Fool Uncle Snake and Cultivate Immortality Together

Still good. The one downstairs didn't look good. At least more than half of the Naruto stories. A fly in the ointment. That is. This article is somewhat developed in its early stages.

The writing is very good, and there are no big blockages or low points. The only drawback is that there is a bit too much water. But for free novels, water is not a big problem. It is more like a benefit of the supplementary setting. For paid novels, it is a fatal problem. So overall, the writing is still very good. If the author can continue to maintain it, it may break. It should be very possible if there are no major problems until nine o'clock or more, but some people hate nonsense, but for free novels, although you can talk nonsense, you can't have too much nonsense. I suggest the author to use less nonsense. Although it can complete the setting, but not too much, but overall this book is already a very good book, so the author, please don't be a eunuch.

This is the best and most enjoyable Naruto fanfic I have seen so far. It breaks away from the original plot without deviating from the original plot line and time. It combines elements of martial arts internal skills and can solve the chakra problem logically. It is quite good.

I don't know when I can rate it.

Okay, more thoughtful.

Five stars, very nice

Very good, the subject matter is very attractive, and the system collision is not too frustrating, but the level of improvement is too large, mainly because the protagonist's purpose is very clear, immortality! All actions are for self-improvement, and there will be no NT plot. Kill whoever is unhappy, and be a licking dog to see who is happy. If you really want to lick, you are forced to lick, which is better than your own existence.

It's okay. It depends on when the original plot will be changed. If the original plot is not the original plot, it won't make sense to write a fanfic. After all, people only read fanfics if they have regrets.

Yes, this book successfully attracted my attention, keep up the good work (encouragement from a 13-year-old bookworm) [smile]

A well-written book with no cheats, which is great. It's like a breath of fresh air in Tomato.

Yes, the author's imagination is really big. This is the first time I see such a Naruto fanfic. I support it with five stars.

Not bad, very pretty

Excellent product, full of imagination and ideas,

You must trust the light author

At the moment, it sounds very funny, and there is nothing poisonous about it. Come on, author. The previous work on the study of the business layout was very good, and later when Konoha was involved, I felt like I was starting to ramble on.

It's very good. Why is the score only so low? I think some of the scores above 9 are not as good as this one.

The author wrote it with intention. After reading too many messy things, I finally have a good book.

It can be good-looking, so write it quickly, but it's not good enough [laughing]

Perfect logic and very good Naruto story.

Okay, okay, it's a fanfic that doesn't lick Konoha or bloodline. I hope to grow up quickly, beat up the Sage of Six Paths, and then let Naruto practice immortality and get rid of the influence of Asura's chakra.

Very nice, you can see the latest in one go

Her hands are like catkins, her skin is like gelatin, her collar is like a cricket grub, her teeth are like a gourd rhinoceros, her head is like a furry eyebrow, her smile is pretty, and her beautiful eyes are looking forward to it. I love Aunt Snake.

It's still very good. The more you watch it, the more interesting it becomes. The logic is very clear and the plot is novel.

Very exciting content. Cultivation of immortality and conspiracy theories are very interesting [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Hahahahahahahahahaha

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Very good, no system, self-cultivation, five stars given

Ok ok ok ok ok

There are a lot of fantastic ideas in many sections

The writing on Naruto is quite good.