. Good luck to the author [laughs].

This is a very good book in the genre of chat groups and Dragon Ball.