Start: the Empress Is Reborn and Detains Me

I also think it's too short [eating melon]

The writing is quite realistic, it reminds me of Goddess Record, a very serious novel, worthy of praise [laughter]

Too short [laughs evilly]

It's better to write less about the plot of being cheated, because the more the protagonist is cheated, the more I want to see the scene when they meet! The more I want to read, the faster I turn the book. If I turn the book faster, I don't know what's going on! (Actually, I thought the author shouldn't have written that Li Qingyue was alive. I don't know if it was because he would write about their meeting later, or because he couldn't write it at all, or simply to arouse readers' interest in reading! But I still hope that the author will fill in more what he wrote! If there is a plot about their meeting, remember to give me a five-star review!) Personal opinions are for reference only!

They are actually friends, so I must support them [laughs]

Still can't accept it, Li... The princess' spirit is not very empathetic. Compared with the body, mental filth is more difficult to get rid of. Although nothing happened, the thorn in her heart is deeply pierced into her heart. Mental cheating and physical cheating are just the difference between dark green and light green. I also know that no one will wait for you forever, but if the male protagonist insists on being respectful to the princess, I don't think it's okay. Finally, I'm sorry to the author.

It's such an old routine. If you say it was conceived 10 years ago, I believe it. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the protagonist can become more mature as he grows up. He won't be such a noob until later. And Li Yueqing is really poisonous (don't read it with your head in mind). I don't know what it means to express the cruelty of the world of immortality in this way. Writing like this will only make people feel sick.

Yes, yes, you can do it [laughs evilly]

Read carefully, read carefully, green writing is green writing. I have done ten levels of psychological defense but I didn't think I did it wrong. I don't know how good it is. Two stars are because the writing is very good. I don't give five stars because the plot is too poisonous. Let's write it in a different way. In the front, your male protagonist is very substituted with that Qingmei, but later Qingmei is with someone else. Doesn't this make me psychologically hurt? Forgive me, I really don't know you have this🐮

If the protagonist can be ruthless and decisive, never be merciless in handling things, and not deliberately outsmart the supporting characters, then this will be the next masterpiece.

I have read more novels about cultivating immortals than I have ever read before.

Mo Susu and Xu Feng are together, but has she forgotten that her grandfather was killed by Xu Feng, and she was also abducted by Xu Feng? This kind of feeling, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk

Really, I really can't stand being cuckolded. If you said that you and I are not married, but only have feelings, I can accept it and I can let it go. No matter how much you torture me, you really can't accept being cuckolded. Sorry, I will reward you with one or two stars.

After reading Chapter 24, I was depressed for a long time. I feel like I'm getting depressed and can't sleep. Or eating too few knives is harmful. Is there a female protagonist in this book? Just ask.

The male protagonist is indecisive because of a passer-by who tricked him into a ring in front of the demon sect. He also knew that his wealth should not be exposed. As a result, he exposed his sword skills in front of other people without being wary of others. Anyone who can write such a thing is also an outrageous person.

Too short, not enough to watch [cool]

It has the flavor of early martial arts romance. Many people may not be able to accept it, so if you can't see it, don't force yourself to read it. This book is not abusive at all, it is far different from those. If you are interested, you can check out the Zhu Yanxue series. I can't stand it. There is no obvious bully or abuse in the book.

It's nice to look at, but it's really uncomfortable to see Qingmei. According to the time point, if it's a person who doesn't have much cultivation, he is already fifty or sixty years old at this point, so what about the reversal? No matter how it turns, it will be a pity. Don't meet with only one breath left. I hope there will be a good ending.

I'm going to comment after watching it. Although I skipped to watch it, I still have to say something about the protagonist and his childhood sweetheart Li Qingyue. I can't understand that they grew up loving each other, and even committed suicide by throwing themselves into the river to escape from marriage. They were saved by the prince, and then the prince pursued Li Qingyue for 9 years. Then because the prince was a cultivator, handsome and good-looking, and could take care of others, he tried every means to please her, and then slowly accepted the prince. After letting him go, he went to bed with the prince. I really don't understand this. How could this person change his mind because someone else saved him and then took care of him and please him for nine years? It's impossible because he escaped from marriage and committed suicide in the river for the protagonist. How could he change his mind because he was saved and then taken good care of? I don't understand. There is also a beauty in a novel with normal thinking. She will not covet others because it is beneficial to herself. Because first of all, he escaped from marriage and committed suicide in the river. With this rule, it is impossible for him to change his heart. If this heart is determined to die for the protagonist, then his heart must be very determined and will never change. So, the author, your writing is very disgusting. You wrote that he ran away from marriage and was unwilling to marry that person, and then was killed in the process, or was forced to the edge of the cliff, and jumped off the cliff, or committed suicide. In this way, there will be no criticism. As a result, you wrote this, and then it was like that. Alas, the writing is not good. Well, I can only say that it is average. Then, for those who have not read this book, please start reading from 51 onwards. This way you won't have any psychological burden.

The author has said that there is a knife in the early stage of the work, but I don't think it is too deep. What impressed me the most was the fact that the main character's childhood sweetheart kept bothering me. After thinking about it carefully, there was no need to criticize this book all the time. The key is that the author also said that it will be reversed later. I really hope that the misunderstanding between the two of them will be resolved, and the male protagonist will no longer hate Liu Yueqing, the girl who has been with him since childhood. Don't say it (get back together) we can always understand and respect each other! I originally came for the plot to have a female protagonist, Wei Wufeng. As the saying goes, "After you die, I will take care of your wife, so don't worry about it." It doesn't matter what it says in the article, the reality is always crueler than imagined. The novel can be changed, but if it is done in reality, there will be no regrets. Just read the online article and have fun. It doesn't have an ending yet, and there is still a lot of room for writing. As long as the ending is not bad, it is not a rushed ending. I just think it is an online novel that I like. If the ending is disappointing, I won't say anything. I can only scold the author in my heart for wasting my time and expectations and rejecting it. If the platform can evaluate the author's writing level, it is bad. The above is my reflection and way of self-comfort. All in all, I am looking forward to the plot development of this book. This is the highest number of stars I have ever given, and this is also the first time I have given a star rating to a novel. [Please update] It should be Li Yueqing. Please forgive me if I made a typo [face covering].

Why is it so short [crying] The protagonist gradually becomes more and more unruly, and the plot has great ups and downs. This book is just right for me, who likes beautiful women. [Adoration]

Let's go straight to the end of Chapter 24 for fun. I hope Little Turtle will keep up his good work and have more plots like this, to give friends a little bit of green writing shock, and give high points. Come on, Little Turtle, if it fails, how can I still watch the fun in the comment area [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

To be honest, when I first started reading this book, I thought it was another yandere novel, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I found that it was indeed good. The writing is very good, and the characters' emotions are well rendered. Come on, author! [Learned] It's great. The content is good but the title is terrible. It would be better to have a good title. I hope the author can change it.

I really can't stand it, but I still want to encourage you [grievance]

I would like to ask the author Li Qingyue if she is with that prince

The author, I don't want to ask anything else, I just want to ask if Li Yueqing and the male protagonist will have a happy ending in the end? Please reveal it, otherwise I really can't stand it [crying][crying][crying]

Md author, come on, I like sadistic and sweet ones. Please give me more young wives [laughing evilly]

Yes, it's really pretty.

I would like to state that this book is not some Long Aotian novel. The plot will be adapted from some real-life stories. It is both cruel and sweet. It is not recommended for those who are innocent and innocent. The recommended age is at least twenty years old. The novice who enters by mistake... Will feel very uncomfortable.

This book is too short