Lobotomy Company, I've Become a Freak

Please leave some comments! Otherwise, I won't feel the motivation to update. It's best if you can give me some suggestions so that I can improve it!

Although the author is a student, his writing style is not particularly good, but the author has a very good attitude, and the branches are very good and litchi, so he helps every dream [laughing]

I feel like you are doing very well now, but the times are still few.

Author, I believe you will update this book again. I think this book is very good, so you should update it again. I hope you will write more in the future. I think it is very good, so you should update it.

It's quite good. My opinion is that it has a lot of poisonous points. People who join live broadcasts and chat groups midway will ruin the novel. I've seen many novels that have been ruined by joining live broadcasts and chat groups midway.

As a student like me, my writing is already very good and deserves encouragement. Here are some other suggestions: 1. Add double or single quotation marks to the protagonist's psychological activities (it's easy to confuse it with the narration). 2. Divide the paragraphs into smaller pieces, just one or two sentences per paragraph. The paragraph divisions for web articles and compositions are different. 3. When describing the language, don't put all the names at the beginning, as this will appear rigid. 4. Add more roles for the protagonist. The proportion of the protagonist is too small. The above only represents my personal views. If you have any objections, please do not comment.

Although I don't know what kind of mental state the author was in when he wrote this book, he actually made me, a patient with mild depression, see a patient with multiple personality schizophrenia, but the writing is okay. Author, I suggest you go to the hospital and have your brain checked. Of course, I'm not criticizing you. You really make me think that you are a patient with multiple personality disorder. I really can't figure out what kind of mental state you were in to write this kind of book.

Good luck to the author. ι(｀･-･´)/

The supervisor is awesome, I'm so lucky

What a great effort. I'm also trying to write a novel, but it's just handwritten. Thank you, author! I'm your old fan!

Em, I hope the author can continue to do more. It is true that there are not many good articles about Lobe. After browsing through the comments, I feel that these so-called shortcomings will be a major feature of the author's book. I hope the author can persevere, otherwise I may roll around on the floor and foam at the mouth in a few days and have a withdrawal reaction...

Apart from being a bit short, it still looks great.

It's pretty good, but unless someone writes a monthly account very well, they usually won't be popular. It just depends on whether the author can keep it up. There are a lot of missing words and a few typos.

Can you change the number to s-01-999 (this is consistent with the lobe company number setting)

It's really wonderful [like]

I just want to ask the protagonist, when is the form of the fallen truth used in the middle of the night?

Virtuality is beautiful, but reality is often crueler than virtuality, but I feel like a failure. I abandoned reality and chose virtuality, and then I discovered that reality is so cruel. He created me but forgot me in the future. I clearly know that he will forget me one day, but I hope that he can remember me [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]... I can't control him, because I was created by him. But this book is really good.

Very good looking. Highly recommended. The characters are very well written.

I've read what you wrote, why don't you also read what I wrote?

Ah, my brain, something strange went into my brain

Isn't he the protagonist? Is he an abnormality? How did you become a supervisor later?

Very good, highly recommended

The book is very good, please come on the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's very nice, but I think I should punish the group leader. It's too hard for me, but for the sake of being so pitiful, I'll give you five stars!

Come on, author, even though it's a bit short

My phone is parasitized by 1.76 MHz! Old Huaping[cry][cry]

When did the author pull out Bai Ye?

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

Author, you have to work harder

Strengthen Ye Feng