Basketball: I Became a Superstar Through Sign-In Check-Ins

The character description is different from reality, or even opposite. Author, can't you check it first? For example, some players in NBA games are easy to get into trouble, explode at the slightest moment, are bloodthirsty and rude, etc. However, in the author's current novel, they are gentle and humble, and considerate of others, even their opponents... If you don't understand this person's character, can you not write about this aspect? There were too many mistakes. For example, in the first half of the game, the protagonist had already scored more than 20 points, and then continued to play in the second half. At the end of the game, the protagonist scored 20 points... What the hell? There were also unclear expressions and narratives, which meant that he did not write clearly what should be written in detail, and he left out a lot of things that did not need to be written. Don't use water just for water's sake. You won't be able to retain people. No matter how much you write, it's of no use. To be honest, you should learn from those on other platforms. They also write NBA novels and can write more than three million words. They are not watery and can attract people, but yours is shriveled.

It's so fake. He's 2.08 Meters tall and has a 20% success rate in smashing the ball against the empty blue. He's poisoned.

Just average! Not cool enough!

There are too many typos, making many sentences illogical and incomprehensible.

Which dunking skill is really disgusting when it comes out?

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos