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I really like reading two heroines, and this book is Lily. I really like this kind of fake coldness and true gentleness. But I think one of the poisonous points is that Li Chao asked You Li to pretend to be his girlfriend to meet Mr. Li. I felt very uncomfortable. He asked a married woman to pretend to be someone else's girlfriend. Although the other party didn't know that the heroine was married, I felt it was very poisonous. Apart from that, I think the author has written very well, both in terms of the delicate writing style and the richness of the characters. But this poisonous point persuaded me to quit, and I felt uncomfortable all night because of this. I really want to continue reading, but I'm afraid of seeing that poisonous plot. I feel so uncomfortable @, what should I do?

Looks good, but too short

I wonder how many more books there are left before the heroines can have a bigger breakthrough. This book will probably be completed with approximately 10,000 words. There is still one day that is better and less [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

I would like to say that this book is the sweetest novel I have ever read. Whether it is love, friendship, or family affection, it cannot be stopped. The most important thing is to dare to love and hate, and to cut off relationships with people you don't like in time. First of all, the love between You Li and Su Wenyu is so sweet. Li Li is a cold and aloof sister at first, but later becomes coquettish and shy. Wen Yu seems to be a cold CEO, but is actually gentle and protective of his wife. There are also Shi Chun and Xiao Qi. The combination of the doting sister and the lying sister should not be too harsh. I strongly recommend the author to write a companion volume. Then Chunchun is simply one of the best best friends in the universe. She supports her unconditionally, fights injustices for her friends, and provides aid to others. It's absolutely amazing. Furthermore, Xiaoqi is so cute. When she learned that her sister was being bullied, she immediately rushed to You's house and scolded her. It was so satisfying. The interaction with her sister was so sweet. I really want to have a sister like this! ! ! , Li Li's mother is so cute, she competes for favors, hahaha, it is said that hospitals always put labels on newborns. I really want to beat up the nurse who made the mistake back then. She is not responsible at all. If she hadn't hugged Li Li by mistake, she wouldn't have had so many bad experiences. How happy it is to live in the original family. I just feel sorry for Li Li.

The plot structure is quite good, which may be because it is the first time the author has written an article. The plot cannot be accurately narrated and expressed, it is a bit like talking in words, but the plot is still good and novel. It is rare for two female protagonists to get married first and then fall in love, but the text is not active. After all, this is the first time to write an article, and it is mainly about encouragement, so I give it four stars. I hope the author can see the suggestions I gave [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

2023.4.2 There is an end to the depths of daydreaming. Behind the embrace is the light of the sky. You were my desire. Now you are my only love. You and I are the best love partners. The story of You Li and Yun Yu is over. The best love is that when you love her, she also likes you. Yun Yu has been secretly in love with Li Li for ten years, and finally got a response; and Li Li finally got rid of the unfair treatment of her adoptive father and adoptive mother, found her biological parents, and had someone who loved her and loved her, and they could grow old together. Perfect ending, short text, I like it very much.

The world in this novel is probably what many TXLs want to see.

Marriage first, love later is so beautiful and a bit healing. I hope the author writes more! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying Kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Nice! Overall it's worth watching! Going both ways➕Sweet pet article By the way, if anyone is interested, you can also come to my homepage to read my works with two heroines, thank you! [Blowing kiss] Little fairies are also welcome to come to my homepage to read my [shy][shy][shy][shy] Thank you!

This is the first time I read Lily on Tomato. The author writes very well. I hope to write more and will keep following it. It would be even better if there was a radio drama! Then publish it! Lily Novels three-piece set is all you need!

It looks good, I hope the author can be faster [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Wow, wow, I really like this book. The ending was so touching that I cried. You Li's attitude towards life and Su Wenyu's ten-year love were so good that I cried. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Although the book is over, their stories will continue, and they will definitely be happy forever.

It's really good to read [crying], why are there so few of them? I haven't read enough. This book is so touching and the emotional line is very delicate. I like it very much [adoration][adoration][adoration]

This book is really suitable to be printed on paper and read through from time to time! Although You Li was not very happy because of You Mu, the ending was great. He found his biological parents and Su Wenyu also loved her very much. Su Wenyu had a crush on You Li for ten years. Although the crush lasted for a long time, fortunately, You Li responded to her in the end. It was the first time I read a book about Marriage First, Love Later, and I had a great experience. Then I suddenly realized that this is the kind of book "Chasing a Wife" is all about chasing a wife🙊

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[Salute][Salute][Salute] So far, You's family is very patriarchal. Shouldn't You be taken seriously? Shouldn't you be loved? Fortunately, Su is here, but I feel a little sorry for Su. Having a crush is so painful [laughs]

Emmm, she looks pretty, why is the rating so low?

Lily's sweet article, I really like it. So pretty, but a bit short! Do you want to add extras?

It's really like a person's autobiography or diary.

It's very interesting. I haven't read enough. I'm looking forward to the author's new book.

Big cheers for the author Ciqiong is beautiful anyway [licking the screen][licking the screen]

It's very interesting and to my liking. Kudos to the author. I recommend adding more.

Looks good! Like 😍

So sweet, so pretty

Absolutely beautiful, marriage first, love later [smile][smile][smile]

Still pretty good

So beautiful, so sweet

Really enjoy watching it! ! ! !

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