Blue Prison, My Football Is Very Reasonable

It's very interesting, please update. Since the protagonist was so powerful before and there were many people who were defeated by him, then he should be in the V team, with Ze Feng, not the Z team where Jie Shiyi is.

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It's pretty cool. I feel like my sister seems to have nothing to do except letting Shinten enter the blue lock? Many times I have written about Qianqie and Feng Le and the others interacting with the protagonist. Feng Le can understand it, but Qian Qie's words feel a bit forced (?) (The interaction feels like Nantong, but it feels quite evil to arrange the sister to be a couple) (If the proposal is to make the sister motivated to receive treatment, then it is constantly emphasized that they are a couple and there is nothing particularly close/the sister has leukemia, which is understandable. However, it feels like it is in name only, and it has more of a Nantong flavor, sister?) …(After thinking about it carefully, [note] the above are all personal feelings, please feel free to refute/based on personal feelings, it really doesn't make sense [explore]) There seems to be no particularly attractive plot? /Doxiaza

Can the protagonist be a gay man? Author

This book is not suitable for me. I like the feeling of breaking through the constraints brought by Brother Jie. The protagonist is a bit too strong and likes money. Although it is because they are childhood sweethearts lying on the hospital bed. The male and female protagonists combined cannot make up a pair of parents. However, I prefer the protagonist with parents. To become stronger, you do not have to lose your parents. It is also possible to write some twists to make the protagonist stronger.

How are you? Come on and code for me quickly.

It feels the same as the original, like a blue prison with changed characters.

This book brought me into contact with Blue Prison for the first time. It was well written and I hope the author will continue to work hard. Also, authors, don't think that no one will read your book. Aren't there still us? Mainly because this is too niche.

The character structure of the protagonist is quite clear, and the content is quite coherent. I like both of them. That's right, I remember the title of the book didn't say to deduct the pass key? But later on, the protagonist even had too many assists but no goals, so he was enlightened by Guapi.

Okay, this is my first time watching a Blue Prison fanfic

Why is this book rated so low?

Come on, I really like the fanfics you wrote.

Very good Blue Supervisor fanfic

There is very little blue prison fanfic, come on

It is understandable that I want to highlight the changes in the protagonist, but the effect is not very good. I hope the U20 game can crush it.

Mainly because Tomato is not as good-looking as other Blue Prison fics.

A good book with a blue lock

Very good characterization

It looks okay, but two chapters a day is too few. I suggest the author write more chapters.

Overall it's pretty good, I hope to continue working on it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

If you like this book about Blue Prison, you can try it! Be patient and read through the protagonist's growth period! It will be more exciting when the author updates it later

It's okay. People who have read the original work may find it a bit complicated, but they can get past it. The author continues to add more. [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's super good-looking, and Blue Lock fans support it unconditionally for no reason. Come on, author!

This book is okay and I can read it. Many books lose the desire to read after reading them. This book is okay.

This series of novels ranks second because there are only two

How many hours can I take a look? Let me check how many hours have passed. Are there more people than me?

Come on, it's wonderfully written.

It's very good. Come on, author [eating melon]

Just look at it for a few hours [laughing evilly]