Rebirth********

Everything written so far is pretty good. Suggestion: Doesn't the protagonist have three puppets? One subdues Gao Qiqiang and joins the underworld, one goes to the city government, and the other becomes a policeman (just a suggestion). They blossom into many branches and completely control the entire Jinghai City. In fact, there is another thing I want to ask the author, which is how do you plan to write about Gao Qiqiang? After all, if you really ask the male protagonist to subdue him, it would not be good to be a subordinate (after all, Brother Qiang has such a high personality); but it is impossible to ask the male protagonist to assist him. Even if he is a puppet, readers will give negative reviews. So what are you going to do? Or like Zhang Lidong, support Gao Qiqiang. But promise me, the author, don't use the system (for example: 100% loyalty pills) when it comes to Gao Qiqiang.

I'll be so shameless and give you a four-star [blowing kiss] [asking for attention]!

Lin Sen's body and Lin Ruoshi's consciousness, do they count as self-greening [what]

Not bad, but I suggest that the protagonist should be 18 years old at the beginning

Very good, I finally found it after looking for it for a long time. Holy shit, I was really poisoned. The male protagonist is so young, and the woman obviously fell in love with one, but she forced him to fall in love with another. Written in this way, more than one woman has done this. I'm really convinced.

It looks good, but the author is too slow to update [angry][angry][angry]

I give you five stars, I really like the main character who is awesome. But it needs to be improved, speed update The protagonist supports Gao Qiqiang and marries Gao Qilan, so he feels happy

Good luck to the author!

Very beautiful, I like it very much [send heart] [send heart]

Very nice, come on

I hope the author can finish this book well, thank you author

I give you five stars, I just love how awesome the male protagonist is.

This book is good, I just want to read this type of book

I've read a lot of books, and yours is a high-quality one. I support you.

Very good, 10,000 times better than the books I have read before

Is the protagonist a good guy or a bad guy?

Very nice, support.

Five stars, okay, but it's a bit short. Please do your best to write, it's not enough to read at all.