Bamboo Horses in Different Classes

I gave myself a five-star rating. Although it is a bit exaggerated, it is worthy of the hard work I put into writing every day. I may be a little sorry for some young readers. This is my first novel, and it is full of many shortcomings. However, despite its youthfulness, I believe it will also have its youthful beauty, which will support my initial exploration of emotions and the infinite reverie of the story. There are no dramatic characters or strong plot conflicts in the story. Because it is the first book, I want to leave the story to life. It contains every observation and understanding I have about life. I hope that in a certain plot, a certain character, and a certain idea, everyone watching can resonate with "Ah, I know this, I can understand it! I have had the same experience!" I have seen many excellent works. Late at night, I was like peeping at a happy match girl, looking at the many comments on everyone's works. Whether they are good or bad, at least this is a work that has received everyone's attention. So when I struck a match and lit up the ray of light in my heart, I weaved a dream for myself. That dream was that no matter what, I could insist on writing this story to the end. I wanted to tell a complete story of youth as originally envisioned. This story may not have many viewers, but at least it has a decent ending, because life has an ending in the end. Thank you, my name is Hutu Bu Muzhu!

After reading the previous chapter, It's not that I don't have any desire to read it, but I have very little desire. I just feel like I can't read it without reading it. The main reason is that the writing is too bland and has no memory points. It's the type that I forget after reading it. The concept is okay, but it's just too stiff and there are too many verses quoted. Take a look. There are basically no verses quoted from any popular childhood sweethearts article on Tomato. As a novice, there is a lot of room for improvement. After you finish writing, you can ask your friends to help you find out what is wrong. You need to make more changes and read more. I don't quite understand the heroine. Does the heroine have a crush on the male protagonist? If there is any, express it directly. If not, delete some words that have a tendency to have a crush, instead of asking readers to guess riddles. The most uncomfortable thing about this chapter is that the appearance of the male protagonist's friends and the questioning of the female protagonist are too blunt. I feel that this person is purely a tool. In order to promote the development of the male and female protagonists, in short, don't quote too many poems, don't write so bluntly, and enhance your vocabulary. When writing characters, treat him as a flesh-and-blood person. If you improve your writing style, there will be no problem at all. I believe you can succeed, come on!

Not bad, ok