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Write me well. The book is good and the setting is good. The only flaw is the harem story. I didn't want to read the harem originally, but I really ran out of books to read, so I came to read it. The setting is very good, and it breaks the shortcomings of the previous cool novels. Everything is good, the only bad thing is that this is a harem story. [Laugh]

It's okay. It's the first time I've seen a book that briefly describes the time-travel dungeon and describes the main plot in detail.

Come on, come on, come on! Work hard and write quickly to make me look good.

The protagonist's personality is very likable and the writing is wonderful. The author keeps it up

This novel is very readable and very irritating when I read it. Personally, I think the protagonist's growth rate is a bit too fast, the protagonist's combat power is a bit too high, and the supporting characters are a bit underdeveloped. (Only my personal opinion)

Overall, it's still very good. It's just that the plots in those worlds can be written a little bit. It doesn't need to be too much. It's actually okay to show a rough process. Otherwise, it will jump to the jump and it will be a bit confusing. Also, the main character is really arrogant

The writing is okay, the pace is fast, it can be slowed down a bit, and the dungeon world can be written in more detail (15 to 30 chapters per dungeon). Just writing about reality seems to be a bit faster. But it feels good (genius grows in one step.)

The writing is very good and the author is very attentive. I will give you all the tomato money I saved from writing novels for more than two years. Although it is not much, I hope you can continue reading.

I've only read a little bit, but I have to give it a thumbs up. Unlike other novels about the heavens, it is very good to focus on the description of the real world. Many other novels just come out of one world and enter the next, and the result is that they seem to be reviewing the plot of the anime for me. But this book briefly mentions other worlds, and then the feedback it brings to the real world.

Not many people have read the book, but it is indeed a good book that can make people's eyes brighten. The author has always said that he does not know how to write emotional dramas, but such emotional dramas that cut through the mess quickly make people shine. Maybe it's because I've been watching it on Tomato for a long time, the emotional drama is well written, and there aren't many interesting novels on Tomato. However, the biggest problem is that it is too watery. Although there is no problem with free novels, it still affects the perception. I hope more useful information can be added.

I've read ten chapters and it's really good so far. The writing is excellent, and the protagonist is well portrayed, a bit flirtatious but able to pull it off at key moments. And I don't do what other people do, where they have to write dozens of chapters with a low number of words when entering a dungeon. They just summarize the results directly, which is fine.

I took the time to read it, and finally finished it after reading it for a few days. This book is quite good. The author is very good at naming. There are many female protagonists in this book, 7 and up (although some wives are doppelgängers, but they have their own independent consciousness and individuality). The protagonist upgrades very quickly in the early stage, and slows down to the 5th level, but his strength is below the 8th level. Invincible, super powers, but for some reasons, the protagonist will not find a wife in the anime world. It mainly talks about the plot in the real world. If you want to come here and watch the plot of the anime world, you can go. The protagonist mainly gains strength in it, not to conquer the heroine, but mainly to get a wife in the real world. The character of the protagonist is a bit out of the ordinary. If you like to read serious protagonists, please pay attention when reading this book.

It's a hilarious, invincible piece of writing, and it deserves a five-star rating on Tomato. The setting of this novel is very good, and the real world is very high, so after integrating the abilities of other anime worlds, it does not feel too out of touch with the plot. This is because the foundation has not been changed, which is really perfect. . Unlike other books, once you complete the foundation building, you will be able to reach the sky. When you are done, you will become a god in the next copy, and then you will be in chaos when you come back.

I can only say that it is good-looking. I stayed up late to read it. The title of the book is good, but at first I didn't want to read it when I saw the cover. I thought it was not good-looking. Who knew that after reading one chapter, I stayed up late to read the 200th chapter. Very pretty

I finished reading it in one afternoon, I felt good, it was smooth and smooth without any sloppiness, and it was quite refreshing.

It's very pretty. You don't have to pretend to be a pig and eat tiger stalks, but there are quite a lot of them.

1. It's comfortable to watch. The author avoids many "classic" routines. 2. I have read this book many times, but I stopped reading it after reading the introduction, because I thought it would describe more content about other worlds. After reading it later, I found that most of them are simple narratives, but the content does not appear to be sloppy. 3. The writing is smooth, and it is more comfortable (bushi) than when it is smooth. 4. Combining multiple abilities + naming a genius. See for yourself, I can recommend it.

The writing is very good. Anyway, I like it. I don't listen to what they say. Some shortcomings can be tolerated, but nothing is perfect. The main thing I like about your novel is that it doesn't hide its clumsiness and doesn't slap you in the face without thinking. Better looking than most. Come on

I think it's quite interesting. First of all, the subject matter of this book is mainly about the main world. I don't write a lot about the abilities acquired in the heavens. Basically, I write about the abilities acquired in the heavens, and then extract and sublimate them. Goldfinger can now set the initial identity and talent in the world of heavens. The author did not set a very tricky point in this regard. Very good, let's give an example in the book. Son, Pirate King, identity as a Celestial Dragon, talent, body stronger than Big Mom, physique that can eat three fruits, swordsman talent, domineering, etc., You can get everything in One Piece, logical, very good, the main world system is also very big, so it doesn't reach the top all at once, it is worth watching, I read it in one breath, author, don't wake up to read it!

