Red Mansion************

Not bad. Three updates a day is good, but it's still not enough. Author, please don't be disappointed. Group leader, do you have a novel group? If not, quickly create one for everyone to join.

It looks okay, please give it a try, author.

Not bad, nothing poisonous [thinking]

It's quite a new timeline, I just want to ask if Jin Chai will accept it.

This book is still okay, but I think Lin Daiyu must be arranged to enter. As the protagonist's harem, he is also the beautiful heroine in "A Dream of Red Mansions", and she originally came to see him. If not, then what else are you looking at?

Generally speaking, it's okay, but I just can't understand why he should accept that concubine. A prince feels more involuntarily than the one in a brothel. He has to sell his body, so what if he doesn't accept her? Haha, I always remember that this book grossly disgusted me at the time. After reading it for a long time, it seemed that the book was finished. But when I think about it carefully, I realized that something was wrong from the beginning. It's absolutely amazing. It's amazing.

The idea is quite good, but if there is a small world, the soul can enter the small world to become a disciple, return to kung fu and knowledge, and return to its true body.

The system is very good, but the problem is that the protagonist chooses the Tang sect. To be honest, if the family's internal skills are deeply practiced, they will be immune to all poisons, right? ! Adults are all severely beaten by reality, so you can understand it, but in Tang Sect, because of the third young master of the Tang family, you will at least lose one-third of your readers!

All I can say is that it's really good. My favorite Red Mansion fanfic. Just don't be a nanny for Daiyu in the future. Daiyu's personality is a bit unsuitable and she's also frail and sickly. She'd be easily pissed off in the palace. Let him have trouble with Jia Baoyu. If he wins over Lin Ruhai, I didn't say it, but try not to write about Lin Daiyu's sexual transformation. That would be boring [laughing][laughing][laughing] Daiyu is still sick, jealous, narrow-minded, and speaks in a quiet and weird voice. Daiyu is fun [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The protagonist's surname is not Jia, and instead of walking around the pile of rubbish, Jia Yuanchun was given a bowl of special soup.

It's still okay. If there are no major poisonous points in the future, it will be a rare and good book.

6. No, 9 so, quick update, author, understand? Thank you, ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐, thank you. What I wrote later is completely out of subject.

It's very real. There aren't many like it [laughs awkwardly] I like it very much Concubine Liang is dead

So far, gods and ghosts have appeared, but they are all evil. I do not believe that there is no neutrality or lawfulness. Moreover, as the apex of power in a country, the emperor should be aware of the existence of gods and ghosts, but it has not been shown so far. Instead, it only started to emerge after the protagonist appeared. I hope there will be additional explanations later.

It would be nice if the protagonist was an aborigine, but he is a time traveler. Even if he cannot recognize his biological mother, he can still greet his mother occasionally. Why does it make her crazy?

This is the best Dream of Red Mansions fanfic I've read in recent years, and it's very touching. It's also more evidence-based. Put it on the recommended reading list. Don't know why the rating is so low!

The author does write well, but Jia Yuanchun has overwritten it here. If you don't want it, don't arrange this plot. At present, Jia Yuanchun has not done anything to leave the government. He just thinks that people are ambitious, so he gives them Juezi soup. I am also convinced. The one who marries the protagonist has no ambition. I'm so cruel to my own people, I'm convinced, I'll check back in a few days, the author will update more I said I would read it in a few days, and after reading the comments, I found that the author is letting himself go more and more. The essence of the novel is to be enjoyable, but you are poisoning it.

Halfway through the book, I checked how many chapters were left. After reading it for a moment, I felt disappointed. I haven't felt this way for a long time. It turned out to be a rare and good book!

It's pretty good to watch, really good, and the plot arrangement is also very good. However, the death of Concubine Liang in the back made me a little bit upset, so I gave it a 4-star rating. If Concubine Kun had not died, five stars would be more than enough.

Dear author, where is your home? I would like to send you some souvenirs and post them with you by the way [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I wanted to give you four stars, but thinking about you, it's not easy, so I'll give you one more star. Don't be proud.

Hurry up and update. At your age, if you don't update, how can you fall asleep? Why don't you just roll it up for me [sneaky laugh]

I felt so good to Lin Daiyu. Even though I sent someone for her father the first time, and the second time I sent someone to directly deliver something, I felt that there was no royal style at all.

If you judge people from the book, the author of this book should be quite decent and well-behaved. Although it has a hook, it is not an exciting article. The author will still be bound by rules and regulations. Other types of book travels are all about arranging his subordinates to do things perfectly while having fun. Here, there is no one and no money. The harem section in the early stage is actually not that exaggerated. It is too harsh to suppress the desire to advance, and it is not enough to go too far. There are still 9 points.

I like the description of the prince's game. I've seen enough of the plots of deliberately pretending to be pigs and eating tigers and then pretending to be mediocre.

Yes, I was quite fascinated by it, but I didn't meet a decent heroine and there were all kinds of restrictions. I was very unhappy, but I also know that this is normal.

Very well written, keep it up!

Love it, love it, it's really good

Super super pretty

Okay, actually I like this kind of writing better