Online Game: I'm Only a Tiny Bit Stronger Than You

(The author is advised to read it) Author, I have a few suggestions for you. First, there is a problem with the title of the book. The first impression your book title gave me was that I couldn't quite understand the genre of this novel. Many readers would subconsciously turn it away, so no one would read it at all. Second, the introduction contains no valuable information at all. In this case, not many people will read it, and too many people will basically quit after just one glance. In this way, you will basically have no traffic. (My personal experience) Third, the author, what you wrote in the first three chapters feels like a running account, because there is an unspoken rule of three golden chapters in online articles, so most people basically just take a few glances and leave. (The author has a tip for you. Leave more suspense in the first three chapters so that readers can continue reading. Once the first three chapters are written, there will basically be no problems later.) Fourth, author, I feel that you have not written an outline. The outline of an online article is very important. If you do not write it, most of it will be wasted. Your article gives me a scattered feeling. (Personal feeling) Fifth, I feel that the protagonist's character is very impatient. I hope that the protagonist can be more stable in the future, and that the protagonist can stop using bad words. This will not highlight the protagonist's character, but will make me disgusted. To sum up, the novel you wrote is pretty good for Xiaobai, but you lack experience. I hope my words will be of some help to you. Finally, I hope you will read it carefully and not follow my old path. (From the past of a desperate author.)

How can I post a picture? I can't post a picture. Recently, I can only write new books. I bought a tablet. It is more convenient to write new books. Because I used to write on my mobile phone and there was so much data. It was really a lot. The data was at least about 5,000 words. Because I remember it in detail, I basically had to write every day. I didn't write. You may forget it. I was writing this book when I was in school. I had something to do later and I haven't written it for a month. It's difficult to pick up this book again, so I'm going to open a new one. It's also an online game about Pokémon, and the data is just as rigorous. Anyway, if you make any mistakes, feel free to contact me. I'll check it and I will definitely correct it.

Author Chapter 79: You must know that military orders are like mountains in the army I am speechless. The author said that special forces are not troops. The screenshot is in the comment area.

No heroine [note]? No! When I see a woman acting coquettishly, I immediately want to take her to level up, for fear that she will not be ranked second.

Running account, so-so

The whole process is invincible. The author will update it faster. Is this a male or female channel?

Come on author haha

Well, it's pretty good-looking

The data is too fast and too big to be looked at carefully. Haven't the military police joined the game yet? The second guild order should be given to them, right?

It's good, but there's a lot of data.