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The author tells the truth that your writing is too messy. This world travel is very messy. It would be better to just write the system later and merge the world into a comprehensive comic world. This all confused me. Then think about the darker things you want to do in time travel, it's too confusing for you.

It looks a bit messy from the front, and there are not many punctuation marks. As for the content, it is basically an invincible text, covered with a layer of JOJO skin. If I have nothing to do, I will go to the JOJO world for a walk. The main thing is that it is a bit messy. I give it four stars as an encouragement.

Come on! [Eat melon]

The author's writing is not very good, the plot progresses too fast, and the links are not smooth.

Looks good, come on

Come on [cool] [cool] [cool]

Looks good, come on

It's pretty cool, but the connection between each sentence feels a bit unnatural.

Come on, author.

Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~

It's so cool. As long as the author writes more rationally or writes more slowly and adds more pictures and keeps updating, this book will be the best comprehensive comic book in my bookshelf.