The writing is very good. I like Senior Sister Lin very much.

Okay, it's the first time I've seen this kind of setting. I don't rewrite other worlds, I just write about the main world in one stroke. Although it is a bit similar to the traveling frog setting, the protagonist's power is handled very well. I went to catch up on the update again after such a long time. I also finished reading it. In the middle of the game, I discovered that the author of the doomsday game I watched before was also written by this author. It seems that the same style attracts me. [Laughs] Spread flowers🎉. The author will write more and take a look [OK]

There are basically some shadows of fantasy in the few supernatural city novels I have read, but this one is different. Its fun and bad points are different from other supernatural city novels. It focuses on a special feature. The reason why the rating cannot reach above 9.5 Is probably because the author's description of emotions is not very mature, and the plot is a bit bloody in some places, but other than that it is very good. The author's description of the fight is very good, and there is plot logic. Also, let me ask you, the author, could you please make it longer and not so short?

It's not easy to write, but the content is pretty cool. There's not much description of the plot. The enemies are not strong, and their strength is suppressed. The difficulty will be forcibly increased in the following parts. You can still read it.

I think it's very good. The author's moves and other names are really cool. Xiao Baiwen, it's really fun to relax and read. The male protagonist is a bit funny. I don't like to see through all the gods. Each world takes a long time to talk about, especially if you haven't watched the anime. This is very good. It can be summarized in one chapter or half a chapter. If you like it, it will talk about the main world. They say that the combat power has collapsed, but I don't think so. After all, it's normal to have learned so many skills and mastered them. It's okay for the male protagonist of Shuangwen to have a high combat power. So far, it can actually be regarded as three realms. One to four are more complicated, with various chakras and qi. Bringing them together, the second and third stages are the power of rules. The heroine, Ying Meng actually appeared a lot, but I didn't remember her. How should I put it, I personally felt she was a bit ordinary. Ye's portrayal is good, but there are too many clones. One person plus seven clones. How to deal with the clones in the later stage? Should he create sensational scenes and then merge them? That's it. Xiao He, that boy-faced giant, should also be in the harem. Su, I don't know. I guess so. In short, the heroine is generally good. Guren, who is always mentioned in the comments, you will see later that she is an innocuous character and is just a doppelgänger of the heroine. According to the current world view and villain levels, once the protagonist is promoted and has the power of rules, the end will not be far away. I don't know if there will be a new map in the future, if so I can still write it.

Every character in your novel has rich character and depth, which made me deeply involved. The characters are vivid and distinctive, which makes people unable to put it down. The author's writing skills are unparalleled. He brought me into the book with his unique narrative method, which made me unable to put it down. I was attracted by the unique style and profound connotation. The author's words are full of magic, making me completely immersed in the story. The language and writing style used in the novel are very beautiful, and it is smooth and enjoyable to read. The words are just right and can accurately express the emotions the author wants to convey. The plot of the novel is twists and turns, ups and downs, and fascinating. I like the description of the environment of this novel. It makes me feel as if I am immersed in the scene and can clearly feel every scene in the novel. Through vivid language and delicate description, the author closely combines the environment with the plot, presenting a real and wonderful world to readers. His novel is like a lively and interesting movie, allowing readers to be drawn into the ever-changing plot. The novel has beautiful language, precise word choice, and delicate expression, bringing readers great reading enjoyment. Come on author, looking forward to your next book👍👍👍

It looks quite comfortable, nothing toxic, so I'll give it five stars. Starting from the third level to the seventh level of the heroine, the combat power has collapsed, and the subsequent combat power has collapsed to a complete mess. It feels like a different character.

The plot is okay. When I first read the synopsis, I thought it would be the kind of story that would write a lot of stories about different worlds in dreams, but it turned out that I only wrote about it in general, mainly about the real world. This is good, and the main plot has not changed in the real world. Because I have read several similar articles before, they all describe the world of reincarnation or this kind of different world in dreams, but there is very little about the real world, which makes it very difficult to read. Also, the author's driving skills are really extraordinary, especially the setting of one heroine having seven different clones is even more wonderful, you can understand it if you understand it [take a closer look]

Nice~ I was a little tired of the two-dimensional setting at first, but after reading it, I found it to be very good. The author cleverly designed the power system of the main world and the dungeon world to collide to create a stronger imagination and eye-catching combat intensity and description. It would be great if the combat power level is at the terrifying point. After all, once you hang up, you will be a passerby from now on... Hehe

Give it a five-star review, it's okay To be honest, as a single person, I can't stand watching harem; In fact, I can't say that. Like Versatile Mage, I really hope that the two female protagonists will be accepted. I can't stand this kind of novel. I feel like it's a woman, so I stick to the protagonist. Maybe the most important thing is related to the strength of the author! Able to write in a way that people can accept

The author named it Guicai, and the names of each move look very awesome and a little bit good. All the worlds are introduced in one go. It is just a place for the protagonist to learn skills. Later, various functions have been integrated. There are many innovations and it is quite interesting. There are not many heroines in harem stories, but the senior sister is very authoritative, and her skills and characteristics can be used to create eight clones [laughing evilly]. Each clone has its own independent personality. It is so cool to have such a wife. One person can form a harem without the risk of Shura field. The author also said that he is not very good at writing emotional scenes, and battle scenes account for a large part of them.