I Am Here*******

It's a very good book. I recommend reading it if you like Hogwarts. The author's writing style is pretty good.

Recommended, not like other protagonists at all, don't lick the protagonist trio. He doesn't even lick Dumbledore, he is a real hero. The plot is rich and even breaks with Dumbledore. I'm looking forward to the next plot

This book is one that you can read whether you have read Harry Potter or not. It is such a high-end fanfic. To be honest, I am afraid that giving it too high a score will attract some people who don't understand it, but I don't want such a book to be buried.

Yes, the protagonist is not omniscient and omnipotent. There is growth and mistakes. The plot is exciting. I hope the update will be faster. The plot is okay and the protagonist is okay, but the Iron Triangle is a bit annoying here. He always doubts the protagonist this and that, and there is no basic trust between people [Like]

Very well written, another level of analysis of the Saviors and Dumbledore that I like. The aloof savior only cares about the peace of the magical world, and everything else is trivial and disdainful. The real savior gave the werewolves a fair shake. A life controlled by oneself and a life arranged by oneself. Very good, come on, keep writing

It suits my taste very well. The male protagonist is ambitious and has plans but is not brainless. He is decisive in killing. He is good-looking but I hope there is no female protagonist. After all, a woman will affect the speed of drawing my sword.

Come on, author, I like this book very much, but the emotional details of the characters and the details of the fights can be more detailed. I hope it won't be unfinished. Come on.

This is a particularly beautiful novel that I have been following, but why has such a good novel been removed from the shelves?

Awesome w! I finally finished it. It's the first Hogwarts series fanfic I've read and it's the best one among them. It's enjoyable and the story line is very complete. The plot doesn't seem too blunt and there's no situation where I, as the annoying Goldfinger protagonist, become invincible without doing anything. It's great [wipe away tears] I'm not very good at writing book reviews, but maybe it's because I feel that the concept of this book coincides with my impression of the original characters, and I don't think it's ooc hahaha. It looks very comfortable [shy]

Very good. This is the best HP article I have read. It basically meets my imagination. I hope the author can present us with a grand and wonderful magical world in the future, and also decide on the heroine as soon as possible. Although I feel it will be Daphne now, I still hope to consider Luna.

Harry Potter is one of the best books in the Good Book Tomato category. It has its own content and its own ideas. It does not copy the original work mechanically. The original plot is very attractive to me. This is the Harry Potter fan novel that I have read for the longest time on Tomato. Keep at it, don't end up [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It has never crashed since the beginning, and even at more than 90% of the time (go check it out [laughing evilly]), the quality has improved sharply. I watched Harry Potter three years ago, and my memory of the plot is almost the same as John's. I may be biased in some of the characters, but I still think it is a very good story.

It is well written and is based on the big world view of the magical world. Unlike some fans who simply watch the plot like a bystander, everything that happens to the protagonist in this book may trigger some butterfly effects, and these butterfly effects can be truly reflected in the plot. The part about deliberately irritating Neville was a bit poisonous.

You will always be one of the most wonderful books in my memory.

This book is top-notch both in plot and in shaping the character of the protagonist. Some plots are a bit confusing, and the setting about the original protagonist (Hermione and her two flaws) is reasonable, but also very irritating. The author's writing ability and speed are excellent. When you look at it, if you look carefully, there are foreshadowings.

It's so exciting. Maybe it may make people think that the protagonist is too indulgent towards the Harry Potter trio and is too kind to them, but there is a reason for this, and it will be fun to come back later. The quality of this book is really good. Others with higher scores than it are not as well written as it is. Considering the environment of Tomato, I think 9.6 Is good (the protagonist will later resent Dumbledore's double standards and break with him) It is worth mentioning that I think the characters in this book are very good. I cannot say that everyone has flesh and blood, but it makes people feel immersed and breaks through the limitations of some fans. The protagonist did not want to confront Dumbledore at the beginning. He also wanted to grow under the wings of others, but it was a pity that Dumbledore did not give him this opportunity. There are many people behind Harry Potter, but there is only one person behind the protagonist.

