Thriller**********

I've been watching it for a while, and the first chapter is really excellent. Whether it's the character creation, the storyline, or the scene design, there are some flaws in general, but it's not a big problem. I just saw 11 in the second chapter, but I honestly can't tell what the background of the story is. But at this point, I feel that there are some problems with the character creation, mainly because the female protagonist is sexual. Regarding the character issue, in fact, from the first chapter, the heroine is actually a very rational person who is weak but has a righteous heart. But from the second chapter, I only feel weak. I know that the climax of the plot has not yet begun, but this character span, I don't know if it is some kind of foreshadowing, such as the setting of the heroine's sanity. Anyway, there is a lot of room for improvement. I hope I can write better and better.

This book currently only deserves four stars. One author's update does not have an accurate time, which means the update is slow. Second, how should I say it? Chapters, sometimes it's easy to get confused when you look at him . Three, what do you say? The plot is a bit long. 4. What do you recommend the author here? Write the title of the copy in that directory, or say, for example, Thriller Paradise, and then you can choose a Thriller Paradise, so you don't need to think about what the title is? We were more comfortable watching it. Really, I watched it for about twenty or thirty minutes, and then I read it all at once. I hope the author can accept my suggestion and make corrections. Another problem is that the author updates slowly. The suggestion here is to ensure that the update should be done within one or two times a day. Otherwise, it will be difficult to save the data.

Come on, author! I'm optimistic about you! !

Nice! ! I really like the CP of the heroine and Xiao Huan. If I have time, I will write a fanfic, but why is there no one with this good-looking article? ! This! What! Good! Look! Of! Book! Why is no one watching?

It's pretty good. The heroine is an ordinary person, and her behavior is also very ordinary, and she behaves like a normal person. I feel panicked every time the heroine acts.

[Sending Hearts] I really like the character of the heroine [Blowing Kiss] and the sister she transformed into after she lost consciousness! So handsome [crying] The secrets between the heroine and her roommate are so big, I can feel the big plan [Thinking] But because I have only reached the second dungeon now, I can't see much, especially since the story in the dungeon is so big that it takes a long time to follow [Crying] It's not enough to read the second dungeon now (catch the author) (Code by Guan Xiaoheiwu) Supplementary: After watching the latest, I feel a little bit like Lily [Thinking] But I only watched it because I don't have CP (whisper) (run away)

It's good-looking, the heroine has a brain, and the plot is pointless. The character of the heroine is also very good. I love it.

I haven't read the latest chapter yet, but the author's writing is very good. I listen to the book, so I will have nightmares after listening to it at night. I only dare to listen to it during the day, but the sense of immersion is very strong, and the heroine is not silly and sweet, but more realistic. Give me a five-star review to encourage you and update soon!

Quite pretty. There are no major issues at the moment. If you want to see it, you can go see it.

Are the female ghost lady and the doll the same person, author? Can they still be resurrected? The last thing I want to say is that it looks good, please update more of it!

Big cheers for the author [blowing kisses]! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's pretty!ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

Help, why do you write so little and still have such a beautiful book? I came across it. It's really beautiful [Blow kiss]

The author is great, the heroine and Xiao Huan are written as a couple? Even if they are not a couple, then Xiaohuan should at least be nice and forget about the 🍅 label. Great author, come on! Ｏ(≧▽≦)O

The writing is really good. I'm really looking forward to the next story. It's very passionate. Some of the words make sense and feel very real. "A strong man without virtue is the greatest sin."

It was quite good. I clicked on it in the middle of the night and watched it. It was so scary [crying] that I was scared and loved watching it at the same time.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Super pretty! A Yuan, whose rationality has evaporated, is so cool

The horror atmosphere is full and the writing is very good. I hope the author sister will update it more!

Hold on, author, please [adoration][adoration]

Nice! The protagonist has a good personality too

Could the author be a little faster? It's completely unsatisfactory. And the update frequency feels like it's about to be mailed. [Almost crying]

I like watching it, but it's really too short at the moment. As long as it doesn't collapse, I'll change it to five stars.

The expressiveness of the work is okay, and the description of the character's life and image is okay, but few people have watched it.

I really like it, I even recognize it every few days and follow it every day, [laughs]