Naruto: Finding Myself a Pocket-Sized Old Master
火影：给自己找个随身老爷爷
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 339k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
161Chapters
134Reads
8.4Score
15Listens
132.8kReads · all time
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Reader comments 52
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The writing is very good, and there are no big blockages or low points. The only drawback is that there is a bit too much water. But for free novels, water is not a big problem. It is more like a benefit of the supplementary setting. For paid novels, it is a fatal problem. So overall, the writing is still very good. If the author can continue to maintain it, it may break. It should be very possible if there are no major problems until nine o'clock or more, but some people hate nonsense, but for free novels, although you can talk nonsense, you can't have too much nonsense. I suggest the author to use less nonsense. Although it can complete the setting, but not too much, but overall this book is already a very good book, so the author, please don't be a eunuch.
Still good. The one downstairs didn't look good. At least more than half of the Naruto stories. A fly in the ointment. That is. This article is somewhat developed in its early stages.
This is the best and most enjoyable Naruto fanfic I have seen so far. It breaks away from the original plot without deviating from the original plot line and time. It combines elements of martial arts internal skills and can solve the chakra problem logically. It is quite good.
I don't know when I can rate it.
Okay, more thoughtful.
Very good, the subject matter is very attractive, and the system collision is not too frustrating, but the level of improvement is too large, mainly because the protagonist's purpose is very clear, immortality! All actions are for self-improvement, and there will be no NT plot. Kill whoever is unhappy, and be a licking dog to see who is happy. If you really want to lick, you are forced to lick, which is better than your own existence.
Five stars, very nice
Yes, this book successfully attracted my attention, keep up the good work (encouragement from a 13-year-old bookworm) [smile]
It's okay. It depends on when the original plot will be changed. If the original plot is not the original plot, it won't make sense to write a fanfic. After all, people only read fanfics if they have regrets.
A well-written book with no cheats, which is great. It's like a breath of fresh air in Tomato.