In the year 2023 of the Doomsday Calendar, He Li was walking alone in an alley when he saw a cardboard box as big as half a man lying across the intersection, blocking the way. When he wanted to move the cardboard box, there was an abnormal noise from the cardboard box!
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Author, I suggest you exaggerate the plot of meeting Xiaoman. For example, they met when they were very young, and then start writing the subsequent plot from a certain moment. This feels better. Otherwise, if the two of them met in such a short time and became so intimate, it would seem a little abrupt and a bit inexplicable [Thinking] [Thinking]. Of course, I am just suggesting
Author, I suggest you exaggerate the plot of meeting Xiaoman. For example, they met when they were very young, and then start writing the subsequent plot from a certain moment. This feels better. Otherwise, if the two of them met in such a short time and became so intimate, it would seem a little abrupt and a bit inexplicable [Thinking] [Thinking]. Of course, I am just suggesting