A Brave Man Came to Visit Me and Was Shocked by My Skills.

I'm an author and it's not too much to give myself five stars [laughing evilly]

The reading is 4 stars and the writing is 3 stars. One star is because of the character Leng Ying. The other one star can be improved. It is not a big problem. It lies in the shaping of the character, such as growth. Reading novels is to watch the character's changes, personality, strength, training and other processes. His daily behavior is the same except for the same. What else is there? For example, experience, right? This can be written, after all, I prefer daily writing, so experience is very important. It adds interest to some more modern people's behavior patterns and thinking, and what kind of sparks are caused by the collision with swords and magic. Isn't it very eye-catching? Skills Is this aspect just born and not acquired through training? The current description of this aspect is not clear enough. I don't know if I didn't see it. Another point is the two children. I think it's good to be an observer. But I think it's useless to join the team. They have no sense of existence and they are still small children. This is Is it a side dish? The protagonist team is actually not easy to write about. When the proportion of who does what is too large, it is easy to get out of control. In addition, if the author's own writing ability is not outstanding, the character creation will be a failure. This article is still readable. I will have to go through Leng Ying's section before adding more comments.

It's okay, but I want to know the role of this duck. It's obviously not a combat pet, but there are so many plots.

Adventures in other worlds are still very interesting. There are less intrigues and more human touch. Most people should like such adventures. The disadvantage is that the protagonist has low emotional intelligence. Without domineering, he feels that there is no passion. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

Why aren't many people reading such a good book? [Chigua]

It's obviously very beautiful, but why are the ratings so low?

If it looks good, it should be praised and given great encouragement to the author. The whole book is humorous.

I quite like it. The design is pretty good and the interpersonal relationships could be better. Later, I saw that Leng Ying suddenly didn't show up in the middle of the show, which made me feel uncomfortable.

Shit, I just read the book, and then I clicked on some comments out of habit, and one of the comments was from me in July 2023. I said that the name of this book was a bit familiar. I don't know why it was deleted at that time, but I think it was because I randomly inserted a woman into a few chapters and then quit it. Sure enough, I quit when I added that girl before, and I quit now too.

No more? It's a bit less.

I really like it, that's why it's a new book,,վ^վ,,

This novel is awesome. . It's such a fairy tale. My junior high school niece may not be able to watch it, but she can still watch it if she's bored.

Come on, author, believe in your own ideas

Well enough. Nothing too bloody

Not bad, but not enough details. There are just too many poison points, the holes are not filled in, and some of the main characters are missing.

There are some poisonous points, but if you keep reading, you will find that it is a better novel.

This novel has the feel of an anime, just those island countries, those passionate anime

This kind of article in Tomato is quite good. Although there are many small flaws, it is still good. I like it.

Good-looking, love to see [admiration] There are no old routines, and the overall atmosphere is very relaxing and enjoyable. There is no invincible plot, nor is it the tone of the world's protagonist. Overall, the plot is cheerful. So it's very, very beautiful (♥∀♥)

It's really good-looking. There's not so much intrigue, just simple daily adventures, which makes it comfortable to watch.

Good books need no words If you say ten stars, then ten stars

Pretty good, more everyday

It feels pretty good,

I think it's okay

It's good, but the writing is too bland.

Not bad~ It has the instant feeling of animation~ [laughing and crying]

It's not bad. I'll support it with five stars. I hope it won't end badly.

It looks very comfortable and has nothing poisonous about it.

It's pretty, it's my type

It's so good. I guarantee that everyone will learn from the protagonist so that there won't be a book shortage.