I was originally an ordinary migrant worker, but I didn't understand the meaning of my life at all, so I decisively chose to take medicine, and then when I woke up, I found myself in a different world.
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The subject matter is classic, the filling content is relatively new, but the writing style is very immature.
I'll just briefly talk about the more important ones. I've only read a small part of it. If you have any questions, you can tell me.
The rebirth setting mentioned at the beginning always reminds me of the "return from death" of the male protagonist Re0. I wonder if the author borrowed the setting or something like that.
Secondly, it is not a good choice to make a separate chapter for things like social background. In fact, there is no need to reveal too much at the beginning. Just write it slowly from the perspective of the protagonist. This is too urgent and has no sense of substitution. It is difficult to incorporate this kind of God's perspective.
Moreover, the writing still feels like a self-advocacy article. Although I can feel what the author wants to express, it is a pity that the writing is not strong enough. Some things can obviously be integrated with the protagonist's perspective and mentioned slowly later, but they have to be said all in one chapter. It is really tough.
The subject matter is classic, the filling content is relatively new, but the writing style is very immature. I'll just briefly talk about the more important ones. I've only read a small part of it. If you have any questions, you can tell me. The rebirth setting mentioned at the beginning always reminds me of the "return from death" of the male protagonist Re0. I wonder if the author borrowed the setting or something like that. Secondly, it is not a good choice to make a separate chapter for things like social background. In fact, there is no need to reveal too much at the beginning. Just write it slowly from the perspective of the protagonist. This is too urgent and has no sense of substitution. It is difficult to incorporate this kind of God's perspective. Moreover, the writing still feels like a self-advocacy article. Although I can feel what the author wants to express, it is a pity that the writing is not strong enough. Some things can obviously be integrated with the protagonist's perspective and mentioned slowly later, but they have to be said all in one chapter. It is really tough.