大帝之下我帝境，大帝之上我开挂

This is the first book by a cute new author, and I would like to give a [heartfelt] message to all readers.

It's pretty good-looking, quite interesting, much funnier than some 9-point movies. Although it's a bit of a no-brainer, the rating shouldn't be so low, right?

I won't talk about the previous part, it's a classic system cool article. The last part is well written and unexpected. Dreams always come to nothing, even the most wonderful story is just a big dream. Lin Fan could at least return to reality, find love, and continue his life. And we can only struggle in this world. We have no way of knowing what the fantasy world looks like. What to do! Thousands of years pass by in an instant like a white horse, not to mention that a mortal's life span is less than a hundred years. Greed, anger, ignorance, lack of desire, joys and sorrows, the waxing and waning of clouds and clouds, are all reduced to nothing at the moment when consciousness dissipates. How can we come to the other side to talk about it! There is only endless darkness and nothingness, just like before our birth and after our passing. The past and present are like dreams, never dreamed, only old joys and new resentments. At the same time, Yu Hao sighed at the night view of Huanglou. It was so heart-wrenching when Zhang Liuyi disappeared, and she still can't get over it now. Even though she imagined it based on the real employees, for the people in the dream, the dream is reality! She herself did not feel that she was an illusory shadow. It's hard to calm down! The words spoken in her dreams were true and illusory. How could she forget the time she spent with Lin Fan and her love for Lin Fan? How could they be illusions! After she learned that she was an illusion, she still loved Lin Fan until the last moment. Fifty years of stability passed by in a hurry. The moment the dream was broken, Lin Fan returned to reality, but Zhang Liuyi disappeared forever. Although her love was controlled by Lin Fan, there was no trace of hypocrisy in it. Lin Fan was the meaning of her existence, but she only existed in his dreams. Woohoo, hehe! I burst into tears when I wrote the book, not knowing what to say.

It's well written, please keep updating. . The excitement was gone just as I saw it. The 7 major families gathered dozens of emperors and prepared to fight.

It's really well written. An ordinary person met so many friends, siblings, and even loved ones during the decision of life and death. In the end, it turned out that it was just a dream, but the bond of life and death after so many years of getting along has long been established in the bottom of my heart. Facing the illusion that everything gradually dissipated, but bravely resisted, Ye Fan was once confused, hesitant, and sinking, but he chose to fight when he was at a loss. Even if the ending cannot be changed, his story is worth remembering. In fact, when I saw the system talking about how everything was actually just a dream, I no longer wanted to read it. After all, among so many works, there are almost no excellent works with dream endings, and all the efforts made by the protagonist seemed to be just a joke. In this book "The Great Emperor..." (Writing omitted), the author uses very excellent techniques to vividly portray everything about the protagonist. Although the ending cannot be changed, the protagonist's experience in the dream is real and not meaningless. And at the end of the full text, Ye Fan and Zhang Yiliu meet again, which makes people wonder: is it reality, or is it a new dream. I am very grateful to the author for bringing us this article. It is refreshing but also full of connotation. It is really a rare good article. Maybe he was never Ye Fan, he was Ye Xuanqing, the ancestor of Zixiao! I hope the author can continue his efforts and bring you more and better works! [Love] In fact, after reading the ending, the corners of my eyes were slightly moist. I would like to thank the author again for bringing us such an excellent work.

Yes, there is nothing poisonous about Shuangshuang's novel. It has a single female protagonist, but the whole novel does not revolve around the female protagonist. You can read [Read More]

Overall, it's okay. The transformation of the protagonist Lin Xuanqing from a male protagonist who cheats the system to an outcast in the world of sick cultivators is really unexpected. When I saw the infinite world view, I thought it would be the old routine of the male protagonist fighting the system in the end. I didn't expect this twist to be true and I was surprised. In fact, the slight shortcomings are that the transition between overlapping world views is a bit stiff, the mid-term plot advances too quickly, and the description of details is not enough. But the overall novel is like a Tao, like a dream, and I personally feel it is remarkable. The open ending at the end is pretty good, 80%.

This book is really amazing Different from ordinary cool articles, the front is cool and the later is cool But the idea behind it is profound, and the ending is even more unforgettable Overall, I wouldn't recommend it if you just want a mindless fun. If you want to take a closer look, you can give it a try The rest of it will be very poisonous and very dangerous. If you can avoid it, don't read it after Chapter 211.

