[NBA Sports Passionate System]
Ye Hao, a down-and-out coach in his previous life, traveled back in time to become a substitute player at Arizona State University and started a journey of sign-in and cheating.
Xiaoshuai: So what if he is better than me? Wait until I create a trumpet and defeat him...
Harden: My happiest thing is winning the NCAA championship with Ye Hao in college, even though he just knocked me out again
James: You know, Ye Hao and I are brothers. We are very suitable to play together.
Kobe Bryant: Ye Hao said that being a helicopter is not conducive to giving birth to a son. I will never ride one again in this life.
Dream Chaser Green: Please don't retire, okay? I kneel down for you!
When he entered the NBA, the entire basketball world ushered in the next "Basketball God"
Reader comments
The character description is different from reality, or even opposite. Author, can't you check it first? For example, some players in NBA games are easy to get into trouble, explode at the slightest moment, are bloodthirsty and rude, etc. However, in the author's current novel, they are gentle and humble, and considerate of others, even their opponents... If you don't understand this person's character, can you not write about this aspect?
There were too many mistakes. For example, the protagonist had already scored more than 20 points in the first half of the game, and then continued to play in the second half. At the end of the game, the protagonist had 20 points... What the hell is this?
There are also unclear expressions and descriptions, which means that he did not write clearly what should be written in detail, and he listed a lot of things that did not need to be written.
Don't use water just for water's sake. You won't be able to retain people. No matter how much you write, it's of no use. To be honest, you should learn from those on other platforms. They also write NBA novels and can write more than three million words. They are not watery and can attract people, but yours is shriveled.
It's so fake. He's 2.08 Meters tall and has a 20% success rate in smashing the ball against the empty blue. He's poisoned.
There are too many typos, making many sentences illogical and incomprehensible.
Just average! Not cool enough!
Which dunking skill is really disgusting when it comes out?
The character description is different from reality, or even opposite. Author, can't you check it first? For example, some players in NBA games are easy to get into trouble, explode at the slightest moment, are bloodthirsty and rude, etc. However, in the author's current novel, they are gentle and humble, and considerate of others, even their opponents... If you don't understand this person's character, can you not write about this aspect? There were too many mistakes. For example, the protagonist had already scored more than 20 points in the first half of the game, and then continued to play in the second half. At the end of the game, the protagonist had 20 points... What the hell is this? There are also unclear expressions and descriptions, which means that he did not write clearly what should be written in detail, and he listed a lot of things that did not need to be written. Don't use water just for water's sake. You won't be able to retain people. No matter how much you write, it's of no use. To be honest, you should learn from those on other platforms. They also write NBA novels and can write more than three million words. They are not watery and can attract people, but yours is shriveled.
It's so fake. He's 2.08 Meters tall and has a 20% success rate in smashing the ball against the empty blue. He's poisoned.
There are too many typos, making many sentences illogical and incomprehensible.
Just average! Not cool enough!
Which dunking skill is really disgusting when it comes out?
It's okay, but there are a lot of typos