After Having a Fake Show with the Boss

So cool! ! It's actually a double 🌟! ! I can actually see it in tomatoes! Congratulations to the author! ! The rhythm is very fast and sweet. There is a misunderstanding in the middle part, but it is not clear whether the kiss is a kiss or not. Everyone thinks it is an optical illusion [crying]

It's great to watch. This overlord is very different. He treats his lover so gently, and the protagonist Shou is also gentle. I like this setting very much. I just hope that there will be a story with a baby (˵¯͒¯͒˵). The long-lasting love between the two is the most real.

It's a good read. I finally found a book on Tomato that suits my taste. I like this kind of short book, hahahahahaha. I like it very much, but I feel that there are a lot of things about Mr. Wei that are not very clear. Maybe this is unavoidable in short stories. Overall, I still like it very much.

It's okay, but I have a few suggestions. First of all, there is the issue of loopholes. The article does not explain clearly. When did Wei Jia know that Buyu was pregnant? Who are the people Wei Jia mentioned in the extra story? The positions of the various forces are not clearly introduced. More holes need to be filled in. Then there is the issue of writing style. After reading the entire text, you can feel that the storyline is very good. Occasionally, some details are not complete enough. You can add more modifiers, describe and introduce it clearly, and the writing style will be improved to a higher level. Next comes the character setting. Buyu's character setting is perfect, but Wei Jia is not complete, and some of his emotional processes are too hasty. Understanding him is like a layer of fog. I hope that the character image can be set more clearly. The short story is very well written. Come on, madam, I will read your books in the future [laughing] Ah, yes, I almost forgot, neither Gong nor Shou has a long mouth. It makes me feel so uncomfortable. It would be nice if the reasons for the misunderstanding could be explained more clearly. It would be better to write the changes in the characters' love in a step-by-step manner. Moreover, Gong never talked about love in the early stage, like a scumbag. If it were me, I wouldn't believe that he loves me. This is also a small problem. Of course, overall it is still very good. Come on, big brother

It's really short [laughs and cries] It's okay, but it's really short

It looks good, it would be nice to be more detailed.

This kind of writing really makes me excited! ! ! ! The author writes very well, why is the rating so low?[][][][]

The short story is good. Anyway, it's very interesting. She is very gentle. She loves her very much. There are some conflicts in the middle, but it doesn't affect her life. She has a child and her life is very happy.

Looks good, but a bit short. But the storyline is very interesting. A family of three and one catkin are really happy. [Love] Although Wei Jia and Buyu don't have a complete home, they gave each other a home. I wish you all the best [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

I'll give it five stars. It's pretty good. Can the author publish a book about Wei Ni and Liu Xu? I don't know if it's possible [shy]

Oh my god, it's so sweet, so sweet, so sweet, I'm looking at you to death [shy]

It's really good, although there are some places where I feel like it doesn't connect and seems like it's missing a bit. But it's rare to see this kind of subject matter on this platform. It has a somewhat relaxed atmosphere, which makes people feel that it is natural for them to get together in the end. It does not make me feel deliberate [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I look forward to the author's next book being completed soon [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

This is a very good article, you can follow it, but it is too short. Although the article is over, the story of the two of them is not over yet.

Cry to death, why is it so short [cry][cry]

Very nice, read it quickly

It would be nice if they could explain more about kissing goodbye and pregnancy. Overall, it's pretty good.

I'm very happy to see the ending but also very sad [almost crying]

I like it very much, but the length is a bit short

I love it so much, I love it so much, I feel like a sparrow is small but has all the internal organs.

It's very cozy, a bit short, and I feel like some of the holes could be filled in better. Overall, it's okay.

Short sweet articles, perfect for people like me who like sweet articles but have no patience.

Nice! It's just too short! Cookies [top post]

Oh my god, it looks great, but why is the rating so low?

It's very short, but the content is quite rich, and the author is Tomato and his writing style is pretty good.

The short story is really short. I feel like some parts are not explained clearly, but overall it's okay.

It's really beautiful [shy] [shy], why are there so few people [what]

It looks good, but not many people see it.

It looks good, but I feel like there should be more plot behind it, but it's over [face covering]

Like like like! I finished reading Chapter 28 very quickly and it was not enough!

It's good-looking, but it's too short and not enough to watch.