Time was merciless, and after thirty years, when both children ran away, he knew that he had arrived in the world of Naruto.
What's even more outrageous is that his wife brought Jiraiya and Naruto to the house, saying that old friends were visiting. Seeing Jiraiya's kind eyes and the diamond-shaped birthmark on his wife's forehead, Momokawa fell into deep thought.
Reader comments
Why is the rating so low? I feel that the writing is quite good, the author's writing style is not bad, the plot is very interesting, and you can completely get involved in it. Although there are occasional poisonous points, for a good book, it can be ignored. It also makes me, an old Hokage, have a sense of expectation for the plot. After reading so many Naruto fanfics, they all follow the plot. It is really comfortable to read one that doesn't follow the plot every now and then. It's just that the author is too short, I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss]
Just read the comments. Many people said that the plot was confusing and incomprehensible! ? I would like to ask if your reading comprehension was taught by your physical education teacher? Are you here to write bad reviews on purpose? There will be some foreshadowing ahead, but you can guess it after careful analysis. Why is the plot so messed up? You are only worthy of reading Xiaobai's essays, Dragon King's crooked mouth essays, and Return of the God of War essays [smile]
There are not many novels that suit my heart, so please do your best, author.
The plot is very good, but I don't know why after watching it, I felt like someone punched the Naruto plot in my brain, and I haven't recovered yet.
Come on! It will definitely be popular
Nothing to say in one word 6
Very nice, five stars is a must
Super wonderful author, cheers!
How to say it? Just say it like that. Say it like this again. You can only say yes.
Work hard, this book is very novel
I saved it for 5 days and 20 minutes to read it.
Although there was a lot of jumping in the middle and some parts couldn't be connected, it was still good overall! Come on
Why is the rating so low? I feel that the writing is quite good, the author's writing style is not bad, the plot is very interesting, and you can completely get involved in it. Although there are occasional poisonous points, for a good book, it can be ignored. It also makes me, an old Hokage, have a sense of expectation for the plot. After reading so many Naruto fanfics, they all follow the plot. It is really comfortable to read one that doesn't follow the plot every now and then. It's just that the author is too short, I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss] Just read the comments. Many people said that the plot was confusing and incomprehensible! ? I would like to ask if your reading comprehension was taught by your physical education teacher? Are you here to write bad reviews on purpose? There will be some foreshadowing ahead, but you can guess it after careful analysis. Why is the plot so messed up? You are only worthy of reading Xiaobai's essays, Dragon King's crooked mouth essays, and Return of the God of War essays [smile]
There are not many novels that suit my heart, so please do your best, author.
The plot is very good, but I don't know why after watching it, I felt like someone punched the Naruto plot in my brain, and I haven't recovered yet.
Come on! It will definitely be popular
Nothing to say in one word 6
Very nice, five stars is a must
Super wonderful author, cheers!
How to say it? Just say it like that. Say it like this again. You can only say yes.
Work hard, this book is very novel
I saved it for 5 days and 20 minutes to read it.
Although there was a lot of jumping in the middle and some parts couldn't be connected, it was still good overall! Come on