To be honest, it's pretty good, very good. What makes me feel it deserves 5 stars is that it's not written as a "cool" novel like most of the current novels. Many books nowadays are really about the male protagonist being a sperm. As long as it's a woman, he will fall in love with each one he meets, and he will keep the harem after he falls in love. I really don't understand why some people like to read this kind of thing. It just feels a bit short, hahahaha, and the ending is not too rushed. It's just right [Love] [Love]

In fantasy online novels that are highly formulaic, the author inevitably adopts some common routines, but these routines are not boring and colorless, because the author still has a certain attitude towards the routines themselves, so this novel is not just a world with one routine after another, and it is upgraded one after another, which makes people's interest in reading mediocre. On the contrary, the author has a lot of humor in these routines, and incorporates one joke after another like a classic: at the end, the author completely breaks away from the routine, abandoning the comfort of fantasy and turning to allusions to reality: modern society is too heavy, and people have to seek relief from the dream-like world: games, movies, books... But dreams always wake up one day, the protagonist Lin Fan's struggle and final relief... All kinds of thoughts are not the psychology of most ordinary people. All in all, the end of the book can be described as the finishing touch, which makes people feel refreshed among all the similar online articles. It can also be regarded as a refreshing stream that makes people return to reality, think, and examine themselves.

This is the second book I've read in a long time that I strongly support. The whole text is clear in ideas, funny and funny to the sadness at the end, and the twist at the end is very good. There is nothing bad worth commenting on, good! Good! ! Good! ! ! This is my review of this book. My book review will not give any spoilers, it is a good read, you can read it, and it is worth reading.

Perfect ending, you have literary talent! The fireworks in the night sky gradually cooled down, the smell of gunpowder and the fading light fell to the ground, the incandescent lights, the ward and the young man who turned to look outside the ward. God among gods

Plot depth: 5+1 The plot is clearly organized, from time travel to the system to the final dream. Plot fluency: 2. It's okay to play the repetitive routine a few times, but it's not that interesting if you play it too much. The dream collapse in the last paragraph was intended to portray a desperate atmosphere. Instead of achieving the effect, it was too complicated. World view description: 5 A very interesting and complete world view, interspersed with the heavenly realm, the ancient world, the chaotic world, the dream world and the real world. Characterization: 3 High homogeneity of characters, almost no characterization Overall: 4 system + time travel + invincible flow. There is a huge helplessness hidden behind the brainless coolness. There is another good twist in the ending.

The beginning and end echo the refreshing story in the middle. It is also very interesting, and the ending is also very deep. It is not only enjoyable, but it is not just a superficial story without depth. It may be that the author's early writing ideas are different from the final ending. The connection in the middle may be a bit tough, but in the end it is still very coherent. In the end, the sublimation theme is indeed tearful, but it also leaves the suspense of maybe a dream within a dream, which attracts endless reverie. To summarize and comment, I can only say that as a fan of novels, among the dozens of novels I have read, this is one of the best among the novels about cultivating immortals, time travel novels, and system novels. From the pretentious writing ideas at the beginning, to the coherence of the later stories, and to the final empathy. I think this is a novel in which the author did not write an outline, but instead wrote it out bit by bit. I have read a lot of novels of this type, and many of them are unfinished or difficult to follow up, leading to the collapse of the worldview in the end, and the reputation of the novel has also declined. The author also quit quickly, and it ended quickly at Chapter 273. If I continue to write this novel, the novel about the collapse of the worldview ends in a sensational way. I can only say that it is very beautiful.

I am quite satisfied, the overall structure is clear, the process is good, and the ending is also reversed. The system is also relatively new, so it's hard to reveal too much, but it's quite nice.

The content is sometimes false and sometimes true, the sense of value is clear, it seems refreshing but full of enthusiasm, and the ending is a masterpiece that will make people unforgettable for a long time! ! ! [Almost crying][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is ordinary and the plot is old-fashioned, but there is one bright spot: the ending and the last few paragraphs are good. Although it is still generally in the mold of traditional cool novels, there is a little innovation in the last few paragraphs. As for whether this innovation is a failure or a highlight, it depends on your own preferences. For those who simply pursue "coolness", the latter part will seem a bit disappointing, but those who plan to find something from it will like this feeling in the latter part. Generally speaking, it's okay. There are no major flaws. It's a matter of opinion. If you just want to be happy, you don't need to read the last few paragraphs. If you are like me and want to have emotional resonance while being happy, then this book is worth reading. I am a poetry writer, and my standards may be relatively high, but this book is not really eye-catching, but at least it is like a serious novel, with a beginning, development, climax, and end.