This book is truly a masterpiece! It is very suitable to my taste. I have seen it. There is no female protagonist in more than 300 chapters. Although there are girls hinting at our male protagonist, our male protagonist is a straight man. I really love this book. I highly recommend you to read it. I also hope that the author will read more. It is not enough👍👍👍

This is one of the few wonderful Harry Potter novels. The descriptions of the characters are very profound, including the pursuer Heinrich, the young master Malfoy, Daphne who cannot cook, the brave and loyal Neville, and many supporting characters, from an ordinary student to the King of Slytherin who founded the Star Society, and the first generation Dark Lord Grindelwald. We will all question his actions, but It is undeniable that there is a huge tumor hanging in the wizarding world. He used the most brutal method to cut away the lesions and hidden dangers. Although it would be a mess in the end, he believed that the protagonist would rejuvenate the injured area. This is why he did so crazy. The huge world written in just over a million words did not collapse, but instead shone brightly because of the characters written by the author.

It's quite good to watch, although there are many problems at the same time. One is that many things can actually have better solutions. The protagonist's growth rate is obviously very impressive. Even if he doesn't commit suicide, there won't be any big problems. However, it is obvious that there are deliberately concave plot points to make Hermione look like Star-Lord in the third episode. But of course, do something for the sake of fun. It's not shabby. Furthermore, although the slogan is "We are united, we are united", it is actually following an elite line. As for "uniting all the forces that can be united", it is even less visible. The protagonist always follows the path of "no one understands how much I have paid, and I am wronged but I will not explain". I think I am a shield hero, right? Don't keep talking about trust or distrust. How much friendship is based on this. If you keep making trouble without saying a word, who knows what you are going to do [awkward laugh] It is enough to keep the original character black for a while. There is no need to keep it black. Although this can be regarded as a part of the early stage suppression required for a good novel. The summary is that it's a cool article but not cool enough. I won't withdraw the previous four stars, but the end is a happy ending. The part of establishing the kingdom is really exciting. It's exciting enough to forget the little personal details that deviated from the original character design. It has broken away from the framework of the original book and entered a completely new realm [please take a closer look]

The writing is wonderful, and I hope the author can resurrect Heinrich earlier. After all, having the company and witness of friends on the road to success makes it more unforgettable. I also hope that the author can solve the taste problem earlier and make John's life more fun. Don't let John become as skinny as a bald snake without a nose because of his lack of taste and anorexia [Like]

I finished reading it in one night. It is a masterpiece among HP fans. It is okay to ignore some small bugs. Another common problem is that the protagonist grows up too fast. In fact, you can add a setting in front. For example, the system gives a novice growth gift pack at the beginning, magic and so on. Then it takes 10 years to grow up, and then enters school at the age of 11, so it is better than everyone else. Otherwise, it would be a bit outrageous for a 12 or 3-year-old child to be so powerful. Come on come on

Among the Harry Potter books I have read, they are quite exciting. She is not a mindless pursuer of Hermione, but she is a good match for Daphne, the beauty of Slytherin [laughing evilly] and Fleur, who is from the French magic school and has a quarter of the enchantress blood. Unfortunately, this appearance is too short. Why didn't the author arrange for her to be an exchange student [Thinking]

I always think this book is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read [Like][Chigua]

It was so well written that I had to read it across multiple platforms just to read it in advance. The characterization is really great and three-dimensional. The protagonist, who is not a virgin, treats friends sincerely, has thunderous methods externally, is sincere and sincere internally, and has a happy family. The protagonist's teacher teaches him lessons, explains his doubts, and even paves the way for him after the end of his life. The protagonist's subordinate friend is loyal and devotes his loyalty and young life to the glory of Slytherin. Everyone is not purely kind, but everyone has shining points that fit the character's personality and stance. Besides, I really feel for the main character. In the magical world, the only elder he could rely on was his teacher, but Nico was gone. Dumbledore was originally willing to believe him, but in the end he was doubtful about everything John said. Later, Heinrich gave up his life in front of John. The protagonist himself pursues magic and power, and in order to fulfill his expectations, he has problems with his taste and hands. His subordinates and friends respect him and rely on him, but no one can put themselves in his shoes and understand the hardships and sufferings and pity him (I personally think that John really has to bear a lot of it on his own). Fortunately, he has a happy family in the secular world, and there are still people who love him in life outside of magic. After reading it, there is an image in my mind, unlike some fans, who feel like drinking a glass of plain water after reading it, which is boring. After closing this book, the characters are vivid and unforgettable. I will truly be overwhelmed by Slytherin's glory, feel disappointed and angry by Dumbledore's doubts and fears, saddened by Heinrich's sacrifice in pursuit of ideal glory, and helplessly disappointed by Harry Potter's reckless arrogance. All in all, at least among HP fans, this is a really good book. I hope the author can continue to write with high quality and quantity. I like your writing so much, keep it up! "I Swing the Sword at Hogwarts" is the best HP fanfic I have seen recently. He has truly walked a path beyond the first generation Dark Lord and the second generation Dark Lord. He is not a pureblood from a noble family, so he relies more on the protagonist himself along the way rather than having Deng or the Gas Stove Spirit to help him like other fans. The Slytherin Glory was really well written without being biased against Harry or looking up to him. In addition, the supporting role of the followers is also well written. The part where Heinrich died for the common glory and ideals is the highlight. The protagonist's "death" and nirvana surrounded by stars, as well as the loss (taste, hand touch...) In order to achieve the goal on the way, and everything he did for his subordinates and friends, all portrayed the protagonist very well. After reading it, my image is "The King of Slytherin" In addition, Deng's image is not purely good or evil. He feels more like a high-ranking holy father. He is white in color but is never used to putting himself in the shoes of his subordinates and friends. He is more focused on "greater interests". The writing is quite good, and the main plot highlights are different from other HP fans. It's a fanfic worth reading.

