One Piece: Starting in Ohara

Author brother, One Piece Roger has 28 or 29 crew members. I forgot. Luffy must have 16 when he wears it. The Miles of Sunshine Sonny must be half the size of the original. Don't have too many heroines or they will run away. Just Robin is good. Come on, author. Momonosuke will die when he meets him. The artificial devil fruit that was eaten should be given to the crew. Even if the crew in One Piece is awesome, there is no way the bounty will be higher than the captain's bounty. Come on.

I hope the protagonist has the overlord color. How can he not have the overlord color if he has the belief of revenge like the Tianlong people?

I think the protagonist should make a wish to evolve the kaleidoscope into the Samsara Eye. Its two abilities, Huge and Amaterasu, are useless if one is not used without the other. Or, author, if you want to keep Susanoo, you can use Susanoo if you evolve into the Rinnegan, and it also has gravity, repulsion, and six paths. Isn't it good? 🙂

There is only one point where the bounty is too high, it should be lower than the captain's.

After reading these two chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 Nongfu Spring Water, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why was my vision blurred? I don't know if it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just update a few chapters. Who are you looking down on?

After reading Chapter 42, I thought why can't I divide a few sentences into paragraphs 🤦, and suddenly a long paragraph came to me while I was reading it. It felt a bit too long when I read it this way. I thought it would be nice if the author could divide it into paragraphs 👍

Nice!!!!! I hope it's a single heroine

Very nice! Super pretty!! The protagonist is very capable. The characters of the Straw Hat Pirates are even more powerful compared to the comics. The details of everyone are handled perfectly. The author should update it soon!

At present, there are no poisonous points, the main line is clear, and the plot is slowly unfolding. Overall, you can enter with confidence, and there should be no interruptions in updates.

Very well written and readable The author has two 25 chapters and doesn't he want to change them?