As an NPC, It Makes Sense for Me to Give You 100 Million Points.

Not bad (although there are some flaws, but the last time I got stuck in Tomato and I typed a string of big words, it didn't come out so I didn't post it [crying])

The book is still good, but the two worlds are too scattered, and some readers may not like it. However, this is good, at least I don't follow the crowd. When I read the follow-up, the number of words is still too few. I look forward to the collision of the two worlds.

I've seen the latest chapter. Summary: It's readable, mixed with ancient styles, and contains the author's own things, group portraits, and the audience may not be particularly wide. It has some minor flaws but is readable. At least it is considered a rare masterpiece in Tomato. The writing style may have a better retention rate for readers who like this kind of ancient style. If you just want to watch The Fourth Natural Disaster, you have to wait until the plot reaches the public beta stage. The previous chapters may not be particularly suitable for readers who just want to watch the players. Although the author has pushed the public beta time forward one year, there are not many players in the game now. Then there is the plot. The author writes more about group portraits. You may not feel that it is big at first, but the more you go on, the more you can feel it. The control is actually pretty good. Those who are interested in group portraits can consider adding it to their bookshelves. Then about the emotional scenes, I have to say something bad. The emotional scenes related to the protagonist are too blunt. I don't care whether there is a female protagonist or how many female protagonists. However, the emotional scenes related to the two sisters related to the protagonist were really not well written. Of course, it may also be because the author was influenced by some people who kept saying that he did not want a female protagonist. There are some spoilers below………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Personally, I don't think the author can't write emotional scenes, at least it's like the blacksmith's emotional line. Although the blacksmith only has a little plot, that little plot actually not only establishes the blacksmith but also enhances his sense of story. Although he doesn't mention a word of love, his every word and every action reveals his love for his deceased wife. There is also the pairing of scholar Zheng Xiu and Luo Hua Wu. Although it does not describe how they fell in love with each other or their emotional details, and even before the scholar appeared, he was not even a marginal character. However, from the early stage when Zheng Xiu cared about her appearance to when the scholar died, she no longer cared so much about the scars on her face and felt her sincere love for the scholar. The scholar didn't write much, but the plot before his death revealed the scholar's affection. Even the part about the protagonist and the eldest sister when the bandits broke into the city is not bad, but the meaty part is really hard to describe in one sentence... Yes, I only mentioned this just to talk about the meaty part. Of course, it is also possible that the author cannot write the kind of delicate and gradual emotional changes. Finally, there are some pitfalls that I noticed (for the convenience of distinguishing the three worlds, they are called Blue Star, Seeking World, and Academy World): The problem of time flow in three worlds; The connection between the three worlds; The origin of the Prison Suppression Jue and its connection with the underworld; Why do people in the seeking world seem to have generally higher blessings than those in the academy world? There are three special color weapons: black, silver, and gold. It is currently known that black is the "ten most" and gold is an immortal weapon. Silver is still unknown; The group of people in the Xundao game don't seem to be from the same world as the protagonist's previous life; Why did Niluan Palace rescue him on the grounds of Senior Brother Bai Shaoyang? Was it because one of his senior brothers was really in Niluan Palace? Or does Niluan Palace know that there is such a protagonist who has practiced in prison like Bai Shaoyang? The reason for the protagonist's resurrection; The player login mechanism seems to be different from the mechanism for entering the seeking world in the academy world? Maybe the sword fairy mentioned in the storybook at the beginning has become an immortal?

It can be a relatively novel book, and the rating does not represent the upper limit of the book.

A good book

Good writing, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Not bad, quite interesting.

Strange, very interesting, why is the rating so low?

Generally speaking it's not bad! This score is a bit low!

The author is great, I believe you can do it, you must stick to it, don't be a eunuch

I like this kind of subject matter, it suits my taste [you taste it carefully]

The novel is well written. The author has a promising future. He will update it quickly. I wish I had your talent, Mad.

Overall it's pretty good, but when I read Chapter 105, I felt like I had forgotten who the protagonist was. I hadn't seen him appear in a long time. They were all other people's stories like extras. They didn't upgrade or come out, they just hid them. There was basically no drama for the protagonist!

It's really well written, good luck to the author

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Good book, well written.

Come on, come on, come on!

It's pretty, but a little lacking.

The reviews are pretty good

This book has quite a bit of potential

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's not bad, but the author is too short, and you don't update much each time. [Cover face]

We still need to work hard and improve our writing skills.

Good-looking, fresh plot

The protagonist is cutting the grass without eradicating the roots.

A book with nothing to say is a good book, but unfortunately it is not popular. I'm really afraid of eunuchs

I hope there is a female protagonist

Why can't we write about the game world properly?

It's slightly flawed, but it's okay