Not to mention, this plot is very interesting and different from ordinary HP fans. Some people may have disputes about the plot, but what I think is that it doesn't matter how many times it is, it's over and done with! ! It's not mindless, it's methodical, and it does change a lot of plot points. The part where I was having a psychological game with Dumbledore really made me feel excited. I hope it will have a good ending. I'm particularly looking forward to the plot of Goblet of Fire in the future, and I'm curious whether it will be more exciting.

Putting aside the stereotypes based on other people's worldviews, it is impossible to express how outstanding and excellent this book is. But just as the one who belongs to John cannot respond to expectations, and the one who belongs to the Witch King cannot own himself, the magical Teruhiro led me to understand the soul that belongs to John. The final king sat on the throne, using a ray of his soul to shape the critic of separation. It cannot be said that he is John, and it cannot be said that he is not John. The former John became the king, igniting himself belonging to the stars and bringing his glory to every star. His tenderness was left to his once selfish and irrational self. The vivid and touching story that created John's mark comes to an end, but the not-so-O. Henry-like ending is always imperfect. It cuts off to another paragraph, with the unique beauty of flaws. This is the writing of John, the just and fair Witch-King. Goodbye, John. This is also the writing that belongs to John. It has infinite possibilities and comes from the equally brilliant John Wick who belongs to his family, friends and loved ones.

This book has the following advantages 1. Borrowing the world view of Harry Potter but with different plots and developments [Note] 2. The portrayal of Dumbledore and other NPCs is very profound, very real, and the analysis is very in-depth. It even makes me feel that it is more original than the original work [Like] 3. Don't be the licking dog of the protagonist group. The protagonist has his own ambitions and ideas. This is what the protagonist should be like [I understand] 4. Hermione chose Harry between the protagonist and Harry, and the protagonist's attitude towards Hermione became cold, that's right! How could little Hermione break my heart! [Pouts] 5. Both the protagonist and the villain have certain IQs, and there are preparations before the confrontation, rather than mindless confrontation [punching] Everyone's outlook on life is different, and the books they read are different. It's normal that some people like it and some don't. The boss should give more guidance on the writing style, and the author should give more ideas on the plot [full][full][full]

A good fanfic. Judging from the title, I thought it was like Neville at first. In fact, the sword is just a foil, and the protagonist still focuses on magic. Generally speaking, looking at Dumbledore from another perspective, the Society of Stars embodies friendship (inner os: the stars shine because of you, John Wick, the King of Hogwarts) and looks forward to adventures in the wizarding world. Ps: The protagonist Slytherin does not have a very good relationship with the three little ones. In the early stage, he was very tolerant of the three little ones (very angry, but it will get better later). Special emphasis: Those who watch GGAD can leave it out. The relationship between the two old men in this book is not good. At the expense of the king's sacrifice, in exchange for a perfect ending for everyone, the selfish Slytherin has to dedicate selfless love to everyone. Who can tell the difference between the best and the worst?

What a wonderful book! The only regret is that there is no heroine, no heroine, no heroine, important things have to be said three times... In fact, I think the author can give a title to Greengrass~ Otherwise, she is too pitiful! She already loves the hero so much that she has no dignity! This book really makes me sad the more I read it! In fact, what is the definition of living toward death? Do you really want to die first? Seeing John Wick dying makes my heart clench into pieces! I hope the author can give John a good ending!

The plot is good. The author did not follow the original work mechanically. He has his own understanding of the Harry Potter book and wrote his own style. The content is interesting and the rhythm is tight. It is a very excellent fan fiction.