After Our Fake Romance Turned Real

So cool!! It's actually a double 🌟!! I can actually see it in tomatoes! Congratulations to the author!! The rhythm is very fast and sweet. There is a misunderstanding in the middle part, but it is not clear whether the kiss is a kiss or not. Everyone thinks it is an optical illusion 😢

It's great to watch. This overlord is very different. He treats his lover so gently, and the protagonist Shou is also gentle. I like this setting very much. I just hope that there will be a story with a baby (˵¯͒¯͒˵). The long-lasting love between the two is the most real.

It's okay, but I have a few suggestions. First of all, there is the issue of loopholes. The article does not explain clearly. When did Wei Jia know that Buyu was pregnant? Who are the people Wei Jia mentioned in the extra story? The positions of the various forces are not clearly introduced. More holes need to be filled in. Then there is the issue of writing style. After reading the entire text, you can feel that the storyline is very good. Occasionally, some details are not complete enough. You can add more modifiers, describe and introduce it clearly, and the writing style will be improved to a higher level. Next comes the character setting. Buyu's character setting is perfect, but Wei Jia is not complete, and some of his emotional processes are too hasty. Understanding him is like a layer of fog. I hope that the character image can be set more clearly. The short story is very well written. Come on, madam, I will read your books in the future 🤭 Ah, yes, I almost forgot, neither Gong nor Shou has a long mouth. It makes me feel so uncomfortable. It would be nice if the reasons for the misunderstanding could be explained more clearly. It would be better to write the changes in the characters' love in a step-by-step manner. Moreover, Gong never talked about love in the early stage, like a scumbag. If it were me, I wouldn't believe that he loves me. This is also a small problem. Of course, overall it is still very good. Come on, big brother

It's a good read. I finally found a book on Tomato that suits my taste. I like this kind of short book, hahahahahaha. I like it very much, but I feel that there are a lot of things about Mr. Wei that are not very clear. Maybe this is unavoidable in short stories. Overall, I still like it very much.

Looks good, but a bit short. But the storyline is very interesting. A family of three and one catkin are really happy. ❤️ Although Wei Jia and Buyu don't have a complete home, they gave each other a home. I wish you all the best ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

This kind of writing really makes me excited!!!! The author writes very well, why is the rating so low?[][][][]

The short story is good. Anyway, it's very interesting. She is very gentle. She loves her very much. There are some conflicts in the middle, but it doesn't affect her life. She has a child and her life is very happy.

I'll give it five stars. It's pretty good. Can the author publish a book about Wei Ni and Liu Xu? I don't know if it's possible 😳

It looks good, it would be nice to be more detailed.

It's really short [laughs and cries] It's okay, but it's really short