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I write a book part-time and am very busy with my main job, but I almost never stop updating it. Five stars is not too much. [Chigua]

@Liu Baku In fact, your emotional line is better than most people's. If you write this well, you don't want to leave regrets. The harem stories that people hate are just the kind of stud stories where you fall in love with a good-looking one. But your foreshadowing is already very delicate. I even feel a little bit @Jian More suitable than the heroine. In this case, I think two or three are no problem. With your description, I believe you have some feelings for Jane yourself [almost crying], so don't make me kneel down and beg you, add Jane to the list [crying] I hope we can become friends who can discuss it together [shy] In fact, your emotional line is better than most people's. This kind of writing is good, so you don't want to leave regrets. The harem stories that people hate are just the kind of stud stories, where you fall in love with a good-looking one, but your foreshadowing is already very delicate. I even feel that @Jian is more suitable than the heroine. In this case, I think two or three are no problem. With your description, I believe that you yourself have some feelings for Jane, so don't force me to kneel down and beg you, add Jane [I'm about to cry][cry]

She's so pretty. Take the beauty that comes to your door.

I read 500 chapters in one go, and I felt pretty good, but it was a little watery. I didn't know how many times I had read some of the descriptions, but the plot was still quite to my liking. I hope the author will work hard to update!

It's nice that the protagonist is cool-headed and the villain is not brainless either.

This book is quite good. The writing is also good. It looks like there will be a single female protagonist. But why are there so many people complaining about this book? And the content of the complaints makes me feel like I haven't read this book. The author is great, you won't make people jealous, right? [Face covering]

Such a good-looking online game novel only has a score of 7.6. Take a look at those online game novels with scores of 9+ and what kind of spicy writing style are they?

The writing is good, it is the best online game novel I have seen in 🍅[Learned]

It's okay, but the female characters in it are annoying.

What a great book, it may have been restricted, but the rating is so low. After reading this online game article, I can't read anything else at all, ugh

Recently I came across a rare good online game novel. I don't know why the rating was so low and I almost missed it.

I feel like the author's writing is pretty good, so I can keep reading the online games in Tomato, but can you please stop having affairs with several women all the time? . . The realistic superpower part of this book is a plus point and a minus point. I hope the author can balance it. . And it's a bit annoying that the variety shows and other aspects of this game already take up part of the text. It's really annoying to use it to update this. . . I updated two chapters in one day, but the result is a bit disappointing. Four stars is an encouragement. I hope the author writes better and better.

It's good. I hope Tang Xiaoyan has more roles. Now I feel that Jian Yulong is the heroine. Although Shen Yun said that he doesn't like her, her appearance frequency is really too high [face covering]

Judging from the level of Tomato's novels, it is very high-quality. [OK] The progress of the plot is too slow

In fact, the writing is quite good, there are no obvious poisonous points or logical faults, and the plot also has its own characteristics and connotations. I can only say that giving it a low star does not respect the author, and he still requires so much to read a free novel.

It's really nice and the plot design feels okay, but the plot line in reality is not very good. Now that I've seen more than 500, it still doesn't explain whether the game will really come to reality. There are many pitfalls that I still haven't filled in. Come on, author.

The plot is not cliche and the content is very exciting I saw more than 250 pictures in two days. I really can't stop. It's just too short and too watery. I hope the author will post more.

It's one of the best online games I've ever seen. I've been following it to this day. The protagonist kills decisively, has strength but is not brainless, the villain is also very intelligent, there is no bad plot, and the character creation is also very detailed. There is no one with good works. The author's updates are also very stable. It's really beautiful. I hope there will be more people and let the author write more every time. I simply can't get enough [blowing kisses]

The protagonist is not Long Aotian, and the descriptions of the supporting characters are also good and have their own characteristics. There may be a female protagonist at the moment, but the female protagonist is not a mindless accessory. It feels like she is in charge of her own business. Each character has its own characteristics. It is indeed a rare masterpiece in online game novels.

Great book, the rating shouldn't be so low. There is too little content in the real line, and too much equipment information description in the game line. Even so, a rating of 9.5 Is more than enough. I really like the character Jian Yulong.

The GM story setting is very good, and the plot is not distorted so far, but I always feel that it will be difficult to write later.

Although this novel is still within the framework of the original online game novel, the writing is good. The double-sided development of the game world and the real world has made the whole process ripples. Plus emotional description. Still very good.

It's so beautiful, the author's concept is very novel, the plot is compact, and there are many foreshadowings. All kinds of mythological stories and characters are fascinating and overwhelming! Seriously underrated! Begging for an update? ! ! !

Fashion is a cycle, and so is fiction. Although the plot is very old, the writing is good. It reminds me of the mood of reading novels in high school. I hope the author will update it quickly. It is not enough to read.

Both the game and reality are well written, and 1+1 is less than 1 is perfectly realized, so don't write any more.

The writing style, ideas, plot, character description, conciseness, this is a rare book. It is a fine novel for online game writers. Reminder +1

Very interesting. I have been following it for almost three years. I highly recommend half of the books.

Real four stars, very good in online games. Advantages: The plot is smooth, the plot is not cliché, and the places that should be enjoyable are quite enjoyable. Poisonous Points: The emotional scenes are a bit poisonous, but they are not long and can be ignored.

In fact, it's not impossible to have multiple female protagonists. The key is to focus on coordination in the game. You can refer to full-time masters. In addition, there are some difficult things in reality that can be filled in. This book is pretty good so far. The shaping of Huaibei and Jane is a bit interesting

I feel that the book is quite good. Some of the actual content is not very well written, and there are still some shortcomings. For example, the grades of some equipment are wrong, and the levels of some dungeons are wrong. However, the flaws are not hidden, and the content is still very interesting.