The author should like to watch movies, want to use writing skills to integrate them, want to innovate, and watch the whole movie. It is at best a cool novel. The logical level of the characters needs to be further improved, the details are not perfect, and the rough jade also needs to be carefully crafted and slowly carved.

It's good-looking, there are places where you can laugh, and the ending is also amazing and tear-jerking. At first glance, I thought it was a routine novel, but when I saw the ending, I found that the author still had his own ideas, but it was still a little slow in some places, and the overall flaws can't be concealed.

It's very good. I felt like I didn't want to read it after I saw it half way through. Then I picked it up again last night and finished it straight away. I saw someone say it was not finished before, but I thought it was not finished after reading it. The setting is quite good. I felt like crying inexplicably when I saw the ending. It felt really touching to see old friends again after going through so much. Although there are some shortcomings, it is still very good in general. The advantage of such a length is that it is not easy to write. For example, the "Taojie Tianxia" I read before has written thousands of chapters. I really have no interest in watching the author keep nesting dolls. This book has good control. The character creation is also good and very interesting. Many people say that the protagonist is too cowardly and has been escaping. But I think most people will be like this after experiencing this. They want to return to reality, but they can't bear to say goodbye to everyone, especially those who are as flesh and blood as real people. I think if it were me, my heart would have collapsed. Also, the emotional scene with Zhang Liuyi was well written. I find it a little baffling when written by other authors, but this one was well written. It was just a bit gross and made me blush. But thinking of such a happy scene, I also fantasized about having such a person by my side. . . Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing such a good book. I wish the author will continue to work hard and create greater glory in the next book.

I think the ending is quite good, not only it's not a bad ending but it's the finishing touch. Although it was fun in the early stage, it was mindless and the routines were mostly the same, making it a bit boring. On the contrary, the chapters after "The Other Side" are a bit interesting and have a bit of depth. Some people feel that the ending is a bit cruel. With so many familiar faces disappearing, it is inevitable to feel a little lonely. .

This is the most thoughtful and refreshing article I have ever read.

It's a cool story from beginning to end. The protagonist kills decisively, but is criticized for being too cruel. For example, after the gods repent, they still have to kill them all. In fact, this means that the bad guys turn around and are safe, so don't they need to be punished? The author's writing style is good, and the plot has ups and downs. In today's era where online articles are everywhere, he has written his own style. The ending is a bit unconventional, but it is still worth watching. Overall, this is a must-read article. In this way, the sun, moon, mountains and rivers are still there, gentlemen, go slowly! See you in the next work!

The ending is really unexpected and deep. It puts a decadent person in a dream as a metaphor for being addicted to fantasy and unwilling to wake up. Finally, he breaks through the barriers of fantasy, returns to reality, and is determined to start a new life. It is really good.

The ending is good, it gives people the feeling of being in a dream but not waking up, as if dream and reality are blurred.

This is the first time I have read a system-friendly article in its entirety, and I feel it is okay. The good thing about this book is that it's not that long, and it doesn't follow the matryoshka routine of cultivating immortality. I just listened to the book, and I finished it in two days. In terms of plot, the showdown occurs in the middle and late stages of the novel, and I can't stop laughing after watching it. It's a pity that the ending is a little rushed, and some parts are not explained clearly. You need to think about it carefully based on the context.

It's a dream, but when you wake up from the dream, it's a portrait of the life of a person at the bottom, come on

The way it ends takes this book to another level. It is not a time travel at all, but a dream created by oneself, which just explains why there are so many "coincidences" in the past. No matter what the protagonist does, it will develop in a direction that is beneficial to him. Although the writing is average, I really like the concept

It's so beautiful, I have nothing to say. The last few pictures made me watch them over and over again.

I finished reading it at 3 o'clock in the morning. The latter part was very novel to me, but it was also uncomfortable to read😣. It's a good article. I hope there will be additional chapters.